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So far I am loving the story and you didn't make this new Finn a retard like I've seen in some other fics, and you were, so far, able to mix some character development in the first chapter, capture the essence of Jake's character and in the latest chapter(15) some quiet time
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this is very good and the pace is very precise, neither slow nor fast which is great. The story also seems to be quite original unlike other stories of this.
Only on chapter one haven’t even read it except first paragraph all I gotta say is I don’t even care if this novels writing is only mid or grammars not good we legit never get adventure time fanfics and when we do they stop after ten chapters so all I gotta say is don’t ever stop writing this until the end please and thank you here is a gif as a gift
I'm only on the first chapter, but my eyes already hurt and i missed read a lot of things already because of the spaces of ( " Sample " ) ( ' Sample ' ) ( . Sample . ) instead of ("Sample") cuz tge whole thing just makes it look off and messes with my eyes not sure about others, but thats how it is for me, but Im not gonna be the bad guy and give low stars so here have a 4, I just hope u fix is all im asking 😂🙏
Please learn to do proper punctuation and write proper sentences before you try to make money off of fanfics please.
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TFTC, I like this Fan Fic , I need more please _____________-----_________ :) :) __________:) ()()():(:):(:):(:)_________________________________________________________________________________
finally we got a adventure time fanfic its's so faking rare in webnovel and harem too, it like my soul finally found it peace.
Brother no pares está buenísima. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Although I still haven't read enough of this story, the premise is interesting and I hope it has a good plot and development, although I would like the flame princess to also be an option
I as any other author rate my own book with a 5 star ⭐⭐ I first want to start of with a rant . please pardon my anger . First of all . I know my punctuation is kinda shit and all but who said I don't know that already . Some random guy comes to my FANFIC and tries to start advising me as if he can do a better job .( which he can't . I checked out his bio ) and two , at no point was I forcing anyone to donate to my Ko-fi account. That's why it's called a donation . Which a certain once again bozo failed to comprehend . Just to know the bozo , I will not deleat any reviews on this book and therefore for those curious they will be able to easily find him . Like seriously , what does guy expect from a fanfic which I'm writing on my own and also editing on my own . Does he expect it to be some sort of artisticall literature . If only I could block certain people on this app . My day would just be better . End of runt I won't call my self a master of English but i think I am able to right a good fanfic with all the info on the adventure time world Thank you to all my supporters and to all those judgmental hater eat shit
So far I am loving the story and you didn't make this new Finn a retard like I've seen in some other fics, and you were, so far, able to mix some character development in the first chapter, capture the essence of Jake's character and in the latest chapter(15) some quiet time
Tiết lộ Spoiler this is very good and the pace is very precise, neither slow nor fast which is great. The story also seems to be quite original unlike other stories of this.
Only on chapter one haven’t even read it except first paragraph all I gotta say is I don’t even care if this novels writing is only mid or grammars not good we legit never get adventure time fanfics and when we do they stop after ten chapters so all I gotta say is don’t ever stop writing this until the end please and thank you here is a gif as a gift
I'm only on the first chapter, but my eyes already hurt and i missed read a lot of things already because of the spaces of ( " Sample " ) ( ' Sample ' ) ( . Sample . ) instead of ("Sample") cuz tge whole thing just makes it look off and messes with my eyes not sure about others, but thats how it is for me, but Im not gonna be the bad guy and give low stars so here have a 4, I just hope u fix is all im asking 😂🙏
Please learn to do proper punctuation and write proper sentences before you try to make money off of fanfics please.
Tiết lộ Spoiler TFTC, I like this Fan Fic , I need more please _____________-----_________ :) :) __________:) ()()():(:):(:):(:)_________________________________________________________________________________
finally we got a adventure time fanfic its's so faking rare in webnovel and harem too, it like my soul finally found it peace.
Brother no pares está buenísima. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Although I still haven't read enough of this story, the premise is interesting and I hope it has a good plot and development, although I would like the flame princess to also be an option
I as any other author rate my own book with a 5 star ⭐⭐ I first want to start of with a rant . please pardon my anger . First of all . I know my punctuation is kinda shit and all but who said I don't know that already . Some random guy comes to my FANFIC and tries to start advising me as if he can do a better job .( which he can't . I checked out his bio ) and two , at no point was I forcing anyone to donate to my Ko-fi account. That's why it's called a donation . Which a certain once again bozo failed to comprehend . Just to know the bozo , I will not deleat any reviews on this book and therefore for those curious they will be able to easily find him . Like seriously , what does guy expect from a fanfic which I'm writing on my own and also editing on my own . Does he expect it to be some sort of artisticall literature . If only I could block certain people on this app . My day would just be better . End of runt I won't call my self a master of English but i think I am able to right a good fanfic with all the info on the adventure time world Thank you to all my supporters and to all those judgmental hater eat shit