The Glory of Surplus Son

LV 15

50points

there is no established world, buildings, towns, city's. the character development is very slow and bland. the updates are not frequent enough for the slow pace. the story has just about zero progression at this point and the last couple of chapters from 30 to 35 have been repeating paragraphs. it's a shame really.

LV 4

badboyz999

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