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good enough, but be warned that the same overused character like ace will have a major part in this fanfiction as author admitted, if you are tired reading about overused one piece characters then this isn't for you
The update is ok and the story is great. The only thing that’s wrong is the grammar. It’s mediocre at best but it’s readable, better than most.
good enough, but be warned that the same overused character like ace will have a major part in this fanfiction as author admitted, if you are tired reading about overused one piece characters then this isn't for you
The update is ok and the story is great. The only thing that’s wrong is the grammar. It’s mediocre at best but it’s readable, better than most.
But ofc it's a 5 star! This is peak fiction!!