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the prologue is way too long! these powers are totally buggy and the author throws in countless amounts of information to make things appear normal. There are also inconsistencies within the relationships of the characters who are not supposed to know each other. The reactions of the characters are not logical with their characters and their profession. Midnight may be a good person but she's not going to cry like a fountain every 5 minutes or boil with anger! we must take into account that she is a heroine and must have seen many more tragic and sad things so she should have had a calm or even cold attitude towards the situation
The prologue is too long, and the story development is poor........................................................................................................................
I'm dropping this for a few reasons. 1. I don't like how fast he became so overpowered. It really takes away from the intensity of anything since he's already as strong or stronger than All Might before the canon even starts. So why would I need to continue reading when I know every fight is gonna end with him winning? That's boring unless it's a gag character like Saitama from One Punch Man. 2. He is so goddamn rude and arrogant to the other students. Bro they are literal children why tf are he being such a d*ckhead for no reason. And don't give me no bullsh*t like it's because of trauma. 3. The characters around Kai cater to him and don't call out when he's being a dick (except Momo sometime) and it's stupid. Most of the people around him are grown adults but believe this dude can do no wrong.
As others have said, this story is incredibly slow, and is mostly focused on the mc training in the early chapters, a lot, my main issue in the story comes from the interactions between characters. What I mean is that the main character has not grown as a person, now you can argue, “well if it’s a slow paced story, development is meant to be slow” but I’d like to argue, the longer it takes for a character to develop, the less likely I am to stick around to wait for the development to finally occur, he acts like a child even though he’s been introduced as this genius by taking out his anger on people who haven’t done anything wrong to him, he’s basically just a stronger Bakugo with worse attitude issues. And when other characters *cough cough* Momo keep trying to force him to do things, it makes him more volatile, but then he’ll roll over and do what she wants, and she keeps inserting herself into his business and inviting other people into his spaces then when he reacts bad, he’s wrong. And yes, there are some characters that he does have good relationships with, but he’s still a douche to 90% of them who haven’t done anything to deserve it. TLDR: The story is slow and the mc has yet to make any significant personality changes for the better, no I’m not saying to make him a self sacrificing person, that’s not his personality, just to be a decent human
MC is an unlikable arrogant prick that hates the idea of being a hero. The FF started really well, but it slowly started to get worse and worse, really falling when the MC tells the police chief to his face that he will kill his enemies in the future. The MC just gets progressively worse until he starts knocking people out in school and acting like an asshole to everyone. Some people will say “he had a difficult 2 lives” and some bullshit, but no matter how difficult your life was doesn’t mean you get to act like an asshole. No excuse you could make would make me like this MC, and the way the girls just ignore how bad his personality is towards other people is stupid, especially Momo who sees how he treats his classmates and even heroes.
ok first things first it's a good work but is it amazing then no far from it it laterally took me 50 something chapters to see any kind of development from anyone other than the main character we didn't get any glimpse of any enemy except bioblast the more i read i try not to cringe and like most of the mha fanfics out there of course you included momo and hado in this somehow probably going to make them both his main love interest and probably midnight too somewhere along the line like the power systems you put are one of the most versatile but you didn't take advantage of that you could have copied some reference from hxh like gon rock paper scissors or kilua electricity
I like the slow pace in this novel, the world background and development is quite good. The mc slowly makes more abilitys and shows more abilitys through out the story which always keeps me exicted. All the bad reviews on this novel are from people do appreaciate a good webnovel and skip chapter cause they want the mc to be in ua within the first 4 chapters. Overall a lovely novel
This novel is actually pretty good past chapter 40. If there is one word I’d use to describe this fanfic….
Una buena lectura con una gramática y traducción fluida, la historia es entretenida y lo es más el MC con su Nen y Haki aprovechando su intelecto y resaltar su versatilidad y creatividad al desarrollar sus habilidades
Shotacon? Nah, pego minha baike e dou o fora daqui. .................. .............................. ......... ....................... .............................
It's slow for awhile but if you persevere you get rewarded with a good story. I like the dynamic between the characters and the how they aren't copies of their anime selves. The prologue was refreshing since it's not like all the other isekai'd fanfics. I like the MC's personality and I'm excited to see how he interacts and shocks the other students of UA. Keep up the good work. Though I hope you never end up doing another long part, similar to the prologue leading up to UA.
it's well written and and interesting idea to me, but 40 chapters in and it's just constant depression and self blame. the constant info dumps are boring and distract me lol. oh and at this point, don't expect the Mc to actually care about anyone. author made it so he's such a whiny loser that he's already given up on making friends, lovers, family members, he has those, but doesn't want them to be a distraction because his whole purpose to become stronger is so he can protect his mommy in his next life, if he gets one lol. I really enjoyed this for a bit, info dumps waiting but whatever, but I'm just tired of reading it lol. whatever progress does get made in personal relationships seems like he doesn't want it, but just goes with the flow to not upset anyone
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to be honest, it could have been good, the prologue started off great, but then the level started to drop more and more, which was very frustrating, the female characters are shown as hypersensitive crybabies, which does not correspond to reality, from the very beginning the main character is surrounded by girls/women who behave inappropriately, justifying this by the fact that our OC is a continuation of his mother, which I personally find questionable, I also think that the author has problems with power scaling
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Premature review I think, only read up to chapter 8 but I have high hopes for the story regardless, the updating stability is what prompted me to write the review rn instead of waiting until I’ve read it through, an author with this level of dedication deserves this much at least. I hope reading the later chapters are just as enjoyable :)
Good, stable characterization of MC. (I dislike the flip-flopping characters) Interesting power development and research. (Would have like to see some more action as the powers develop) Good grammar and writing clarity. (Bad flow, see below as the main culprit) First 20+ chapters has way to much crying/emotions in it. Feels odd when it gets mixed together within paragraphs with sexual description and what not. Lots could be cut out and re-organized to stream line and condense the story. (I especially found the one scene of the funeral with description of the sexy outfits mixed in disturbing...)
The prologue and the 1 2 chapter pretty good after that it start going downhill
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Definitely a goated novel. It is a bit slow, so if you expect constant balls-to-the-walls nonstop action, this probably isn't for you, but if you can tolerate that it is a great novel. Not to mention the MC has Nen and Haki as a quirk? A wonderful premise.
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I liked it a lot, the writing is good, reasonably long chapters, my only complaint is the slow progress, almost 50 chapters and it hasn't entered the official list yet, I understand the character's development and why it gave a lot of life to his story, but it's a matter of taste. I myself don't like big backstories like that, basically I know Kai's childhood more than Midoriwa's
The prologue was trash and had too much info-dumping. Not to mention, this is a slow-paced novel—40 chapters in and it hasn't even reached UA yet? The pre-harem setup felt way too forced. If it were just one or two people, I could agree, but Nejire and Yaomomo? In canon, they didn't even know each other in childhood. Also, what's with every woman here being a shotacon?
Really liked it, i read all the current chapters in one go, and the grammar is good enough. The author takes care to write a good world background, and explanations of surroundings but it could be better. The story development is nice and the character design is well done. Updates are consistent which is good and it shows that author tries hard to research things to explain. I quite liked that author tries to explain things properly and on point, it explains what needs to be explained with the abilities which I liked. So far there is only one short lemon and it was good while also showing the emotions of the characters and their feelings about which shows that the character have real feelings.
Me gusta mucho el trabajo que estás haciendo, escribo esto por el comentario de que hay gente que no le gusta lo lento que va la historia, a mi me parece que esta perfecto el desarrollo que lleva la historia. ya que si no fuera así con la cantidad de habilidades y relaciones del protagonista, todo sería muy apresurado sin contexto alguno de por qué están en una relación. de mi parte encuentro perfecto el desarrollo. sigue así 💯💯
It’s a decent MHA fanfic so I suggest you atleast give it like 5 chapters and you might like it.
I love this story, if the reviews are not constructive criticism and are just people trying to make you feel bad then you should just ignore them.
Well, since I was missing one review to reach 10, I'm shamelessly doing it myself. Also, I'll take the opportunity to clarify that although the story has a dramatic beginning and there may be a bit more drama in the future, this novel is not a tragic one
the prologue is way too long! these powers are totally buggy and the author throws in countless amounts of information to make things appear normal. There are also inconsistencies within the relationships of the characters who are not supposed to know each other. The reactions of the characters are not logical with their characters and their profession. Midnight may be a good person but she's not going to cry like a fountain every 5 minutes or boil with anger! we must take into account that she is a heroine and must have seen many more tragic and sad things so she should have had a calm or even cold attitude towards the situation
The prologue is too long, and the story development is poor........................................................................................................................
I'm dropping this for a few reasons. 1. I don't like how fast he became so overpowered. It really takes away from the intensity of anything since he's already as strong or stronger than All Might before the canon even starts. So why would I need to continue reading when I know every fight is gonna end with him winning? That's boring unless it's a gag character like Saitama from One Punch Man. 2. He is so goddamn rude and arrogant to the other students. Bro they are literal children why tf are he being such a d*ckhead for no reason. And don't give me no bullsh*t like it's because of trauma. 3. The characters around Kai cater to him and don't call out when he's being a dick (except Momo sometime) and it's stupid. Most of the people around him are grown adults but believe this dude can do no wrong.
As others have said, this story is incredibly slow, and is mostly focused on the mc training in the early chapters, a lot, my main issue in the story comes from the interactions between characters. What I mean is that the main character has not grown as a person, now you can argue, “well if it’s a slow paced story, development is meant to be slow” but I’d like to argue, the longer it takes for a character to develop, the less likely I am to stick around to wait for the development to finally occur, he acts like a child even though he’s been introduced as this genius by taking out his anger on people who haven’t done anything wrong to him, he’s basically just a stronger Bakugo with worse attitude issues. And when other characters *cough cough* Momo keep trying to force him to do things, it makes him more volatile, but then he’ll roll over and do what she wants, and she keeps inserting herself into his business and inviting other people into his spaces then when he reacts bad, he’s wrong. And yes, there are some characters that he does have good relationships with, but he’s still a douche to 90% of them who haven’t done anything to deserve it. TLDR: The story is slow and the mc has yet to make any significant personality changes for the better, no I’m not saying to make him a self sacrificing person, that’s not his personality, just to be a decent human
MC is an unlikable arrogant prick that hates the idea of being a hero. The FF started really well, but it slowly started to get worse and worse, really falling when the MC tells the police chief to his face that he will kill his enemies in the future. The MC just gets progressively worse until he starts knocking people out in school and acting like an asshole to everyone. Some people will say “he had a difficult 2 lives” and some bullshit, but no matter how difficult your life was doesn’t mean you get to act like an asshole. No excuse you could make would make me like this MC, and the way the girls just ignore how bad his personality is towards other people is stupid, especially Momo who sees how he treats his classmates and even heroes.
ok first things first it's a good work but is it amazing then no far from it it laterally took me 50 something chapters to see any kind of development from anyone other than the main character we didn't get any glimpse of any enemy except bioblast the more i read i try not to cringe and like most of the mha fanfics out there of course you included momo and hado in this somehow probably going to make them both his main love interest and probably midnight too somewhere along the line like the power systems you put are one of the most versatile but you didn't take advantage of that you could have copied some reference from hxh like gon rock paper scissors or kilua electricity
I like the slow pace in this novel, the world background and development is quite good. The mc slowly makes more abilitys and shows more abilitys through out the story which always keeps me exicted. All the bad reviews on this novel are from people do appreaciate a good webnovel and skip chapter cause they want the mc to be in ua within the first 4 chapters. Overall a lovely novel
This novel is actually pretty good past chapter 40. If there is one word I’d use to describe this fanfic….
Una buena lectura con una gramática y traducción fluida, la historia es entretenida y lo es más el MC con su Nen y Haki aprovechando su intelecto y resaltar su versatilidad y creatividad al desarrollar sus habilidades
Shotacon? Nah, pego minha baike e dou o fora daqui. .................. .............................. ......... ....................... .............................
It's slow for awhile but if you persevere you get rewarded with a good story. I like the dynamic between the characters and the how they aren't copies of their anime selves. The prologue was refreshing since it's not like all the other isekai'd fanfics. I like the MC's personality and I'm excited to see how he interacts and shocks the other students of UA. Keep up the good work. Though I hope you never end up doing another long part, similar to the prologue leading up to UA.
it's well written and and interesting idea to me, but 40 chapters in and it's just constant depression and self blame. the constant info dumps are boring and distract me lol. oh and at this point, don't expect the Mc to actually care about anyone. author made it so he's such a whiny loser that he's already given up on making friends, lovers, family members, he has those, but doesn't want them to be a distraction because his whole purpose to become stronger is so he can protect his mommy in his next life, if he gets one lol. I really enjoyed this for a bit, info dumps waiting but whatever, but I'm just tired of reading it lol. whatever progress does get made in personal relationships seems like he doesn't want it, but just goes with the flow to not upset anyone
Tiết lộ Spoiler to be honest, it could have been good, the prologue started off great, but then the level started to drop more and more, which was very frustrating, the female characters are shown as hypersensitive crybabies, which does not correspond to reality, from the very beginning the main character is surrounded by girls/women who behave inappropriately, justifying this by the fact that our OC is a continuation of his mother, which I personally find questionable, I also think that the author has problems with power scaling
Tiết lộ Spoiler Premature review I think, only read up to chapter 8 but I have high hopes for the story regardless, the updating stability is what prompted me to write the review rn instead of waiting until I’ve read it through, an author with this level of dedication deserves this much at least. I hope reading the later chapters are just as enjoyable :)
Good, stable characterization of MC. (I dislike the flip-flopping characters) Interesting power development and research. (Would have like to see some more action as the powers develop) Good grammar and writing clarity. (Bad flow, see below as the main culprit) First 20+ chapters has way to much crying/emotions in it. Feels odd when it gets mixed together within paragraphs with sexual description and what not. Lots could be cut out and re-organized to stream line and condense the story. (I especially found the one scene of the funeral with description of the sexy outfits mixed in disturbing...)
The prologue and the 1 2 chapter pretty good after that it start going downhill
Ouah tout le monde écoute le MC pour aucune raison et personne ne le remet en doute [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
Definitely a goated novel. It is a bit slow, so if you expect constant balls-to-the-walls nonstop action, this probably isn't for you, but if you can tolerate that it is a great novel. Not to mention the MC has Nen and Haki as a quirk? A wonderful premise.
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I liked it a lot, the writing is good, reasonably long chapters, my only complaint is the slow progress, almost 50 chapters and it hasn't entered the official list yet, I understand the character's development and why it gave a lot of life to his story, but it's a matter of taste. I myself don't like big backstories like that, basically I know Kai's childhood more than Midoriwa's
The prologue was trash and had too much info-dumping. Not to mention, this is a slow-paced novel—40 chapters in and it hasn't even reached UA yet? The pre-harem setup felt way too forced. If it were just one or two people, I could agree, but Nejire and Yaomomo? In canon, they didn't even know each other in childhood. Also, what's with every woman here being a shotacon?
Really liked it, i read all the current chapters in one go, and the grammar is good enough. The author takes care to write a good world background, and explanations of surroundings but it could be better. The story development is nice and the character design is well done. Updates are consistent which is good and it shows that author tries hard to research things to explain. I quite liked that author tries to explain things properly and on point, it explains what needs to be explained with the abilities which I liked. So far there is only one short lemon and it was good while also showing the emotions of the characters and their feelings about which shows that the character have real feelings.
Me gusta mucho el trabajo que estás haciendo, escribo esto por el comentario de que hay gente que no le gusta lo lento que va la historia, a mi me parece que esta perfecto el desarrollo que lleva la historia. ya que si no fuera así con la cantidad de habilidades y relaciones del protagonista, todo sería muy apresurado sin contexto alguno de por qué están en una relación. de mi parte encuentro perfecto el desarrollo. sigue así 💯💯
It’s a decent MHA fanfic so I suggest you atleast give it like 5 chapters and you might like it.
I love this story, if the reviews are not constructive criticism and are just people trying to make you feel bad then you should just ignore them.
Well, since I was missing one review to reach 10, I'm shamelessly doing it myself. Also, I'll take the opportunity to clarify that although the story has a dramatic beginning and there may be a bit more drama in the future, this novel is not a tragic one