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Grammar wise, okay, usual to WN. I like the characters and they are a fun read. Though, it must be said that the book is pretty slow-paced, which has to do with the general concept of this novel and the whole growing up thing. I do think it's nice to see the MC grow up, but it's kind of unfortunate that we have to wait it out rn until more exciting things happen when the MC becomes a teenager or an adult. All in all, pretty good, would recommend it to people, but gotta have more chapters first, so keep it up, author!
I love exploring the theory that those with abnormally long lifespans/immortality would likely get bored as relative time would blur together. This author takes a simple thought and expands on it in a unique and interesting way with lovable characters and easy reading. From the moment you begin to read this compelling story, you'll find right away that it's an easy read that will have you hooked. I found the story mostly flawless. Grammar mistakes are negligible because the flow of the story itself is good enough that you will hardly notice them. In terms of descriptions and world building, I felt like I was able to picture clearly what the author was trying to convey. The beautiful, sharp art of the cover helps you get the idea of the characters you're supposed to be formulating as you go along as well. I also appreciate the slow introduction of the system. It's not in your face or taking up unnecessary word count in the chapter. It's subtle and well done. Great job author. Can't wait to continue reading and see what happens next
I really enjoyed the story so far, I really can not find any complain about the story. The character are lifelike, the grammar is nothing to scoff at. Author, I really like your story, so make sure you keep on making the story even more awesome.
This was a major part of my read during my commute to college and I was thankful that it was for it did keep me engaged during a major part of my one and a half hour commute. The writing is great, and I think it flows pretty well. I don't usually like books with drag and they bore me, so the writing flowing out easily was a good thing. The prologue was also pretty interesting, although I did get whiplash when I saw the sudden narrative change from the prologue to the first chapter, but otherwise the book is good.
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The grammar is on par with the ones I had read so huge hands up for that. The characters are also interesting. The only down side is it's slow-paced. It's understandable though since it seemed like the MC's growing up is part of the plot. All in all, a good book but still could be improved especially some grammatical errors. I'm waiting for the MC to grow up so I could see some 'action'. I'd let this book marinate first before reading again. Would highly recommend to people.
Grammar wise, okay, usual to WN. I like the characters and they are a fun read. Though, it must be said that the book is pretty slow-paced, which has to do with the general concept of this novel and the whole growing up thing. I do think it's nice to see the MC grow up, but it's kind of unfortunate that we have to wait it out rn until more exciting things happen when the MC becomes a teenager or an adult. All in all, pretty good, would recommend it to people, but gotta have more chapters first, so keep it up, author!
I love exploring the theory that those with abnormally long lifespans/immortality would likely get bored as relative time would blur together. This author takes a simple thought and expands on it in a unique and interesting way with lovable characters and easy reading. From the moment you begin to read this compelling story, you'll find right away that it's an easy read that will have you hooked. I found the story mostly flawless. Grammar mistakes are negligible because the flow of the story itself is good enough that you will hardly notice them. In terms of descriptions and world building, I felt like I was able to picture clearly what the author was trying to convey. The beautiful, sharp art of the cover helps you get the idea of the characters you're supposed to be formulating as you go along as well. I also appreciate the slow introduction of the system. It's not in your face or taking up unnecessary word count in the chapter. It's subtle and well done. Great job author. Can't wait to continue reading and see what happens next
I really enjoyed the story so far, I really can not find any complain about the story. The character are lifelike, the grammar is nothing to scoff at. Author, I really like your story, so make sure you keep on making the story even more awesome.
This was a major part of my read during my commute to college and I was thankful that it was for it did keep me engaged during a major part of my one and a half hour commute. The writing is great, and I think it flows pretty well. I don't usually like books with drag and they bore me, so the writing flowing out easily was a good thing. The prologue was also pretty interesting, although I did get whiplash when I saw the sudden narrative change from the prologue to the first chapter, but otherwise the book is good.
Tiết lộ Spoiler The grammar is on par with the ones I had read so huge hands up for that. The characters are also interesting. The only down side is it's slow-paced. It's understandable though since it seemed like the MC's growing up is part of the plot. All in all, a good book but still could be improved especially some grammatical errors. I'm waiting for the MC to grow up so I could see some 'action'. I'd let this book marinate first before reading again. Would highly recommend to people.
Good book. Good author. Give it a shot 🙂↔️🫡
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