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- Thiết kế nhân vật
- Bối cảnh thế giới
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Announcement, this novel will stop updating temporarily, it will continue but not in the near future, I apologize to the readers/ the main reason is that the author feels that he needs a lot of improvements in the plot and character of the characters, so the author has currently decided to try to join a new writing competition on webnovel, as evaluation material for the author's work.[img=strong]
It's a good story with good promise. But you need to work on your English or get a translator.
the story has potential. the characters are ok. but the writing quality is shit. characters talks about themselves in third person. no corrections and poor English.
Announcement, this novel will stop updating temporarily, it will continue but not in the near future, I apologize to the readers/ the main reason is that the author feels that he needs a lot of improvements in the plot and character of the characters, so the author has currently decided to try to join a new writing competition on webnovel, as evaluation material for the author's work.[img=strong]
It's a good story with good promise. But you need to work on your English or get a translator.
the story has potential. the characters are ok. but the writing quality is shit. characters talks about themselves in third person. no corrections and poor English.