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Viết đánh giáSlow pace but still an enyoble story that make me want to come back for more. Sometimes stick a bit to close to orginal story but as we get further in we get some big changes. Also I prefer this Naruto over the original one
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I love this fanfic, because i love naruto and cultivation novels and this is a mix of both. Writing quality is good as well.
Warning! Read at your own risk. It's a masterpiece of a story. Read until chapter 170. If this story goes as it has, we will soon have another gem among the novels. I just want to thank the author for this wonderful book.[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Sadly a bust at chapter 76 it is a 1 to 1 rewriting of Naruto. The only real difference is that naruto has a other personality but all in all makes all the exact same decisions as in the original just far more unbelievable (half the time I think what an as pull).
The novel is written well, even the story is mostly same with original naruto i still convince myself to read as to remind me the good old days naruto, but in this novel that irk me the most is the slow pace, the short arc can take 20+ chp while on other fanfic only take 3-4 chp and the long arc is take almost damn 100 chp, i wonder when the author will finish this fanfic or just drop it in the middle.
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Very very good, one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read. The story starts out slow, with a cultivator whose immortal frame of reference causes him to lack time to gain the strength necessary to change the events around him... For the start at least. It's really cool to see his interactions with the other characters, and the author has done very well at keeping all of the characters real and true to their designs. A very good read. I'm still eagerly anticipating what comes next, and I'm already 150+ chapters in!
I genuinely have no complaints, Not aggressively cheesy, the right amount of action, and plot. Well done author. I recommend you give this a read.
I might be rating this too early but the story so far is very good. Grammar is nice and there are no repeated words like you see in AI assisted writing. The character of MC is very nice. He isn't and edgelord nor some hidden deep character. So far MC is just a really straightforward person. Pacing is slow but I am just enjoying reading a different and a sensible version of Naruto here. And the cultivator aspect is also nice so far. There has been no attempt to rename existing Naruto world techniques into something in Chinese etc. The cultivation aspect is separate and unique from the existing Ninjutsu and blending is done carefully into the setting. In short this is a fanfic worth reading. Feels like 5/5 so far to me
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Tiết lộ SpoilerRead up to current chapter. Its just overall pretty boring. They skip over any and all training that could show the diff between power structures. But the thing I dislike the most is that I am left expecting something more that will never come. He is supposed to ge a cultivator yet is messing around with kids his age. He has no pride that cultivators usually have and he seems like he was just kind of a random cultivator from his world. Also, idk if this is for author to keep plot aligned with OG plot or what but it is kind of annoying waiting for new chapters just to be disappointed time and time again. He just lets sasuke go and do whatever emo shit he wants under the guise of “ill mind my own business” yet he ends up dragged into his bullshit in the end anyways. He puts up with kakashe basically teaching him jack shit as well. Had so much potential but overall just a wasted opportunity. And dont even get me started on the forced bs with mc and ino cause author gotta have a harem tag.
Top interessante a história queria ver as mudanças que vão acontecer e o nível de poder ele vai alcançar ainda não entendi o ranking de poder que ele trouxe consigo.
Worth it. If you've read lots of Naruto Fanfics and are looking for a good one, this one is fantastic. I have over 700 hours of reading time on Webnovel, with lots of Naruto Fanfics and this is amazing .
Another missed opportunity, 120 chapters and the only thing different from the anime and dialogue and some naruto techniques, it had potential but the author can't move far from the canon.
I’ve made it to ch 50… it’s still the same story as the original. Genin exam with the same interactions (sand siblings, hokage grandson) only difference is the dialogue
Firstly, I would like to commend the author for creating a great foundation. The story until now has shown a lot of potential in the small changes that I can see impacting the late-game stages in a great manner. The characters feel like people and can be said to have the reactions of normal people( as normal as you can get in nations monetizing murder). I think the power scale matching between Xianxia and Naruto world has also been done well, with body forging peak analogous to Lee's full strength in the exams. Overall, good pacing, fleshed out characters, would love to read more. Once again, Thank you author
Tiết lộ SpoilerI’ve read up to chapter 91 and I’m really looking forward to the rest, the story is really well written with the characters acting as they would in canon, its clear the author has a great understanding of them. The MC is another highlight, we don’t know all that much about him but he seems similar to a “Orthodox cultivator” you’d find in Murim novels, kind when needed but brutal as well. The only gripe I have are that the chapters are quite short but the stable updates more than make up for it. Give this one a read!
Can’t wait to see the next chapter and love the way Naruto react to the world and how his cultivation works and how the world views him and how he’s breaking the preconceived ideas of his personality and actions
I stand corrected, its actually pretty good read, dont let this fools persuade you to not read the novel, its very much worth the read.
This story is just straight up bad, everything is copy and pasted from the anime with slight changes and the mc is supposed to be from the murim with an unparalleled cultivation technique and yet nothings changing from the canon 73 chapters in.
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Got mixed feeling about this story. On one hand we get a calm and mature Naruto without any future extra knowledge about this world but on the other one we still get the same story that we all know. The path that mc takes is a bit different, but it still reaches the same destination.
Honesty, it isn't bad if you just ignore the fact that the entire fic is basically the OG Naruto storyline with a calm MC who shows one or two moves from his previous world every 20 chapters later. Still, his overall strength is somehow equal to the OG Naruto even now. So, I'll just drop it instead of waiting for this to get better.
Basically a complete rehash of the original with a smarter naruto. Until now there hasn’t been a difference in plot but it’s to be expected since the mc wants to run low. I’ll Be dropping it since It’ll probably keep following this trend. Good writing tho
This is a gem, currently one of my favorites reads. Keep up the good work author, I’m lovin it and u
Slow pace but still an enyoble story that make me want to come back for more. Sometimes stick a bit to close to orginal story but as we get further in we get some big changes. Also I prefer this Naruto over the original one
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I love this fanfic, because i love naruto and cultivation novels and this is a mix of both. Writing quality is good as well.
Warning! Read at your own risk. It's a masterpiece of a story. Read until chapter 170. If this story goes as it has, we will soon have another gem among the novels. I just want to thank the author for this wonderful book.[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Sadly a bust at chapter 76 it is a 1 to 1 rewriting of Naruto. The only real difference is that naruto has a other personality but all in all makes all the exact same decisions as in the original just far more unbelievable (half the time I think what an as pull).
The novel is written well, even the story is mostly same with original naruto i still convince myself to read as to remind me the good old days naruto, but in this novel that irk me the most is the slow pace, the short arc can take 20+ chp while on other fanfic only take 3-4 chp and the long arc is take almost damn 100 chp, i wonder when the author will finish this fanfic or just drop it in the middle.
Top muito bom 👏👏👏👏👏 parabéns essa história 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Very very good, one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read. The story starts out slow, with a cultivator whose immortal frame of reference causes him to lack time to gain the strength necessary to change the events around him... For the start at least. It's really cool to see his interactions with the other characters, and the author has done very well at keeping all of the characters real and true to their designs. A very good read. I'm still eagerly anticipating what comes next, and I'm already 150+ chapters in!
I genuinely have no complaints, Not aggressively cheesy, the right amount of action, and plot. Well done author. I recommend you give this a read.
I might be rating this too early but the story so far is very good. Grammar is nice and there are no repeated words like you see in AI assisted writing. The character of MC is very nice. He isn't and edgelord nor some hidden deep character. So far MC is just a really straightforward person. Pacing is slow but I am just enjoying reading a different and a sensible version of Naruto here. And the cultivator aspect is also nice so far. There has been no attempt to rename existing Naruto world techniques into something in Chinese etc. The cultivation aspect is separate and unique from the existing Ninjutsu and blending is done carefully into the setting. In short this is a fanfic worth reading. Feels like 5/5 so far to me
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Tiết lộ SpoilerRead up to current chapter. Its just overall pretty boring. They skip over any and all training that could show the diff between power structures. But the thing I dislike the most is that I am left expecting something more that will never come. He is supposed to ge a cultivator yet is messing around with kids his age. He has no pride that cultivators usually have and he seems like he was just kind of a random cultivator from his world. Also, idk if this is for author to keep plot aligned with OG plot or what but it is kind of annoying waiting for new chapters just to be disappointed time and time again. He just lets sasuke go and do whatever emo shit he wants under the guise of “ill mind my own business” yet he ends up dragged into his bullshit in the end anyways. He puts up with kakashe basically teaching him jack shit as well. Had so much potential but overall just a wasted opportunity. And dont even get me started on the forced bs with mc and ino cause author gotta have a harem tag.
Top interessante a história queria ver as mudanças que vão acontecer e o nível de poder ele vai alcançar ainda não entendi o ranking de poder que ele trouxe consigo.
Worth it. If you've read lots of Naruto Fanfics and are looking for a good one, this one is fantastic. I have over 700 hours of reading time on Webnovel, with lots of Naruto Fanfics and this is amazing .
Another missed opportunity, 120 chapters and the only thing different from the anime and dialogue and some naruto techniques, it had potential but the author can't move far from the canon.
I’ve made it to ch 50… it’s still the same story as the original. Genin exam with the same interactions (sand siblings, hokage grandson) only difference is the dialogue
Firstly, I would like to commend the author for creating a great foundation. The story until now has shown a lot of potential in the small changes that I can see impacting the late-game stages in a great manner. The characters feel like people and can be said to have the reactions of normal people( as normal as you can get in nations monetizing murder). I think the power scale matching between Xianxia and Naruto world has also been done well, with body forging peak analogous to Lee's full strength in the exams. Overall, good pacing, fleshed out characters, would love to read more. Once again, Thank you author
Tiết lộ SpoilerI’ve read up to chapter 91 and I’m really looking forward to the rest, the story is really well written with the characters acting as they would in canon, its clear the author has a great understanding of them. The MC is another highlight, we don’t know all that much about him but he seems similar to a “Orthodox cultivator” you’d find in Murim novels, kind when needed but brutal as well. The only gripe I have are that the chapters are quite short but the stable updates more than make up for it. Give this one a read!
Can’t wait to see the next chapter and love the way Naruto react to the world and how his cultivation works and how the world views him and how he’s breaking the preconceived ideas of his personality and actions
I stand corrected, its actually pretty good read, dont let this fools persuade you to not read the novel, its very much worth the read.
This story is just straight up bad, everything is copy and pasted from the anime with slight changes and the mc is supposed to be from the murim with an unparalleled cultivation technique and yet nothings changing from the canon 73 chapters in.
gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
Got mixed feeling about this story. On one hand we get a calm and mature Naruto without any future extra knowledge about this world but on the other one we still get the same story that we all know. The path that mc takes is a bit different, but it still reaches the same destination.
Honesty, it isn't bad if you just ignore the fact that the entire fic is basically the OG Naruto storyline with a calm MC who shows one or two moves from his previous world every 20 chapters later. Still, his overall strength is somehow equal to the OG Naruto even now. So, I'll just drop it instead of waiting for this to get better.
Basically a complete rehash of the original with a smarter naruto. Until now there hasn’t been a difference in plot but it’s to be expected since the mc wants to run low. I’ll Be dropping it since It’ll probably keep following this trend. Good writing tho
This is a gem, currently one of my favorites reads. Keep up the good work author, I’m lovin it and u