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I'm coming my son .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. ..............................
Perfect sadece hikâyenin başlangıcı bile müthişti. Bütün bölümleri tek seferde okudum. Dostum bu romana devam et kesinlikle geleceği var. Not:MC her görevi tamamlayamaz. Bazen başarısızlıklar daha büyük başarılara neden olur. Biraz acı çekmek lazım.
First of all its a good fanfic if you ignore author changing mc's gender every paragraph (he/she), just choose one man its real annoying other than than if you want a POV change just write,(MC POV/ 1st POV). other than that the fan-fiction has great potential.
Black clover And doesn't rinaggan give it's users control over gravity. And shouldn't he have all the abilities? The six paths of pain had
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I'm coming my son .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. .............................. ..............................
Perfect sadece hikâyenin başlangıcı bile müthişti. Bütün bölümleri tek seferde okudum. Dostum bu romana devam et kesinlikle geleceği var. Not:MC her görevi tamamlayamaz. Bazen başarısızlıklar daha büyük başarılara neden olur. Biraz acı çekmek lazım.
First of all its a good fanfic if you ignore author changing mc's gender every paragraph (he/she), just choose one man its real annoying other than than if you want a POV change just write,(MC POV/ 1st POV). other than that the fan-fiction has great potential.
Black clover And doesn't rinaggan give it's users control over gravity. And shouldn't he have all the abilities? The six paths of pain had