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Firstly Kudos on the author, because that guy knows his stuff. I don't know if he actually has that Fate-Knowledge Skill on EX+ Rank or just did heavy research for this book, but I believe Fate-fans won't be disappointed with the Lore or anything else. I am writing this review on chapter 9, but so far there are hardly points to criticize. It is rather lighthearted at this point, which is acceptable, because the MC is right now 15 years old, meaning we are still in the childhhod-arc, which will soon end and with progressing plot it will automatically turn darker afterall it is Fate. While lighthearted it isn't a story where the MC is completely chillaxed, shown in situations, where the MC is desperate to grow stronger. We are given insight into the world and also how some events in the 'background' affect the MC and his situation. Furthermore are the reasons/intentions of the interacting characters not only clear, which helps with understanding their actions, but also lore-accurate. These 2 points are not only seamlessly infused with the story development, but also, in my opinion, enhance the reading experience. So why did I only give 4 Stars in Updating Stability ? Because until now, one needs to wait for 2 days for a new chapter (sure the chapters are pretty long 3~5k, but still) and because there are pretty late uploaded it sometimes even feels like 3 days : ( . Overall a really enjoyable read ; ) . Also some personal plus-points about this story (WARNING SPOILER!): - No free wishes or something, but a transaction (meaning the MC gets benefits in exchange for something) -MC is pretty strong, while not overpowered (Think of it like that: the MC has the potential to be OP, but because of both his inexperience and age (both his and the present) he is limited for now) -MC is a noob regarding Fate-lore (while I enjoy reading a story about proganist, who knows how to use his knowledge to gain a edge, it is a trope that I have read too much currently and therefore like this approach of an MC who only has superficial knowledge) Personal minus-point (take it with a grain of salt): -Only 1 Female Lead, meaning NO-harem (this piont is both nice and sad, allow me to clarify; It is nice, because there will be no pokemon-catching here and we [the readers] will hopefully get a good romance-story 《as good or better as it can be in Fate》 ; It is sad, because many personal Waifus of us [readers] won't be making it to the promotion to romantic interest, which is kinda tragic, because FGO has many, but one can't have everything)
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This fanfic is simply impressive. I rarely, if ever, find a fic where the lore is so well respected, in both the world building, and in how he portrays well known characters, as I don't find it hard to imagine most of them saying or acting in how the author portrays them. This is further shown when he summons his Servant, as they are not a prominent character in Fate, but he sticks to the lore on them, and even in the dream cycle, he follows the characters legends almost to the letter, but from their perspective. Another nice thing is that since the Mc is a Fate novice, we the reader get to learn side by side with him, allowing us to be on a relatively similar plane of understanding as the Mc, without needing to constantly check Wikipedia for the lore to understand what's going on. The most impressive part about it, is that it never comes across as condescending, weird or out of place when we learn a thing or two, and even with me knowing so much about the lore, I have been pleasantly surprised with how the Author has handled 'teaching' us it, without it getting repetitive. The Oc's are all well made, and lore accurate, making them refreshing to read about, as they seem genuine, and not just a plot device to further the story. The main character is clearly flawed in personality and is someone who starts out as a novice with all things regarding Fate, yet through the story he grows as both a person and magus. With the Grail War catapulting his character development, and it is a joy to read. The supporting cast is great, and I am find them as a great addition as they elevate the story. Another plus is that he has a proper family, as I am far too used to fanfictions having the main protagonist being an orphan or being distant with his relatives. While here, his mother plays a proper role in his life, and she is a good mother and is an engaging part of the story. The Servant he summons deserves its own long and detailed paragraph, but I do not wish to spoil who it is, but know that how they are characterized, and later change though the Grail War is impeccably handled. As I went from somewhat disliking the character due to who they were, and how they were acting towards best girl (You'll know who it is when you read), but now I can't help but love their character, and I wish the best for them and can't wait to see how the Author will handle their character, as I never expected to start liking them. When it comes to the story, the Author has clearly put in a lot of thought, and it feels natural for the most part, and very believable. Characters acting as they should, and the situation adapting to the changes are all handled well, and I am excited to see what the Author has in store for the finale of the Fourth Holy Grail War. When it comes to writing style, it is clear that he was a bit new to it in the beginning, but past chapter 9 he finds his rhythm, and the writing quality improves as a whole. I am as well very pleased with the chapters being so long, somewhere around four thousand words each if I am not mistaken, so that is a big plus. And the Authors consistency is great, as he posts at least twice a week, despite him having exams season. All in all, this has to be in my top five Fics that I have ever read, and I hope that Webnovel authors continue to impress like Leylin here. So, I wish you luck, Leylin Blackwood, and I hope you never drop this gem, as it would be a great shame!
Absolutely amazing Fate fanfic right here imo. Nearly flawless grammar and writing quality, engaging character interactions, well-planned plotlines, and extremely detailed (and basically flawless lore-wise) world background. The fight scenes are also very well done and quite exciting. Hell, the Author even replies to paragraph comments quite regularly! The only real demerits to the entire story for me are that the MC is a bit childish (being dumb, reckless, or arrogant in some cases but not too bad) and that the romance is REALLY slow. I stopped reading around Chapter 44 (to let more chapters build up); but up until that point there is almost no romance at all. There is definitely a good foundation for romance in the future; but it has been really bland in that department so far. This is definitely not a story for someone looking for fast paced romance. The Author also seems to lean towards having a single love interest — too bad Harem fans. Despite the lack of romance and some childish behavior by the MC, this is still one of the best Fate fanfics I've read personally. I'll definitely be coming back to read more after a surplus of chapters build up and possibly update or post a new review. Until then, keep up the good work Author and bravo.
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This is the greatest fate fanfic i have ever read.The dynamic between morgan and the mc is so good.All the side characters are also written extremely well and the pacing is great too 5/5.
Excellent,the author mostly keeps the update calendar and the few exceptions he still manages to keep the quota of chapters,it has an excellent quality of writing with a very good character development and demeanor making it fit to the world and the magus society;the magecraft its a version more explored of what one can see in Fate/zero and stay night,because the mc's magecraft develops very well in a pragmatic way instead of the typical magus that focus on research and weird effects that takes lots of preparation or the crazy bastard of fate/zero(aka kiritsugu bin laden emiya) with a rocket launcher and a gun that only knows how to use his magic crest,reinforcement or basic magecraft;the author creates interesting parts that always makes one want to keep going and the lenght of the chapters is excellent and the author is always in contact with the readers and answer kindly to any question or complaint taking seriously your opinion
IF U WANT BIGGER MEAT 😉 Because i know us degenerates need all the inches we can get. All u need to do is read all chapters. I could not believe my eyes, my mighty pole had increased by a whopping 4 inches 😱 NOW, the old mighty glories being that is I, have passed the threshold of 5 inches and achieved Nirvana. I do no longer need to look at my little PP through a microscope, GLORY TO THE AUTHOR
Fanfiction Review: Fate/Fake Order by Hugh Janus “Fate/Fake Order” by Hugh Janus brings a fresh, lively spin to the Fate universe, centered around a dynamic new protagonist, Alastair. Alastair is openly and proudly gay, and his unapologetic personality adds a compelling twist to the high-stakes world of the Grail War. Hugh Janus has crafted a protagonist with depth and flair, making Alastair feel both relatable and unique within the context of the series. His witty, charming approach to the challenges he faces makes him a refreshing departure from the typical Fate mages. The story does an excellent job highlighting Alastair’s personality beyond his sexuality. Hugh Janus skillfully avoids stereotypes, instead building Alastair as a well-rounded character whose confidence and wit enhance each interaction. His flirtatious nature brings humor, especially in his banter with other mages and servants, yet there’s an emotional core to his character that adds layers to his journey. The bond between Alastair and his servant is one of the story’s highlights. Their relationship is beautifully written, evolving from cautious respect to a genuine partnership. Hugh Janus balances tension, humor, and heartfelt moments to give their dynamic a natural feel, making their journey together impactful and memorable. The action scenes are another strong point. Hugh Janus brings the combat to life with vivid, detailed descriptions that capture the intensity and strategy characteristic of Fate battles. The lore is expertly woven in, showing the author’s respect for the source material while adding their unique twist. Overall, “Fate/Fake Order” by Hugh Janus is an engaging read for Fate fans. Alastair is a memorable, fully realized protagonist whose story is as thrilling as it is heartfelt. Hugh Janus’s writing makes this fanfiction a standout, blending action, humor, and heart into a genuinely entertaining experience.
reading this work I get the feeling of a Chinese novel but about england. ( leaf juice lovers )
I personally recommend this fanfic to any fate fans out there as the author knows his lore and characters. So far it’s been an amazing read and everything felt natural and not forced (Plot). Looking forward to more updates, Good job, you’ve cooked👨🏻🍳🔥👌🏻
There is really not much to say. The author has extensive knowledge of the nasuverse and can come up with his reasonable fanon without creating any plot hole is respect to the og canon. Very enjoyable to read though I suppose that a new reader starting the novel might be bored in the first 4 chapter and feel like there might be some unexplainable things bit they are all wonderfully explained in the later chapters. And rember to watch the advertisement breaks.
The story is very good, although I feel the protagonist is a little weak at the beginning, later on he improves a little. I hope the story continues to improve from now on.
Absolute Cinema, need I say more? I think not. If one hath reached this mountain peak in an attempt to comprehend thy peak, then one shan't be disappointed. Thy Author comprehends thee lore. Thy Author comprehends thee power system. Thy Author comprehends thee personalities, and not only that-but exhibits them in an exceptional fashion. Standeth proud, upon thy peak. Thou holds a magnitude of strength.
To this time fic is very good and interesting i hope your quality wont decrease. Also please dont drop this i am very interested in Aleister journey and how he will deal with CounterForce contract. My choice for waifu is Morgan of course
19 chapters and I would say this fic is very good. the early chapters are a little boring with an introduction arc and a little training arc. however the story gets really fun after mc summons morgan.
I found the story and entered out of curiosity and now I'm counting the hours until the next chapter.
Very well written chapters, solid development, doesn’t take too long to set up the story, and the chat are entertaining. Hoping for more chapters
As there have been 16 chapters as of right now I thought I should do a review. •Let's first talk about the main character.He is well written and I like his personality that's all. I don't know what to say if you want to know more just read that fanfiction. • The secondary characters, the author really brings out the characters as they are originally interpreted in Type-Moon. It's enjoyable reading them as they have their own unique character. • Update--The author delivers the update as his promise. He didn't miss a single one as of it yet. ......................That's all..................... ~★Now sum of my personal thoughts on the two FML subjects I really hope that you make this a single female lead as I haven't read it any good fate FanFiction in years. If you do make this a two-female lead fanfiction, do give a heads up so I don't get disappointed so much. I want to say that I really enjoyed reading this so far.★~
A good ff that shows a lot of promise, well written characters and overall plot as of Vol.1 Ch15. Looking forward to see how the story continues to develop
5 stars, but since it's only chapter 11, I can't give one yet :( Wonderfully written ff for Nasu-Verse standards, it's as incredibly confusing as it needs to be (in a good way) and you can tell that the author has an idea of what he's writing. The True Ancestors and Apostles also appear well and not out of place in the story and I'm looking forward to the future chapters! The writing quality is also good,rare on this platform hahaha
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In all honesty, One of the best books I've read on this damned app. As for writing this, A book like this is a damn gem that you won't find elsewhere. Give this author nothing but love and damn support because holy shit, He can cook. Although, The mc in this book does kinda piss me off for some unknown reason. Besides me being a cunt, the author can write one hell of a story.
I would say it is quite a good fate fanfiction. High quality with zero grammatical mistakes and big chapters. Author-san I hope you don't drop this fic. Well done, fan of your work.
I've been asked to leave this here. It's an amazing work so far, and I'm enjoying the ride peace
I have been asked for a review ...and i shall do so.... overall it's absolutely amazing so far. it has good updates which is much appreciated. and it has good world building. my only complaint is the mc is not sarcastic enough ...we need a little more.
This is clearly there best FF to ever exist! You want proof? Source: Trust me bro.
Firstly Kudos on the author, because that guy knows his stuff. I don't know if he actually has that Fate-Knowledge Skill on EX+ Rank or just did heavy research for this book, but I believe Fate-fans won't be disappointed with the Lore or anything else. I am writing this review on chapter 9, but so far there are hardly points to criticize. It is rather lighthearted at this point, which is acceptable, because the MC is right now 15 years old, meaning we are still in the childhhod-arc, which will soon end and with progressing plot it will automatically turn darker afterall it is Fate. While lighthearted it isn't a story where the MC is completely chillaxed, shown in situations, where the MC is desperate to grow stronger. We are given insight into the world and also how some events in the 'background' affect the MC and his situation. Furthermore are the reasons/intentions of the interacting characters not only clear, which helps with understanding their actions, but also lore-accurate. These 2 points are not only seamlessly infused with the story development, but also, in my opinion, enhance the reading experience. So why did I only give 4 Stars in Updating Stability ? Because until now, one needs to wait for 2 days for a new chapter (sure the chapters are pretty long 3~5k, but still) and because there are pretty late uploaded it sometimes even feels like 3 days : ( . Overall a really enjoyable read ; ) . Also some personal plus-points about this story (WARNING SPOILER!): - No free wishes or something, but a transaction (meaning the MC gets benefits in exchange for something) -MC is pretty strong, while not overpowered (Think of it like that: the MC has the potential to be OP, but because of both his inexperience and age (both his and the present) he is limited for now) -MC is a noob regarding Fate-lore (while I enjoy reading a story about proganist, who knows how to use his knowledge to gain a edge, it is a trope that I have read too much currently and therefore like this approach of an MC who only has superficial knowledge) Personal minus-point (take it with a grain of salt): -Only 1 Female Lead, meaning NO-harem (this piont is both nice and sad, allow me to clarify; It is nice, because there will be no pokemon-catching here and we [the readers] will hopefully get a good romance-story 《as good or better as it can be in Fate》 ; It is sad, because many personal Waifus of us [readers] won't be making it to the promotion to romantic interest, which is kinda tragic, because FGO has many, but one can't have everything)
Tiết lộ Spoiler This fanfic is simply impressive. I rarely, if ever, find a fic where the lore is so well respected, in both the world building, and in how he portrays well known characters, as I don't find it hard to imagine most of them saying or acting in how the author portrays them. This is further shown when he summons his Servant, as they are not a prominent character in Fate, but he sticks to the lore on them, and even in the dream cycle, he follows the characters legends almost to the letter, but from their perspective. Another nice thing is that since the Mc is a Fate novice, we the reader get to learn side by side with him, allowing us to be on a relatively similar plane of understanding as the Mc, without needing to constantly check Wikipedia for the lore to understand what's going on. The most impressive part about it, is that it never comes across as condescending, weird or out of place when we learn a thing or two, and even with me knowing so much about the lore, I have been pleasantly surprised with how the Author has handled 'teaching' us it, without it getting repetitive. The Oc's are all well made, and lore accurate, making them refreshing to read about, as they seem genuine, and not just a plot device to further the story. The main character is clearly flawed in personality and is someone who starts out as a novice with all things regarding Fate, yet through the story he grows as both a person and magus. With the Grail War catapulting his character development, and it is a joy to read. The supporting cast is great, and I am find them as a great addition as they elevate the story. Another plus is that he has a proper family, as I am far too used to fanfictions having the main protagonist being an orphan or being distant with his relatives. While here, his mother plays a proper role in his life, and she is a good mother and is an engaging part of the story. The Servant he summons deserves its own long and detailed paragraph, but I do not wish to spoil who it is, but know that how they are characterized, and later change though the Grail War is impeccably handled. As I went from somewhat disliking the character due to who they were, and how they were acting towards best girl (You'll know who it is when you read), but now I can't help but love their character, and I wish the best for them and can't wait to see how the Author will handle their character, as I never expected to start liking them. When it comes to the story, the Author has clearly put in a lot of thought, and it feels natural for the most part, and very believable. Characters acting as they should, and the situation adapting to the changes are all handled well, and I am excited to see what the Author has in store for the finale of the Fourth Holy Grail War. When it comes to writing style, it is clear that he was a bit new to it in the beginning, but past chapter 9 he finds his rhythm, and the writing quality improves as a whole. I am as well very pleased with the chapters being so long, somewhere around four thousand words each if I am not mistaken, so that is a big plus. And the Authors consistency is great, as he posts at least twice a week, despite him having exams season. All in all, this has to be in my top five Fics that I have ever read, and I hope that Webnovel authors continue to impress like Leylin here. So, I wish you luck, Leylin Blackwood, and I hope you never drop this gem, as it would be a great shame!
Absolutely amazing Fate fanfic right here imo. Nearly flawless grammar and writing quality, engaging character interactions, well-planned plotlines, and extremely detailed (and basically flawless lore-wise) world background. The fight scenes are also very well done and quite exciting. Hell, the Author even replies to paragraph comments quite regularly! The only real demerits to the entire story for me are that the MC is a bit childish (being dumb, reckless, or arrogant in some cases but not too bad) and that the romance is REALLY slow. I stopped reading around Chapter 44 (to let more chapters build up); but up until that point there is almost no romance at all. There is definitely a good foundation for romance in the future; but it has been really bland in that department so far. This is definitely not a story for someone looking for fast paced romance. The Author also seems to lean towards having a single love interest — too bad Harem fans. Despite the lack of romance and some childish behavior by the MC, this is still one of the best Fate fanfics I've read personally. I'll definitely be coming back to read more after a surplus of chapters build up and possibly update or post a new review. Until then, keep up the good work Author and bravo.
Tiết lộ Spoiler This is the greatest fate fanfic i have ever read.The dynamic between morgan and the mc is so good.All the side characters are also written extremely well and the pacing is great too 5/5.
Excellent,the author mostly keeps the update calendar and the few exceptions he still manages to keep the quota of chapters,it has an excellent quality of writing with a very good character development and demeanor making it fit to the world and the magus society;the magecraft its a version more explored of what one can see in Fate/zero and stay night,because the mc's magecraft develops very well in a pragmatic way instead of the typical magus that focus on research and weird effects that takes lots of preparation or the crazy bastard of fate/zero(aka kiritsugu bin laden emiya) with a rocket launcher and a gun that only knows how to use his magic crest,reinforcement or basic magecraft;the author creates interesting parts that always makes one want to keep going and the lenght of the chapters is excellent and the author is always in contact with the readers and answer kindly to any question or complaint taking seriously your opinion
IF U WANT BIGGER MEAT 😉 Because i know us degenerates need all the inches we can get. All u need to do is read all chapters. I could not believe my eyes, my mighty pole had increased by a whopping 4 inches 😱 NOW, the old mighty glories being that is I, have passed the threshold of 5 inches and achieved Nirvana. I do no longer need to look at my little PP through a microscope, GLORY TO THE AUTHOR
Fanfiction Review: Fate/Fake Order by Hugh Janus “Fate/Fake Order” by Hugh Janus brings a fresh, lively spin to the Fate universe, centered around a dynamic new protagonist, Alastair. Alastair is openly and proudly gay, and his unapologetic personality adds a compelling twist to the high-stakes world of the Grail War. Hugh Janus has crafted a protagonist with depth and flair, making Alastair feel both relatable and unique within the context of the series. His witty, charming approach to the challenges he faces makes him a refreshing departure from the typical Fate mages. The story does an excellent job highlighting Alastair’s personality beyond his sexuality. Hugh Janus skillfully avoids stereotypes, instead building Alastair as a well-rounded character whose confidence and wit enhance each interaction. His flirtatious nature brings humor, especially in his banter with other mages and servants, yet there’s an emotional core to his character that adds layers to his journey. The bond between Alastair and his servant is one of the story’s highlights. Their relationship is beautifully written, evolving from cautious respect to a genuine partnership. Hugh Janus balances tension, humor, and heartfelt moments to give their dynamic a natural feel, making their journey together impactful and memorable. The action scenes are another strong point. Hugh Janus brings the combat to life with vivid, detailed descriptions that capture the intensity and strategy characteristic of Fate battles. The lore is expertly woven in, showing the author’s respect for the source material while adding their unique twist. Overall, “Fate/Fake Order” by Hugh Janus is an engaging read for Fate fans. Alastair is a memorable, fully realized protagonist whose story is as thrilling as it is heartfelt. Hugh Janus’s writing makes this fanfiction a standout, blending action, humor, and heart into a genuinely entertaining experience.
reading this work I get the feeling of a Chinese novel but about england. ( leaf juice lovers )
I personally recommend this fanfic to any fate fans out there as the author knows his lore and characters. So far it’s been an amazing read and everything felt natural and not forced (Plot). Looking forward to more updates, Good job, you’ve cooked👨🏻🍳🔥👌🏻
There is really not much to say. The author has extensive knowledge of the nasuverse and can come up with his reasonable fanon without creating any plot hole is respect to the og canon. Very enjoyable to read though I suppose that a new reader starting the novel might be bored in the first 4 chapter and feel like there might be some unexplainable things bit they are all wonderfully explained in the later chapters. And rember to watch the advertisement breaks.
The story is very good, although I feel the protagonist is a little weak at the beginning, later on he improves a little. I hope the story continues to improve from now on.
Absolute Cinema, need I say more? I think not. If one hath reached this mountain peak in an attempt to comprehend thy peak, then one shan't be disappointed. Thy Author comprehends thee lore. Thy Author comprehends thee power system. Thy Author comprehends thee personalities, and not only that-but exhibits them in an exceptional fashion. Standeth proud, upon thy peak. Thou holds a magnitude of strength.
To this time fic is very good and interesting i hope your quality wont decrease. Also please dont drop this i am very interested in Aleister journey and how he will deal with CounterForce contract. My choice for waifu is Morgan of course
19 chapters and I would say this fic is very good. the early chapters are a little boring with an introduction arc and a little training arc. however the story gets really fun after mc summons morgan.
I found the story and entered out of curiosity and now I'm counting the hours until the next chapter.
Very well written chapters, solid development, doesn’t take too long to set up the story, and the chat are entertaining. Hoping for more chapters
As there have been 16 chapters as of right now I thought I should do a review. •Let's first talk about the main character.He is well written and I like his personality that's all. I don't know what to say if you want to know more just read that fanfiction. • The secondary characters, the author really brings out the characters as they are originally interpreted in Type-Moon. It's enjoyable reading them as they have their own unique character. • Update--The author delivers the update as his promise. He didn't miss a single one as of it yet. ......................That's all..................... ~★Now sum of my personal thoughts on the two FML subjects I really hope that you make this a single female lead as I haven't read it any good fate FanFiction in years. If you do make this a two-female lead fanfiction, do give a heads up so I don't get disappointed so much. I want to say that I really enjoyed reading this so far.★~
A good ff that shows a lot of promise, well written characters and overall plot as of Vol.1 Ch15. Looking forward to see how the story continues to develop
5 stars, but since it's only chapter 11, I can't give one yet :( Wonderfully written ff for Nasu-Verse standards, it's as incredibly confusing as it needs to be (in a good way) and you can tell that the author has an idea of what he's writing. The True Ancestors and Apostles also appear well and not out of place in the story and I'm looking forward to the future chapters! The writing quality is also good,rare on this platform hahaha
Tiết lộ Spoiler In all honesty, One of the best books I've read on this damned app. As for writing this, A book like this is a damn gem that you won't find elsewhere. Give this author nothing but love and damn support because holy shit, He can cook. Although, The mc in this book does kinda piss me off for some unknown reason. Besides me being a cunt, the author can write one hell of a story.
I would say it is quite a good fate fanfiction. High quality with zero grammatical mistakes and big chapters. Author-san I hope you don't drop this fic. Well done, fan of your work.
I've been asked to leave this here. It's an amazing work so far, and I'm enjoying the ride peace
I have been asked for a review ...and i shall do so.... overall it's absolutely amazing so far. it has good updates which is much appreciated. and it has good world building. my only complaint is the mc is not sarcastic enough ...we need a little more.
This is clearly there best FF to ever exist! You want proof? Source: Trust me bro.