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Viết đánh giáAfter parts 300-400 it becomes unreadable. After all, the author sped up the pace so quickly that he himself didn't know where to stop, and he had to add a bunch of incomprehensible crap, which is why it stretched out for another 400+ parts. If you want to read this, then I advise you to read only up to parts 200-250.
Tiết lộ SpoilerThe Author is very annoying (in a good way) He keeps it entertaining whit no as expected plot. Examples: In 1st year, you’ll see him fighting Draco and you’ll predict that this story will be about him being enemies with slitherin pure bloods, No! By the end of 1st year Slytherin loves him. Then Draco was his best friend, now Draco is punished by him lol. 2nd year- you’ll think it’ll be about Basilisk and chamber of secrets, Let me tell you he becomes the heir of Grefyndore’s chamber. 3rd- Lives double life where he is the good John and under his mask he is the most feared Johnny Silverhand the king of Knock turn ally, he is also a lot of things… Yeah, he’s a Dragon
Tiết lộ SpoilerThe novel is consumable, the MC is a wannabe John Wick who "mastered the art of killing 3 people with a pencil" at 10 years old. The problem is that MC is a dark edgy teenager, he has almost no thought behind his actions and is not an actual assassin so the novel name is just bait. So if you want to read a "face slapping" brute go ahead that's all I ever found
Great Book, the character of John Wick in the story adds a fresh touch to the story of Harry Potter.
Amazing story i really enjoyed reading it. Love the characters and character development. It was funny to see how dens John is.Please update soon.
its only 30% reference to john wick. Even his secret society isnt the continnental but the constellation society, maybe even with zodiacs and stuff smh..
Autor aun no comienzo a leer solo quiero saber si le vas a meter romance o harem y si va a ver romance sera oc o del mundo de hp, comento esto porque es un ff de jhon wick lo quiero leer
An absolutely wonderful read!! I would highly recommend this to any Harry Potter fan! I want John Wick to use the pencil he trained hard at on wizards, the reactions... 🤣
"When will you become a Slytherin?" "He has no classmates except for Harry Potter's group." "I could only get through about 20 chapters before I couldn't take it anymore."
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Traslate Please. No está mal y me gusta el progreso de la trama. Se que esto no es romance, pero me preocupa el enfoque sin sentido que tomaron los creadores con Hermione y Ron: no me malinterpretes, no tengo nada contra el tipo y tengo una opinión neutral sobre él, pero soy de los pocos (o quizás muchos) que piensan que su romance con Hermione no tiene patas y mucho menos cabeza. Más bien parece un Fanservice poco grato. De todos modos, Preferiría que el interés de Hermione poco a poco se desplazara a Jhon incluso si es lento pero progresivo, eso tendría mucho más sentido que el final canónico. Pero dejando eso a un lado, realmente no tengo muchas críticas teniendo en cuenta que cumples con mis requisitos de referencia: los capítulos tienen buena longitud, la gramática es meticulosa y sobre todo, la actitud del personaje es lo que llamaría completamente neutral sobre las opiniones casi a todo. Al final está bastante equilibrado y aunque es razonablemente fuerte, el poder que con tantas dificultades a obtenido no lo ciega. ¡No obstante, me gradada mucho la cantidad de acción aquí! Teniendo en cuenta que optas por el procedimiento científico en el progreso mágico de Jhon se siente como una bocanada de aire fresco en comparación a tantas otras historias por ahí. Solo asegúrate que participe en el torneo del Calix de fuego más adelante, lo cual, para no disparatar la historia recomiendo hacer una ligera modificación en cuanto al número de participantes por cada escuela. Será tedioso, pero mantendrá la calidad que ya tienes acostumbrado a los lectores, y déjame decirte que es buena. Por otro lado, esto puede involucrar muchas cosas, entre las cuales sería la interacción entre tres frentes, su organización y los bandos opuestos entre la luz y oscuridad. siempre me pareció extraño que alguna organización extranjera no aprovechara el desorden interno del Reino Unido para poco a poco infiltrarse o directamente instalarse como otro frente con su propia agenda. Estos solo son mis pensamientos.
good story.. good story.... good story.. good story... good story.... good story...👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
not really a john wick perse personality but your typical ruthless scheming two faced MC. 9/10 Enjoyable.
I read the story and I have to say that I really liked it especially the character. I hope it continues like this and never give up.
This is the best Harry Potter fan fiction out there i have already read the whole novel every thing about this novel so good it has some of best character development and story devlopment and the plot is so 🤌 i just want to thank the author to translate this novel. I also want to ask author do you know where to find the sequel of this novel I can't find it anywhere 😅
Author use memory problem as his shield everywhere, when he want MC will remember small insignificant thing but never remember main plot (most highlighted thing). Max time almost same Harry Potter plotline.
This is a well written story with what I consider a very well done transition of john wick into the harry potter world, I am excited for the introduction of the continental as I imagine that will be where we go in the future, perhaps after his third or fourth year. I also like the power scaling of the mc, theres a very nice pace to it
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There is no day I'm feeling down and reading this didn't lift my mood!♥................................................................................
It's quite fun. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
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ممكن اعرف اسم الروايه الاصليه الروايه رائعه والأحداث مشوقه استمر فأنا انتظر المزيد من الفصول شكرا على الفصول الرائعه اتمنى لك التوفيق والاستمرار ف التحديث ♥️♥️
It's good for a translation. More More More More More More More More.....................................................................................
I read this on a different site and I liked it in the beginning but towards the end he just started become an unreasonable, insufferable asshole. Even in the sequel anyone who he would consider a friend as long as they do something that he doesn't like he would abandon them. I understand with Ron and Harry but he also does it with Hermonie in this book. It's a spoiler but he was taking out the hourcux but it looked like he was killing Harry. So hermonie try stopping him like a normal person would. Why this ass talking about you betrayed me. In the sequel they added more marvel stuff. While under control Bucky also try to kill his parents but failed. Him giving up his friendship with Cap was kinda reasonable but to abandon Natasha just because she helped is atrocious. Anybody that just trying to help a friend of theirs they get blacklisted. He's a insane level of control freak. He literally became a wixia protagonist. Also in the sequel we never see him use a sword again.
Tiết lộ SpoilerAfter parts 300-400 it becomes unreadable. After all, the author sped up the pace so quickly that he himself didn't know where to stop, and he had to add a bunch of incomprehensible crap, which is why it stretched out for another 400+ parts. If you want to read this, then I advise you to read only up to parts 200-250.
Tiết lộ SpoilerThe Author is very annoying (in a good way) He keeps it entertaining whit no as expected plot. Examples: In 1st year, you’ll see him fighting Draco and you’ll predict that this story will be about him being enemies with slitherin pure bloods, No! By the end of 1st year Slytherin loves him. Then Draco was his best friend, now Draco is punished by him lol. 2nd year- you’ll think it’ll be about Basilisk and chamber of secrets, Let me tell you he becomes the heir of Grefyndore’s chamber. 3rd- Lives double life where he is the good John and under his mask he is the most feared Johnny Silverhand the king of Knock turn ally, he is also a lot of things… Yeah, he’s a Dragon
Tiết lộ SpoilerThe novel is consumable, the MC is a wannabe John Wick who "mastered the art of killing 3 people with a pencil" at 10 years old. The problem is that MC is a dark edgy teenager, he has almost no thought behind his actions and is not an actual assassin so the novel name is just bait. So if you want to read a "face slapping" brute go ahead that's all I ever found
Great Book, the character of John Wick in the story adds a fresh touch to the story of Harry Potter.
Amazing story i really enjoyed reading it. Love the characters and character development. It was funny to see how dens John is.Please update soon.
its only 30% reference to john wick. Even his secret society isnt the continnental but the constellation society, maybe even with zodiacs and stuff smh..
Autor aun no comienzo a leer solo quiero saber si le vas a meter romance o harem y si va a ver romance sera oc o del mundo de hp, comento esto porque es un ff de jhon wick lo quiero leer
An absolutely wonderful read!! I would highly recommend this to any Harry Potter fan! I want John Wick to use the pencil he trained hard at on wizards, the reactions... 🤣
"When will you become a Slytherin?" "He has no classmates except for Harry Potter's group." "I could only get through about 20 chapters before I couldn't take it anymore."
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Traslate Please. No está mal y me gusta el progreso de la trama. Se que esto no es romance, pero me preocupa el enfoque sin sentido que tomaron los creadores con Hermione y Ron: no me malinterpretes, no tengo nada contra el tipo y tengo una opinión neutral sobre él, pero soy de los pocos (o quizás muchos) que piensan que su romance con Hermione no tiene patas y mucho menos cabeza. Más bien parece un Fanservice poco grato. De todos modos, Preferiría que el interés de Hermione poco a poco se desplazara a Jhon incluso si es lento pero progresivo, eso tendría mucho más sentido que el final canónico. Pero dejando eso a un lado, realmente no tengo muchas críticas teniendo en cuenta que cumples con mis requisitos de referencia: los capítulos tienen buena longitud, la gramática es meticulosa y sobre todo, la actitud del personaje es lo que llamaría completamente neutral sobre las opiniones casi a todo. Al final está bastante equilibrado y aunque es razonablemente fuerte, el poder que con tantas dificultades a obtenido no lo ciega. ¡No obstante, me gradada mucho la cantidad de acción aquí! Teniendo en cuenta que optas por el procedimiento científico en el progreso mágico de Jhon se siente como una bocanada de aire fresco en comparación a tantas otras historias por ahí. Solo asegúrate que participe en el torneo del Calix de fuego más adelante, lo cual, para no disparatar la historia recomiendo hacer una ligera modificación en cuanto al número de participantes por cada escuela. Será tedioso, pero mantendrá la calidad que ya tienes acostumbrado a los lectores, y déjame decirte que es buena. Por otro lado, esto puede involucrar muchas cosas, entre las cuales sería la interacción entre tres frentes, su organización y los bandos opuestos entre la luz y oscuridad. siempre me pareció extraño que alguna organización extranjera no aprovechara el desorden interno del Reino Unido para poco a poco infiltrarse o directamente instalarse como otro frente con su propia agenda. Estos solo son mis pensamientos.
good story.. good story.... good story.. good story... good story.... good story...👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
not really a john wick perse personality but your typical ruthless scheming two faced MC. 9/10 Enjoyable.
I read the story and I have to say that I really liked it especially the character. I hope it continues like this and never give up.
This is the best Harry Potter fan fiction out there i have already read the whole novel every thing about this novel so good it has some of best character development and story devlopment and the plot is so 🤌 i just want to thank the author to translate this novel. I also want to ask author do you know where to find the sequel of this novel I can't find it anywhere 😅
Author use memory problem as his shield everywhere, when he want MC will remember small insignificant thing but never remember main plot (most highlighted thing). Max time almost same Harry Potter plotline.
This is a well written story with what I consider a very well done transition of john wick into the harry potter world, I am excited for the introduction of the continental as I imagine that will be where we go in the future, perhaps after his third or fourth year. I also like the power scaling of the mc, theres a very nice pace to it
Great work[img=update]..................................................................................................................................
There is no day I'm feeling down and reading this didn't lift my mood!♥................................................................................
It's quite fun. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
Moreeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad Moreeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
ممكن اعرف اسم الروايه الاصليه الروايه رائعه والأحداث مشوقه استمر فأنا انتظر المزيد من الفصول شكرا على الفصول الرائعه اتمنى لك التوفيق والاستمرار ف التحديث ♥️♥️
It's good for a translation. More More More More More More More More.....................................................................................
I read this on a different site and I liked it in the beginning but towards the end he just started become an unreasonable, insufferable asshole. Even in the sequel anyone who he would consider a friend as long as they do something that he doesn't like he would abandon them. I understand with Ron and Harry but he also does it with Hermonie in this book. It's a spoiler but he was taking out the hourcux but it looked like he was killing Harry. So hermonie try stopping him like a normal person would. Why this ass talking about you betrayed me. In the sequel they added more marvel stuff. While under control Bucky also try to kill his parents but failed. Him giving up his friendship with Cap was kinda reasonable but to abandon Natasha just because she helped is atrocious. Anybody that just trying to help a friend of theirs they get blacklisted. He's a insane level of control freak. He literally became a wixia protagonist. Also in the sequel we never see him use a sword again.
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