/ Fantasy / 30-Night Journeys
4.81 (14 số lượng người đọc)
Tóm tắt
In the land of trials, Gantlet, every night brings new faces of catastrophes in the form of monsters and nature. Renir Ennure was brought to this world, weak, forgotten, devastated, and dejected. Everything was unknown to him in the land of trials.
How is he brought there and why? Is he the only one?
But the dusks did not bestow him the luxury to think as what he needed to do was SURVIVE EVERY NIGHT!
Journey with Renir to encounter why the stars gathered and wild around the moon. And how he will use his new given ability, provided by Gantlet:
The power to Evolve.
Thẻ
Bạn cũng có thể thích
4.81
Chia sẻ suy nghĩ của bạn với người khác
Viết đánh giáWriting quality: Highly well done. Little to no grammer mistakes. High quality writing Update stability: From what I am seeing currently I have been getting chapters consistently Story development: Although there are some instances of plot armor it doesn't detract from the story and there are very rarely any tropes. Pacing does not feel fast but never feels slow and the story develops beautifully. I always find myself looking forward to new chapters. (I normally wait until there are 8+ chapters to pile up before I read them because I won't be satisfied reading 1-2 chapters a day) Charecter design: One of the strongest points in the story are the charecters. All are very realistic and the protagonist Renir is a naive MC. This MC is quite a rarity in webnovel but it also what makes this unique. Over the course of these 100 chapters I have read the charecter development of Renir is one of the best I have seen in webnovel. Although there are not many charecters all of them are unique and rich as well as the charecter interactions feel very real. World background: The world of Gantlet is described quite well and isn't given all at once like an info dump. You slowly discover new information about this mysterious world and the different stages in it. I really feel like I am within the story and never breaks the immersion which is the downfall of many novels. Overall a top tier book in webnovel that is severely underrated. This novel is the definition of a hidden gem. Keep it up author 👍
This story is one of my personal favorites. It has great world-building and an interesting power system. The characters and their actions are explained well and feel very real. The world and interactions are somewhat mysterious at first, but the author steadily divulges info through dialogue and descriptions in a refreshing way without much info-dumping. Updates aren't a problem, only issue is the poorer grammar and writing early on. Chapter 90 onwards sees a significant improvement in writing quality and consistency though. Overall, a unique world/story with loveable characters and a plot with real pressure that really pulls you in. The MC is probably too naive for some tastes and the story starts slow, but it really picks up leaving you just wanting more. Really can't say enough praise about this book, if the writing quality and slow-start are turning you off, give it a shot, I'm sure you'll be suprised :-) TLDR: This series is a hidden gem
Yes, shameless.................................. .......... Another shameless author here. But honestly, I think this will be thrilling.
I just finished the first volume and I have to say the book was really good so far. It has a nice world building and a nice story, the character design is also quite good (but I really don't like the MC since he is way too kind and forgiving, but this is just my personal opinion, since these character trades are quite important for the story). I would recommend it to read tho, since it's certainly worth a shot (:
I don't think this is a good book at first, especially since almost every book in fantasy is very cliche in particular. I'm glad this book is good so I need a little bit of time to finish it. Author, try to release twice a day.
I don't know if you dropped this work author, but I figured I'd make one final review if you did :-( I've made a reveiw already so I'll just summarize (slight spoiler not really): The writing and grammar is not that great overall, but is not impossible to understand. The story was nicely unfolded, keeping me engaged in the characters and lore despite some shortcomings. I really came to care about Renir and his struggles and I truly hope to one day see his battle against the celestials culminate. Hopefully this novel is just on hiatus because I was waiting for more chapters to come out, when I noticed they stopped coming. Regardless of the author's intentions, I'm grateful for what he has writtent his far :-) Cheers bro, best of luck writing and hopefully I'll get to see this journey's end one day <3
I love this novel pretty much. I stumbled across it in the forum and I'm glad that I find it. Story-wise, it has many potential, but need a little bid of WD-40.
Never had the account, created literally just for this novel, because I could not anymore. Writting Quality is 2/5 for me, I guess it could go to 2,5 but that is at best, and only on select chapters. There are a lot of grammar mistakes, I would recommend for author to get a proofreader, since you said, that you spent a lot of time thinking for a plot which you enjoy writting, you should also want for others to enjoy reading it. And writting quality which reminds me of google translate, just takes it away from me. In the begining I was just telling myself, that at some point, it's gonna get better, tried to rethink every sentence in my head for it to sound better, but after 45 chapters, I just can't anymore. The concept of a story is interesting and engaging, so I don't have any complaints about that, it is not unique, but it is original, so it's 5/5 from me. Character design is 3/5, average I would say, to be honest I don't understand how mc brains work at all. He experienced literal hell on Earth, which for most kids/teenagers would lead straight to death, no joke. He doesnt have any goals, no dreams, but somehow he still has attachment to Earth, which in critical moments on the journey allows him to power up and endure the pressure of death and conquer it, which doesnt make sense at all to me. Why would he want to go back to Earth, if he doesnt have any good memories of it. And he doesnt want revenge, so that leaves even less reason for it. Well I guess I will never know, because I will drop it at chapter 45. For World Background, I rated 4/5, I would of rated it 3, but since I didnt finish the novel I can't, because it might be explained later on. But in the earliest chapters there is almost nothing, whispers at least, rumours at best. Nothing solid. So for those of you who can endure bad grammar, it should be worth a try, after all you can't know how something tastes if you never tried eating it, it's not for me, but it might be for you. P.S I don't really believe there is only 11 reviews on this novel, which is read by 470k people, so if my comment dissapears, Im gonna save it just in case, and gonna post it again.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Sometimes, I read the forum on this site and luckily, I stumbled across this novel. To my surprise, a level 2 user actually can write a good story. Keep up the good works author
I love this novel, it's objectively better than most of the other novels on this site. This novel actually follows a thought out story with a unique character... a break from all of the writers slapping some generic main character through template scenarios that have been seen in every other novel of the same vein. As of now it's been 9 months since the last chapter and I don't know if it will ever be continued but it's worth a read anyway. I'm still hoping for a new chapter.
Tác giả JhiThan_Ser
Woooh! I just finished the first arc of this story, and I truthfully believe that this is one of the best stories I've ever read and trust me, I've read a lot. The novel is well-thought of, awesome, original and unique, there has never been a dull moment from start to finish. So that is why I recommend and suggest you read this novel, reasons why: Translation/Writing Quality: The translation is superb, it's like the kind of stories you read fluently without having to stop halfway every sentence just to correct a misspelt word or mistake. I've seen little to no errors regarding the punctuation or grammar so it's easier to understand what's going on. Updating Speed: It's one of the great things I like about this story; Evaluating this novel's update speed to other novels I've read out there is simply a farcry in comparison to this one. I love binge reading, 2 chapters a day, everyday (is the best your gonna get) is enough for me. World Building: Unlike, a few stories I've read up online and here, (this one included) the build up is nice, as it gives you the information and roles of other places, and doesn't just throw stuff at you and expects you to 'adapt' like the main character (unless you can) but, also describes where the MC stands, gives the necessary information and gives you that feeling of being within the story, and not just a reader. Character Design: Though this is a survival based story and has some-what a limited amount of characters; each and every one of them are well-tailored out and have unique personalities with different stories. Story Development: The plot of this story is truly fascinating I say, I've read plenty stories and translated novels online to know that this piece of work has little to no tropes in it. The pacing of the story is actually persistent, not too fast(to skip the good parts out) and not to slow(never leaves you yawning), as the MC doesn't just become over-powered 'over night' (get it😏). It pulls and keeps your attention, because once you start your gonna wanna finish; always on the edge of your seat. An amazing and exciting story, never a dull moment. Keep up the good work Author. I rate this 5 stars!