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hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
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First few chapters it was good then it turn into garbage the mc became idiot and story is stupid . It was torturing just to read.
The store is well crafted, offering a good experience so far. The plot is engaging and the character of the mc is good, the only problem is the side characters are not very well developed but it is still very enjoyable and highly recommend 😀
I don't want to be mean but it feels like the author is either trying too hard or too little. It feels cliche and overdone. I mean what are the odds he gets exactly what he wants or needs every time with the sign in system at the start.
I'm telling you right now the story gets boring and stupid the second the Mc for no reason teams up with the Justice League and starts not killing his enemies. Author practically spits on the face of all the torture, abuse, and work the MC and all those kids went through and did. MC had his base, his team, and resources but immediately agreed to work for JL for the same things he already has. The beginning of this story is bait to draw people in, don't waste your time.
it's a good story i have seen in many fanfictions that I have read. I hope you keep up the good work and don't stop writing story keep up the update and don't pressure yourself👍👍😊😊
Great story very fun to read, have good potential and the author is really good at his/her work, So far I have enjoined it very much 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
He Becomes a hero…. All that Just to make him a hero…. Disappointing… from anti hero to hero in a sec
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Amazing Novel, really love it. Good DC Fanfics are so rare these days. OP MC who is actually unbeatable and doesn't get needlessly nerfed into the ground for no reason as well.
the story started great in my opinion but it went from antihero to hero the first chance it got. which disappointed me.
Tiết lộ Spoiler
Good story, just one advice when you use AI try to read that chap and see if u can use or correct it in more humane way, anyway tnx on a story
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Just a 5 Star Author Review! Nothing to see here. Hope everyone enjoys the novel and leaves their own review. This Fanfic is just for fun, so please no unnecessary comments.
Great story with tremendous potential. The author is clearly a talented writer and story teller. A refreshing DC story where the mc doesn't join the Justice League or the sidekicks but does his own thing which is very rare as most stories join the league or sidekicks. Really looking forward to seeing where the author takes this great story and until then end my powerstones will be going to this story.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
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First few chapters it was good then it turn into garbage the mc became idiot and story is stupid . It was torturing just to read.
The store is well crafted, offering a good experience so far. The plot is engaging and the character of the mc is good, the only problem is the side characters are not very well developed but it is still very enjoyable and highly recommend 😀
I don't want to be mean but it feels like the author is either trying too hard or too little. It feels cliche and overdone. I mean what are the odds he gets exactly what he wants or needs every time with the sign in system at the start.
I'm telling you right now the story gets boring and stupid the second the Mc for no reason teams up with the Justice League and starts not killing his enemies. Author practically spits on the face of all the torture, abuse, and work the MC and all those kids went through and did. MC had his base, his team, and resources but immediately agreed to work for JL for the same things he already has. The beginning of this story is bait to draw people in, don't waste your time.
it's a good story i have seen in many fanfictions that I have read. I hope you keep up the good work and don't stop writing story keep up the update and don't pressure yourself👍👍😊😊
Great story very fun to read, have good potential and the author is really good at his/her work, So far I have enjoined it very much 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
He Becomes a hero…. All that Just to make him a hero…. Disappointing… from anti hero to hero in a sec
ITS PERFECT.................................................................................................................................................................................................
Amazing Novel, really love it. Good DC Fanfics are so rare these days. OP MC who is actually unbeatable and doesn't get needlessly nerfed into the ground for no reason as well.
the story started great in my opinion but it went from antihero to hero the first chance it got. which disappointed me.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Good story, just one advice when you use AI try to read that chap and see if u can use or correct it in more humane way, anyway tnx on a story
[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Just a 5 Star Author Review! Nothing to see here. Hope everyone enjoys the novel and leaves their own review. This Fanfic is just for fun, so please no unnecessary comments.
Great story with tremendous potential. The author is clearly a talented writer and story teller. A refreshing DC story where the mc doesn't join the Justice League or the sidekicks but does his own thing which is very rare as most stories join the league or sidekicks. Really looking forward to seeing where the author takes this great story and until then end my powerstones will be going to this story.