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The plot is followed by a over generous dose of stupidity and plot induced idiocy. The chapters feel more like 1/4 a chapter with abyssal word count. The other doesn't seem to have learnt anything from his previous attempts.
Bro please tell me in the chunin exam he is going to use his ten shadows I mean come on during the whole waves mission he had to come up with ways to use the ten shadows teq discretely and hide them from the team I don’t know about you but if that keeps happening it will get exhausting to read anyway love the story so far keep up the good work. I wonder could he learn black flash with his chakra and like use his genjutsu to make a pseudo domain expansion.
Too many chapter MC is just yapping and way to underpowered even with 10 shadows should be able to stomp on genin characters but is "weak" probably can't even defeat kabuto pre time skip without summoning shadows
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Amazing story I didn’t know there was a rewrite until recently and I’m glad because i got to read a lot of chapters back to back although i really hope the author would post more pictures in the comments like the main character appearance or some of the shinigami that only showed up in the manga
The story is progressing in a great way. Mc is also utilising ten Shadows in a good way. Convergence with max elephant water is an interesting idea. Though I believe mc should consider combining the shadows into chimera and totality as well as try to see if other shadows offer some kind of power as well. For example, sensing can be gained from divine dogs or poison from great serpent. Lots of avenues to explore. Hope to see more of the story
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The story has too many grammatical errors. Using the 10 Shadows curse technique in Narutoverse is quite interesting. My rating would be higher if there was no unnecessary forced early romance with Tenten and also like any other fanfic transmigrator, he starts advising her and yapping. The same shit can be found in many Harry Potter, Naruto, Black Clover fanfics. Maybe if the author made the story darker than canon, with tension always hanging in the air, this would be one of the best fanfics.
i enjoyed reading it very balnced story you wont lose any brain cells if u read it try it if you want but what im going to say right now is very important
Good start, the first 15 chapters are good but you can see that the quality declines slightly as the chapters go on , it's a real struggle to read these interactions with Tenten, these uncomfortable, like those old people from the village who complimented you when I was little , he's an adult in a child's body, he shouldn't have noticed Tenten's beauty like that , see him flirting with her, God, just ewww. I hope the author fixes this , it's really important , the fact that the only description when he notices someone female is that she's pretty is pretty weird , the last chapter is discouraging, the fact that he took a mission without the consent of the Village pourrait consister à une trahison, c'est strict military government, il n'est que de la chair à canon , he is quite idiotic and thoughtless . I'm afraid that this story will end up becoming like the other story with Shikamaru SI, I have not been able to read more than 5 chapters of each other, please author don't spoil this story. If the interactions with Tenten or more precisely the main characters improve, I will return with 5 stars
PLEASE! Please change the main character's name while the story has just started. If you look on the Narutopedia Wiki it shows that there are other members of the Nara clan that don't have Shika in their name. Only the main family's leader and heir have Shika in their name. Please change it while the story is still new. Choose something nice and simple like Kyoya, Koji, or Akira or something. Kyoya is a common cool guy name in Japanese culture and many different anime. Koji is the name of the Japanese god of fire, kitchen, and hearth. Akira means wisdom in Japanese. PLEASE! For the love of god choose a better name for the main character!
Slow pace. Nerfed MC. Hiding true technique without reason. Ooh, forcing romance with fmc. Actually how your old stories.
The plot is followed by a over generous dose of stupidity and plot induced idiocy. The chapters feel more like 1/4 a chapter with abyssal word count. The other doesn't seem to have learnt anything from his previous attempts.
Bro please tell me in the chunin exam he is going to use his ten shadows I mean come on during the whole waves mission he had to come up with ways to use the ten shadows teq discretely and hide them from the team I don’t know about you but if that keeps happening it will get exhausting to read anyway love the story so far keep up the good work. I wonder could he learn black flash with his chakra and like use his genjutsu to make a pseudo domain expansion.
Too many chapter MC is just yapping and way to underpowered even with 10 shadows should be able to stomp on genin characters but is "weak" probably can't even defeat kabuto pre time skip without summoning shadows
Tiết lộ Spoiler Amazing story I didn’t know there was a rewrite until recently and I’m glad because i got to read a lot of chapters back to back although i really hope the author would post more pictures in the comments like the main character appearance or some of the shinigami that only showed up in the manga
The story is progressing in a great way. Mc is also utilising ten Shadows in a good way. Convergence with max elephant water is an interesting idea. Though I believe mc should consider combining the shadows into chimera and totality as well as try to see if other shadows offer some kind of power as well. For example, sensing can be gained from divine dogs or poison from great serpent. Lots of avenues to explore. Hope to see more of the story
Tiết lộ Spoiler The story has too many grammatical errors. Using the 10 Shadows curse technique in Narutoverse is quite interesting. My rating would be higher if there was no unnecessary forced early romance with Tenten and also like any other fanfic transmigrator, he starts advising her and yapping. The same shit can be found in many Harry Potter, Naruto, Black Clover fanfics. Maybe if the author made the story darker than canon, with tension always hanging in the air, this would be one of the best fanfics.
i enjoyed reading it very balnced story you wont lose any brain cells if u read it try it if you want but what im going to say right now is very important
Good start, the first 15 chapters are good but you can see that the quality declines slightly as the chapters go on , it's a real struggle to read these interactions with Tenten, these uncomfortable, like those old people from the village who complimented you when I was little , he's an adult in a child's body, he shouldn't have noticed Tenten's beauty like that , see him flirting with her, God, just ewww. I hope the author fixes this , it's really important , the fact that the only description when he notices someone female is that she's pretty is pretty weird , the last chapter is discouraging, the fact that he took a mission without the consent of the Village pourrait consister à une trahison, c'est strict military government, il n'est que de la chair à canon , he is quite idiotic and thoughtless . I'm afraid that this story will end up becoming like the other story with Shikamaru SI, I have not been able to read more than 5 chapters of each other, please author don't spoil this story. If the interactions with Tenten or more precisely the main characters improve, I will return with 5 stars
PLEASE! Please change the main character's name while the story has just started. If you look on the Narutopedia Wiki it shows that there are other members of the Nara clan that don't have Shika in their name. Only the main family's leader and heir have Shika in their name. Please change it while the story is still new. Choose something nice and simple like Kyoya, Koji, or Akira or something. Kyoya is a common cool guy name in Japanese culture and many different anime. Koji is the name of the Japanese god of fire, kitchen, and hearth. Akira means wisdom in Japanese. PLEASE! For the love of god choose a better name for the main character!
Slow pace. Nerfed MC. Hiding true technique without reason. Ooh, forcing romance with fmc. Actually how your old stories.