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Viết đánh giáwell written and interesting, but upload schedule leaves much to be desired lol 1 star updating stability
Not bad. But problem of power inflation is sad. More power is no more plot and space for another character. You will be needing for more challenges for more powerful hero. Look at captain marvel, she is so powerful that she was instantly deleted from the plot. If she wasn't deleted it is fuckup with all MCU. Now you create CM pirate edition and look at is: another character go to useless. It is bad. You put in more characters and they more useless than more plot going. It is not for all fic, but for "ascending" arc. I lose my interest as more power MC take. What can be better? Real stuff like fails and hard choices like TV The Boy's. No for inflation power MC and bad ass. Better if we have real drama, like attacking cities supermonster and real problems how take down this threat. Not only shiny MC and only successfully joinery. Steel good Marty Sue story, but may be better.
MC character development is great, storyline is good and power development is also reasonable as storyline advanced. keep it up , this novel has potential 👍👍
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One of the best grammatically written fiction I have read so far. The MC has a very human personality and you can understand his decision. In my opinion, combining the MCU and X-Man is always very nice but difficult to realise, but it works very well here. I also think the use of the 2 serums is just brilliant. The way the MC goes with his decisions creates a new interesting story line that has a lot of potential and after each new chapter my tension has built up for the next one. Highly recommended.
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this marvel/the boys crossover fanfiction is a new one for me. still early to judge, but the 20+ chapters is very promising. so waiting for more.
The author takes an interesting take combining two serums that would normally never come together but does so in a way that you want to see more combinations in other fics. They also keep a good pacing and don’t rush straight to the main MCU timeline and actually learn about the ongoing of their current world. The writing quality is also high with clear effort put into their work.
La historia está bien lo único que me molesta es la brújula moral de MC ................................................................................................
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I dislike your character author I haven’t been so invested in a marvel ff in a long time, and it disappoints me knowing I have to wait a full week before a chapter, like who do you think you are? Nah if I wasn’t broke I would pay for your patrion. Maybe just for me if you see this please realease a chapter maybe two, you would genuinely make my month. Please I beg you.🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾
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Introducing Compound V to others was horrible decision. Author already introduced mutants unneccesary which never works in any ff and now this. Disappointing.
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booo how dare you make a good story and then destroy it with adding the boys when not needed or wanted it was good till you wanted more "plot" when we had mutants then you changed raven and charles Xavier's fate and then you decide to add vogelbaum
so... i thought this was VERY GOOD. The problem is you have a chapter called voglebaum..... World mashups NEVER work. Because plot holes develop and are never solved, so if this is, instead of turning into a cool SI of marvel. Turns into a mash up of the boys and marvel.... then that's the end of this story, really cause then you basically have an immortal murder hobo who will kill all that oppose him. Also, fitting some of these characters into a world already full of mutants, inhumans, Eternals, cosmic beings, godlike aliens, etc.. is almost impossible. Messy is always the results and of course the author always drops it when it get to much a mess to solve the plot.
Surprisingly I haven't given myself a review yet, like any self-respecting egocentric author this will get 5 stars in all sections. Thanks for all the support! Give me your power stones :D
well written and interesting, but upload schedule leaves much to be desired lol 1 star updating stability
Not bad. But problem of power inflation is sad. More power is no more plot and space for another character. You will be needing for more challenges for more powerful hero. Look at captain marvel, she is so powerful that she was instantly deleted from the plot. If she wasn't deleted it is fuckup with all MCU. Now you create CM pirate edition and look at is: another character go to useless. It is bad. You put in more characters and they more useless than more plot going. It is not for all fic, but for "ascending" arc. I lose my interest as more power MC take. What can be better? Real stuff like fails and hard choices like TV The Boy's. No for inflation power MC and bad ass. Better if we have real drama, like attacking cities supermonster and real problems how take down this threat. Not only shiny MC and only successfully joinery. Steel good Marty Sue story, but may be better.
MC character development is great, storyline is good and power development is also reasonable as storyline advanced. keep it up , this novel has potential 👍👍
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One of the best grammatically written fiction I have read so far. The MC has a very human personality and you can understand his decision. In my opinion, combining the MCU and X-Man is always very nice but difficult to realise, but it works very well here. I also think the use of the 2 serums is just brilliant. The way the MC goes with his decisions creates a new interesting story line that has a lot of potential and after each new chapter my tension has built up for the next one. Highly recommended.
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this marvel/the boys crossover fanfiction is a new one for me. still early to judge, but the 20+ chapters is very promising. so waiting for more.
The author takes an interesting take combining two serums that would normally never come together but does so in a way that you want to see more combinations in other fics. They also keep a good pacing and don’t rush straight to the main MCU timeline and actually learn about the ongoing of their current world. The writing quality is also high with clear effort put into their work.
La historia está bien lo único que me molesta es la brújula moral de MC ................................................................................................
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I dislike your character author I haven’t been so invested in a marvel ff in a long time, and it disappoints me knowing I have to wait a full week before a chapter, like who do you think you are? Nah if I wasn’t broke I would pay for your patrion. Maybe just for me if you see this please realease a chapter maybe two, you would genuinely make my month. Please I beg you.🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾
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Introducing Compound V to others was horrible decision. Author already introduced mutants unneccesary which never works in any ff and now this. Disappointing.
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booo how dare you make a good story and then destroy it with adding the boys when not needed or wanted it was good till you wanted more "plot" when we had mutants then you changed raven and charles Xavier's fate and then you decide to add vogelbaum
so... i thought this was VERY GOOD. The problem is you have a chapter called voglebaum..... World mashups NEVER work. Because plot holes develop and are never solved, so if this is, instead of turning into a cool SI of marvel. Turns into a mash up of the boys and marvel.... then that's the end of this story, really cause then you basically have an immortal murder hobo who will kill all that oppose him. Also, fitting some of these characters into a world already full of mutants, inhumans, Eternals, cosmic beings, godlike aliens, etc.. is almost impossible. Messy is always the results and of course the author always drops it when it get to much a mess to solve the plot.
Surprisingly I haven't given myself a review yet, like any self-respecting egocentric author this will get 5 stars in all sections. Thanks for all the support! Give me your power stones :D