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great fanfiction, honestly I just missed the author emphasizing some skills he has, for example: the protagonist's highly evolved observation haki, I only realized it later that I saw him reading the mind by haki Well, even though I think it's a bit stolen, I can actually swallow this ability, now one thing that took me seriously was the protagonist's exaggerated confidence in relation to his level of skill... In his words, he is already at vice admiral level or was vice captain at basic level, (I don't remember the correct word) it's good to remember that the chronological line of his training I have no idea, the author So far, it hasn't specified how much training the protagonist has had, something that has disappointed me a lot so far, after all I like to see the protagonist's evolution in a chronological line.
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Great work the translation is good love the good work 👍👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
great fanfiction, honestly I just missed the author emphasizing some skills he has, for example: the protagonist's highly evolved observation haki, I only realized it later that I saw him reading the mind by haki Well, even though I think it's a bit stolen, I can actually swallow this ability, now one thing that took me seriously was the protagonist's exaggerated confidence in relation to his level of skill... In his words, he is already at vice admiral level or was vice captain at basic level, (I don't remember the correct word) it's good to remember that the chronological line of his training I have no idea, the author So far, it hasn't specified how much training the protagonist has had, something that has disappointed me a lot so far, after all I like to see the protagonist's evolution in a chronological line.
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