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JasonReilly05

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ACHILLES

Hoping for an future rewrite as now author knows how to do the interactions and he also stopped simping for alison later on too late to continue as i believe it now lost it peak height/powerstones recomendations. (ps don't do the girls encouraging alison if you do rewrite again she have to make the decision and not have it handed to her)

4mth
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mubarak272

Author bro we need moreeeee chapters Dont you dare and drop it please!!!!

4mth
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Daniela_Medan

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6mth
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Soy_Porgas_D_Ares

Bueno primero me gusta mucho la historia, de hecho es una de las mejores historias que he leído pero me desagrada un poco es que a Scott , lo pongan más idiota de los que es , después de eso es una buena historia

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DaoistEgq9du

hey why update is not coming did you drop this novel

7mth
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ACHILLES

Yo author wondering if you still gonna continue and please give an heads if its an break please you can lose alot of people if not and are you dropping or not

7mth
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AmericanNinja85

Great start and I’ve only read the first chapter! Fan of the show, although I’ve never finished the whole series. Looking forward to this book!. Please keep it going.

7mth
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Daoistqpr4Qv

historia boa, com bom desenvolvimento e um grande potencial, odiaria ver essa historia ser dropada por causa de um bando de idiotas que só sabe encher saco do autor, só porque não gostou de alguns pontinhos praticamente insignificantes na obra e dando 1 estrela logo de cara

7mth
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Cukimai_01

Good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job

7mth
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DaoistEgq9du

write more chapter please like 100 or 50 ch per week

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7mth
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hikigaya4103

Really Good!!! please don't drop........

7mth
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Hollowmonk

So far your fanfiction is the best it's been and I love the way it's progressing. Please continue on this path and this way of writing, focus more on the character because he is very good.

7mth
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ACHILLES

The author will read feedback and fix his mistakes aa he did recently as he messed up in the story and seemed to delete the chaps to fix his mistakes which is something i haven't seen as people will just wing it and drop the story later on major respect for the author and he seems to read and listen to the critics👍

7mth
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Nuno_Pinto_5267

So far it's been a joy to read. Keep up the good work!!!

7mth
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Greta_traps

Great story keep up the good work can’t wait for the next chapter

7mth
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Dragonslayermage

Because its awsome give full five star dont care about those who hate harem stories dont want to read then move on stop rewing a story just because of a tag

7mth
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ACHILLES

Support for the author was here when the was 3 k views and 0 power stones i believe i started the algorithem but now its blowing up so there will be hate Hope you deal with it well and whats your opnion on the pop off its starting to have?

7mth
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Insert_Here

The one major issue I have seen is the spacing between sentences it is too hard to read when it is all clumped together other than that it is a good read. I have no clue what those 2 one star reviews are on about

7mth
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Daoist409328

So far I like it, it's fun I hope you don't leave it👍👍👍👍👍🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

7mth
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Keiou_Owlo

The story is very good. Both the character and interactions are perfect. A character who says what he wants, when he wants, but still cares about people. Perfect. The only thing that could be fixed is the writing. It's not that it's bad in terms of grammar, it's more because of the huge paragraphs and lines put together.Sometimes it's hard to follow. But other than that the story is going very well. Congratulations.

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7mth
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ACHILLES

Still very good but we need a pettion for more chapters a day please....

7mth
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Patricia_Silva_6445

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7mth
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Ownin
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Amazing story so far, keep up the great work! By far the best teen wolf story I've read so far. 5/5

7mth
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Soullesswinter

I can wait to see what you will do I have watched the whole show and the movie keep up the good work. I love it. It’s a very good story so far. it looks is still one of the best ones I’ve read so far.

7mth
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CaptainMorga

Love it post more. And I’ll keep reading and supporting your writing. ✍️

7mth
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ACHILLES

Suprizingly one of the best so far I'll start giving my free powerstones away hope you get more recongnition

7mth
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WraithTheWolf

Solid first chapter hopefully this doesn’t get abandoned as I’m looking forward to this.

7mth
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JasonReilly05

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7d
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ACHILLES

Hoping for an future rewrite as now author knows how to do the interactions and he also stopped simping for alison later on too late to continue as i believe it now lost it peak height/powerstones recomendations. (ps don't do the girls encouraging alison if you do rewrite again she have to make the decision and not have it handed to her)

4mth
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mubarak272

Author bro we need moreeeee chapters Dont you dare and drop it please!!!!

4mth
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Daniela_Medan

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6mth
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Soy_Porgas_D_Ares

Bueno primero me gusta mucho la historia, de hecho es una de las mejores historias que he leído pero me desagrada un poco es que a Scott , lo pongan más idiota de los que es , después de eso es una buena historia

Tiết lộ Spoiler
6mth
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DaoistEgq9du

hey why update is not coming did you drop this novel

7mth
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ACHILLES

Yo author wondering if you still gonna continue and please give an heads if its an break please you can lose alot of people if not and are you dropping or not

7mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
AmericanNinja85

Great start and I’ve only read the first chapter! Fan of the show, although I’ve never finished the whole series. Looking forward to this book!. Please keep it going.

7mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Daoistqpr4Qv

historia boa, com bom desenvolvimento e um grande potencial, odiaria ver essa historia ser dropada por causa de um bando de idiotas que só sabe encher saco do autor, só porque não gostou de alguns pontinhos praticamente insignificantes na obra e dando 1 estrela logo de cara

7mth
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Cukimai_01

Good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job good job

7mth
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DaoistEgq9du

write more chapter please like 100 or 50 ch per week

Tiết lộ Spoiler
7mth
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hikigaya4103

Really Good!!! please don't drop........

7mth
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Hollowmonk

So far your fanfiction is the best it's been and I love the way it's progressing. Please continue on this path and this way of writing, focus more on the character because he is very good.

7mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
ACHILLES

The author will read feedback and fix his mistakes aa he did recently as he messed up in the story and seemed to delete the chaps to fix his mistakes which is something i haven't seen as people will just wing it and drop the story later on major respect for the author and he seems to read and listen to the critics👍

7mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Nuno_Pinto_5267

So far it's been a joy to read. Keep up the good work!!!

7mth
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Greta_traps

Great story keep up the good work can’t wait for the next chapter

7mth
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Dragonslayermage

Because its awsome give full five star dont care about those who hate harem stories dont want to read then move on stop rewing a story just because of a tag

7mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
ACHILLES

Support for the author was here when the was 3 k views and 0 power stones i believe i started the algorithem but now its blowing up so there will be hate Hope you deal with it well and whats your opnion on the pop off its starting to have?

7mth
Xem 2 lời trả lời
Insert_Here

The one major issue I have seen is the spacing between sentences it is too hard to read when it is all clumped together other than that it is a good read. I have no clue what those 2 one star reviews are on about

7mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Daoist409328

So far I like it, it's fun I hope you don't leave it👍👍👍👍👍🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

7mth
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Keiou_Owlo

The story is very good. Both the character and interactions are perfect. A character who says what he wants, when he wants, but still cares about people. Perfect. The only thing that could be fixed is the writing. It's not that it's bad in terms of grammar, it's more because of the huge paragraphs and lines put together.Sometimes it's hard to follow. But other than that the story is going very well. Congratulations.

img
7mth
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ACHILLES

Still very good but we need a pettion for more chapters a day please....

7mth
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Patricia_Silva_6445

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7mth
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Ownin
LV 15 Badge

Amazing story so far, keep up the great work! By far the best teen wolf story I've read so far. 5/5

7mth
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Soullesswinter

I can wait to see what you will do I have watched the whole show and the movie keep up the good work. I love it. It’s a very good story so far. it looks is still one of the best ones I’ve read so far.

7mth
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CaptainMorga

Love it post more. And I’ll keep reading and supporting your writing. ✍️

7mth
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ACHILLES

Suprizingly one of the best so far I'll start giving my free powerstones away hope you get more recongnition

7mth
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WraithTheWolf

Solid first chapter hopefully this doesn’t get abandoned as I’m looking forward to this.

7mth
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