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Clones of the mc, badly written villains, poor conclusions to important arcs, little emotional depth, zero intelligence and forethought from the mc which directly impacts his ability to solve problems before they escalate leading to said problems continuing to grow unempeded, and a female lead who is just a copy and paste of the mc. What can I say, this story is a train wreck.
The story is good overall, I really enjoyed up to this point. However there are some pretty bad decisions later on in the book that I personally can’t agree with. So although I believe in creative freedom of authors I am dropping at this point. If you do wish to read this book just know that villains are left to become bigger and bigger problems constantly with our supposed super genius MC never changing his ways.
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honestly speaking I didn't read all of so I can judge but the thing that made me stop reading was when Melissa joined the hero course and had an iron man suit made for idont get me wrong I would love to see her character develop but it happened way too fast and made me think of how the mc advantage was taken away from him up to where i read the mc made a lot of the original mha problems and character drevelopment erased what was even the point to continue read when iIdidnt have anything to look forward to that i know
Overall this Story is well done, but imo it should have ended after the fight with AFO, because after that the author started to roughly implement Marvel Storylines into the MHA Universe. example: some OC building Ultron, AFO's Doctor getting DNA from Tony to get Clones or the Super Soldier Serum, which btw he only got because other Characters became stupid for no reason :/ TL;DR: Story was good, until it got milked for more content.
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This fanfic is really good overall until the author decides to put clone BS. Basically Tony IQ and his nanites suit are limited by author intelligence that he(author) makes the story disappointing as it goes on. Conclusion:The story became BS even though I used to love it.
This is the first review I am writing on WN and it is the story that forced me to write one. The author has closely studied Tony Stark's personality before starting this amazing fiction since I could tell that within this context Stark would have said that. So yeah, amazing work there. The world feels vivid; it makes you feel you are there; the emotions, the action, and the dialogues look real and not something you can ask GPT to make. Development is nice, and despite how cliché the others think it is, I love the fact that the Mc decided to be a hero. The romance is there but it develops more in the background rather than active flirting and all. No complaints there since they began dating right after turning 15. So yeah, a perfect fanfiction for me. Thank you for gracing us with such perfection, Dear Author.
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The story is pretty great at first but in later chapters, basically by the time they are getting ready to deal with AFO, it feels like the plot is drying up and the author is trying to keep it alive with things that are pushing it a little. An OC villain creating Ultron, the Doctor getting a sample of Tony's and Melissa's blood because Stars & Stripes dropped the ball stupidly naively... This is basically the day after they allegedly take down AFO, a major climax. It's like setting him up to return in two chapters at this point. An alternate version of Tony, a la Kang the Conqueror, can show up in the next chapter and I won't bat an eye... Great story potential but the plot continuity is up for debate. I'll let the chapters pile up to see if I'm proven wrong.
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after chapter 122 and 123 the story is ruined goodbye.......................................................................................
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Story had a lot of potential but the cringe oc kinda ruins it. And I'm personally tired of the "reincarnation oc" so if it was just Ironman himself that would have been better.
De un momento muy particular y ciertamente de manera singular haciendo referencia a cierto diálogo que puede o no estar relacionada con algún hipotético muñeco para ser o no ser contabilizado como 150 caracteres. Solo para finalizar esta historia está...
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Quite the story and the only complaint tht I have is that this is no harm story. But I can respect that. It's handled very well. The pacing is not terrible though I'm a bit disappointed tht Deku didn't get the shield, of your gonna make a pseudo Captain America, give him a shield to practice getting used to.
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Read up to 54 and have nothing but praise, well done MC and characters with realistic growth. I’m hyped to see how far a true quirkless MC can go
Bro, and if you make one where the protagonist is reincarnated in DC with the powers of Maui from Moana, I mean he is a semi-god of the wind and the ocean and if you want you can give him his appearance just a little less bulky, it would be epic and it would be great see someone like him become a hero alongside the league
This story had huge potential but it was destroyed by the stupidity of the author. Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad
i want to know what will happen if got world travel in marvel and meet with marvel tony with Melissa ..
Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about the story in which Himiko Toga teamed up with the Carnage symbiote? Before the events of the original series, she could merge with him and hunt people, and at the same time remained a pretty girl at school for everyone.
adding OC villain just to make a mc up to his toes. It just getting better but...I'll just wait.
it's good, like really fingerlicking good and I have a question, is saiki or whatever his name is meant to be like the long term villain for Tony or is he like a one off something and Tony would just build something to permanently takeaway his quirks
Tiết lộ Spoiler 
This fanfiction deserves five stars! A very great piece. It is written by Shadow so you 100% know its a masterpiece. It's a very great book worth spending time reading.
Bro, four chapters in and I’m DYING of laughter. Another piece of peak from Shadow
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Clones of the mc, badly written villains, poor conclusions to important arcs, little emotional depth, zero intelligence and forethought from the mc which directly impacts his ability to solve problems before they escalate leading to said problems continuing to grow unempeded, and a female lead who is just a copy and paste of the mc. What can I say, this story is a train wreck.
The story is good overall, I really enjoyed up to this point. However there are some pretty bad decisions later on in the book that I personally can’t agree with. So although I believe in creative freedom of authors I am dropping at this point. If you do wish to read this book just know that villains are left to become bigger and bigger problems constantly with our supposed super genius MC never changing his ways.
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honestly speaking I didn't read all of so I can judge but the thing that made me stop reading was when Melissa joined the hero course and had an iron man suit made for idont get me wrong I would love to see her character develop but it happened way too fast and made me think of how the mc advantage was taken away from him up to where i read the mc made a lot of the original mha problems and character drevelopment erased what was even the point to continue read when iIdidnt have anything to look forward to that i know
Overall this Story is well done, but imo it should have ended after the fight with AFO, because after that the author started to roughly implement Marvel Storylines into the MHA Universe. example: some OC building Ultron, AFO's Doctor getting DNA from Tony to get Clones or the Super Soldier Serum, which btw he only got because other Characters became stupid for no reason :/ TL;DR: Story was good, until it got milked for more content.
Tiết lộ Spoiler This fanfic is really good overall until the author decides to put clone BS. Basically Tony IQ and his nanites suit are limited by author intelligence that he(author) makes the story disappointing as it goes on. Conclusion:The story became BS even though I used to love it.
This is the first review I am writing on WN and it is the story that forced me to write one. The author has closely studied Tony Stark's personality before starting this amazing fiction since I could tell that within this context Stark would have said that. So yeah, amazing work there. The world feels vivid; it makes you feel you are there; the emotions, the action, and the dialogues look real and not something you can ask GPT to make. Development is nice, and despite how cliché the others think it is, I love the fact that the Mc decided to be a hero. The romance is there but it develops more in the background rather than active flirting and all. No complaints there since they began dating right after turning 15. So yeah, a perfect fanfiction for me. Thank you for gracing us with such perfection, Dear Author.
Tiết lộ Spoiler The story is pretty great at first but in later chapters, basically by the time they are getting ready to deal with AFO, it feels like the plot is drying up and the author is trying to keep it alive with things that are pushing it a little. An OC villain creating Ultron, the Doctor getting a sample of Tony's and Melissa's blood because Stars & Stripes dropped the ball stupidly naively... This is basically the day after they allegedly take down AFO, a major climax. It's like setting him up to return in two chapters at this point. An alternate version of Tony, a la Kang the Conqueror, can show up in the next chapter and I won't bat an eye... Great story potential but the plot continuity is up for debate. I'll let the chapters pile up to see if I'm proven wrong.
Tiết lộ Spoiler after chapter 122 and 123 the story is ruined goodbye.......................................................................................
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Story had a lot of potential but the cringe oc kinda ruins it. And I'm personally tired of the "reincarnation oc" so if it was just Ironman himself that would have been better.
De un momento muy particular y ciertamente de manera singular haciendo referencia a cierto diálogo que puede o no estar relacionada con algún hipotético muñeco para ser o no ser contabilizado como 150 caracteres. Solo para finalizar esta historia está...
ceroboh seorang reinkarnasi tapi memberitahu rahasianya kepada orang luar yg baru ditemui hanya karena ia cewe. cih
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Quite the story and the only complaint tht I have is that this is no harm story. But I can respect that. It's handled very well. The pacing is not terrible though I'm a bit disappointed tht Deku didn't get the shield, of your gonna make a pseudo Captain America, give him a shield to practice getting used to.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Read up to 54 and have nothing but praise, well done MC and characters with realistic growth. I’m hyped to see how far a true quirkless MC can go
Bro, and if you make one where the protagonist is reincarnated in DC with the powers of Maui from Moana, I mean he is a semi-god of the wind and the ocean and if you want you can give him his appearance just a little less bulky, it would be epic and it would be great see someone like him become a hero alongside the league
This story had huge potential but it was destroyed by the stupidity of the author. Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad
i want to know what will happen if got world travel in marvel and meet with marvel tony with Melissa ..
Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about the story in which Himiko Toga teamed up with the Carnage symbiote? Before the events of the original series, she could merge with him and hunt people, and at the same time remained a pretty girl at school for everyone.
adding OC villain just to make a mc up to his toes. It just getting better but...I'll just wait.
it's good, like really fingerlicking good and I have a question, is saiki or whatever his name is meant to be like the long term villain for Tony or is he like a one off something and Tony would just build something to permanently takeaway his quirks
Tiết lộ Spoiler This fanfiction deserves five stars! A very great piece. It is written by Shadow so you 100% know its a masterpiece. It's a very great book worth spending time reading.
Bro, four chapters in and I’m DYING of laughter. Another piece of peak from Shadow
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