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I'm just few chapter in and I can say it was a good read, kudos Author . keep it up 👍👍👍
Totally enjoyed this one! Especially Rays' internal monologue in the first chapter lol. I highly recommend this piece, the content matched the energy of the high quality synopsis. Kudos to the author.
I've been reading this for a while, I enjoy reading this. It is interesting for me.
After reading the introduction, I thought this was going to be a very good book. Unfortunately the authors grammar is lacking. It’s still somewhat bearable, so give it a shot before you turn it down.
Hmmm, what do we have here. Im'm yet to read this, but since he's supporting my author he already deserves a five star. I bet it won't be disappointing. The book cover alone is giving.
Nice background and characters. The storyline is also an interesting one. Keep up the good work author!
it's great. I like it 👌🏻 I don't know how to explain it but it's good if i rate this 100/10 I will recommend it to you, it's beautiful ...................
This is a wonderful book. I Love the way the author describes the scene. The striking balance between dialogues and description is what set me off about this book . good work author!
The story of this novel is intriguing, and the concept is rich. The MC is well-loved by his subordinates but has a poor reputation at school. It would be helpful to have a backstory explaining the source of this loyalty and reason why he ended up hated at school, especially since he doesn’t harm non-gangsters. The grammar and typos are concerning; consider proofreading the chapter several times before posting. The scene transitions are somewhat jarring, which made me reread paragraphs to understand the flow. Overall, the novel has a compelling foundation, including the MC’s personality (rowdy but polite when needed), the world, and the interactions. It just needs some polishing in terms of technical details
Tiết lộ Spoiler
I am happy to have come across this story. It has an interesting introduction ao far, and I am starting to like the development.
Honestly! gone through this book and I'm in love. would definitely recommend to others .
Very nice background and character setting with huge and a different imagination. please finish this book until the end.
i love the concept of the story, i love how you write the characters, i love how cool your world building but for sure it's still not fully reveal, i enjoyed it keep it up man!
Hmm. There's a lot of here that needs to be corrected. There's also this loophole in chapter 1. How'd he get into creative arts without having a creative mind? The grammar needs fixing as well. Especially the sypnosis. I had to turn off my brain before reading the rest of the sypnosis. Plothole 2. The tone of his speech always changes from politeness to crassness. If he's a college student majoring in Creative Arts/fine arts then he must have some sort of ability to back it up. The characteristic design of the character and the background of it doesn't match well. Making it much less understandable from where he's coming from.
The story is really interesting. Contrary to much anticipated expectation, Ray is a gang despite coming from a poor background. The story development is good and character is well designed.
The more I read, the more I like this novel. I'm looking forward to more chapters from the author.
This is the best novel I have ever came across. The characters are well designed and story development good. The flavor in the novel makes it have a unique taste that make me want to read it more.
Very good, there's a lot of potential, especially in the story, it's on the right track and the characters feel real, if you keep it up I'm sure you'll have a very good novel on your hands.
I like the way you write! It would be good as well if you add more spaces between the lines to make it more readable, but I love your vocabulary! I enjoyed reading the story. Please keep writing author! I am rooting for u
A very Nice read. i would love to see more like this. Overall ratings (8/10) Recommendations percentage (97% for dark fantasy readers) The remaining 3% Goes to the author for creating a MP
I'm just few chapter in and I can say it was a good read, kudos Author . keep it up 👍👍👍
Totally enjoyed this one! Especially Rays' internal monologue in the first chapter lol. I highly recommend this piece, the content matched the energy of the high quality synopsis. Kudos to the author.
I've been reading this for a while, I enjoy reading this. It is interesting for me.
After reading the introduction, I thought this was going to be a very good book. Unfortunately the authors grammar is lacking. It’s still somewhat bearable, so give it a shot before you turn it down.
Hmmm, what do we have here. Im'm yet to read this, but since he's supporting my author he already deserves a five star. I bet it won't be disappointing. The book cover alone is giving.
Nice background and characters. The storyline is also an interesting one. Keep up the good work author!
it's great. I like it 👌🏻 I don't know how to explain it but it's good if i rate this 100/10 I will recommend it to you, it's beautiful ...................
This is a wonderful book. I Love the way the author describes the scene. The striking balance between dialogues and description is what set me off about this book . good work author!
The story of this novel is intriguing, and the concept is rich. The MC is well-loved by his subordinates but has a poor reputation at school. It would be helpful to have a backstory explaining the source of this loyalty and reason why he ended up hated at school, especially since he doesn’t harm non-gangsters. The grammar and typos are concerning; consider proofreading the chapter several times before posting. The scene transitions are somewhat jarring, which made me reread paragraphs to understand the flow. Overall, the novel has a compelling foundation, including the MC’s personality (rowdy but polite when needed), the world, and the interactions. It just needs some polishing in terms of technical details
Tiết lộ Spoiler I am happy to have come across this story. It has an interesting introduction ao far, and I am starting to like the development.
Honestly! gone through this book and I'm in love. would definitely recommend to others .
Very nice background and character setting with huge and a different imagination. please finish this book until the end.
i love the concept of the story, i love how you write the characters, i love how cool your world building but for sure it's still not fully reveal, i enjoyed it keep it up man!
Hmm. There's a lot of here that needs to be corrected. There's also this loophole in chapter 1. How'd he get into creative arts without having a creative mind? The grammar needs fixing as well. Especially the sypnosis. I had to turn off my brain before reading the rest of the sypnosis. Plothole 2. The tone of his speech always changes from politeness to crassness. If he's a college student majoring in Creative Arts/fine arts then he must have some sort of ability to back it up. The characteristic design of the character and the background of it doesn't match well. Making it much less understandable from where he's coming from.
The story is really interesting. Contrary to much anticipated expectation, Ray is a gang despite coming from a poor background. The story development is good and character is well designed.
The more I read, the more I like this novel. I'm looking forward to more chapters from the author.
This is the best novel I have ever came across. The characters are well designed and story development good. The flavor in the novel makes it have a unique taste that make me want to read it more.
Very good, there's a lot of potential, especially in the story, it's on the right track and the characters feel real, if you keep it up I'm sure you'll have a very good novel on your hands.
I like the way you write! It would be good as well if you add more spaces between the lines to make it more readable, but I love your vocabulary! I enjoyed reading the story. Please keep writing author! I am rooting for u
A very Nice read. i would love to see more like this. Overall ratings (8/10) Recommendations percentage (97% for dark fantasy readers) The remaining 3% Goes to the author for creating a MP
Wow!! !,love the book, very interesting and I love the story plot