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Viết đánh giáToo many characters, so it's hard to follow the plot when there's a lot of dialogue and you can't get to know the MC better, too far away from the plot of the fan fiction (Steven Universe)
Too many characters, so it's hard to follow the plot when there's a lot of dialogue and you can't get to know the MC better, too far away from the plot of the fan fiction (Steven Universe)
I love how this story is going so far, and I can't wait to read more.