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Walls of text with no paragraphs, bad grammar, missing punctuation, run-on sentences, and emotes like it’s a social media post. This book has everything.
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I think the text should be justified and paragraphs clear. the updating stability too...
emojis Break the immersion flow of novel is all over the place sentences are too descriptive and it is like reading an essay
gotta say, you should add something for the synopsis .even if it's merely an excerpt from the story. at least it would give an idea what a reader should expect.
Walls of text with no paragraphs, bad grammar, missing punctuation, run-on sentences, and emotes like it’s a social media post. This book has everything.
Touch and hold a clip to pin it. Unpinned clips will be deleted after 1 hour.Tap on a clip to paste it in the text box.Welcome to Gboard clipboard, any text you copy will be saved here.Use the edit icon to pin, add or delete clips.Touch and hold a clip to pin it. Unpinned clips will be deleted after 1 hour.Tap on a clip to paste it in the text box.Welcome to Gboard clipboard, any text you copy will be saved here.Use the edit icon to pin, add or delete clips.
I think the text should be justified and paragraphs clear. the updating stability too...
emojis Break the immersion flow of novel is all over the place sentences are too descriptive and it is like reading an essay
gotta say, you should add something for the synopsis .even if it's merely an excerpt from the story. at least it would give an idea what a reader should expect.
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