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Review from mwah, the most awesome person in the world(kidding yall are way cooler) anyways this is an unordinary fic and uh yea, that's it just read and find out
I'll be honest, I have no idea what's going on here. Who is our MC, other than the fact that he is Remi's brother? You wrote in the synopsis that he was thrown into the world. It sounds like he is not originally from the world, but that is not mentioned anywhere, so I am obviously very confused. Then we have the fact that he has no ability. Not gonna lie, I don't know how he intends to make any impact at all in the story to come. The grammar is okay, but the characters feel very off. Sometimes they talk like battle-hardened veteran generals discussing war when in reality they are children and never behave like this in the manga. It's all very strange. I give you 3 stars out of respect because you're right, there are almost no good UnOrdinary fanfics, or any at all.
tbh i don't have any idea about this and i haven't read it but im nust curios if his a reincanatir and has no power then what the heck is the purpose of the mc what he gonna do learn some martial arts let say that he can fight the low ranks but even them have a enchants strength when they activate their abilities what's more when it came to the high rank seira has the ability to stop time in a dome that alone is enough to defeat him arlo aunt has a lava claw like finger one slash and his dead plus jonh aura manipulation which give him the ability to copr the aura of the person thus giving him the ability of the aura he copied then enchance it sure let say if he manage to integrate the one piece 6 marine stlye would that be enough seira alone can kill him if she wanted to
Review from mwah, the most awesome person in the world(kidding yall are way cooler) anyways this is an unordinary fic and uh yea, that's it just read and find out
I'll be honest, I have no idea what's going on here. Who is our MC, other than the fact that he is Remi's brother? You wrote in the synopsis that he was thrown into the world. It sounds like he is not originally from the world, but that is not mentioned anywhere, so I am obviously very confused. Then we have the fact that he has no ability. Not gonna lie, I don't know how he intends to make any impact at all in the story to come. The grammar is okay, but the characters feel very off. Sometimes they talk like battle-hardened veteran generals discussing war when in reality they are children and never behave like this in the manga. It's all very strange. I give you 3 stars out of respect because you're right, there are almost no good UnOrdinary fanfics, or any at all.
tbh i don't have any idea about this and i haven't read it but im nust curios if his a reincanatir and has no power then what the heck is the purpose of the mc what he gonna do learn some martial arts let say that he can fight the low ranks but even them have a enchants strength when they activate their abilities what's more when it came to the high rank seira has the ability to stop time in a dome that alone is enough to defeat him arlo aunt has a lava claw like finger one slash and his dead plus jonh aura manipulation which give him the ability to copr the aura of the person thus giving him the ability of the aura he copied then enchance it sure let say if he manage to integrate the one piece 6 marine stlye would that be enough seira alone can kill him if she wanted to