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if u want an edgy Naruto fanfic this is for u , if u want an MC who like Naruto fandom can't read their own series, if u want a fanfic which will most likely be dropped in the near future this fanfic is for u . but I will give the author credit he has ability to write good dialogue and character interactions , it's ashame that talent is wasted on this fanfic . Enjoy if u like it
MC is hardworking, smart, knows what he wants and really serious about training. Although there aren't many chapters, overall Plot is still good and even better than many fanfics (Ones where mc becomes Naruto) I hope it's a Harem story. If not, I don't mind Hinata at all. The story is mostly entertaining and really fun to read. Chapter lengths are above average too. Well, if there are more chapters, I'll update another review, and a better one. Author, you better not drop this masterpiece!!
The writing style was strangely familiar to me but after realizing you wrote the Sasuke fanfic, my expectations peaked. My only concern is that after I commit you may drop this like your other ones. I really hope you don't 🙏
So Mr. Author, do you intend to have stable chapter releases in the future? Because your work seems very promising to me, and I believe that greater stability will attract more readers
One question, will everything be based on hard work? I simply love FanFics where Naruto doesn't stay soft and takes advantage of his status as Jinchuuriki to train and become strong by trying harder
Muy buen libro. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
pretty good work, keep it up, lets get to 1000+ chapters! a subdued naruto with future knowledge who thinks before he acts, and learns to be proper shinobi. give it a try
This fanfic is very good. Although the updates are irregular, it is entertaining. I hope you continue with the work, as I would like to see more chapters.
Are you going to it or not? Tell us who will be the main girl since you didn't mention anything about Harem so there is that. I hope you don't drop.
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The stey is well written and has me hooked. Chapters are longer than many I've seen and don't blindly conform to Canon, like many fics do. The plot is moving along at a steady pace, and I hope the author keeps up the great work. Give it a read.
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Nejar dasher vai ke support korte hoibo tai na ..😉 ..................... ....................................................................... ..............
Pretty well written and it seems like a slow burn but that’s not a bad thing keep it up and i hope you don’t drop this one.
No fue lo que esperaba y el protagonista no es de mí agrado....................................................................................................................................................................................................
if u want an edgy Naruto fanfic this is for u , if u want an MC who like Naruto fandom can't read their own series, if u want a fanfic which will most likely be dropped in the near future this fanfic is for u . but I will give the author credit he has ability to write good dialogue and character interactions , it's ashame that talent is wasted on this fanfic . Enjoy if u like it
MC is hardworking, smart, knows what he wants and really serious about training. Although there aren't many chapters, overall Plot is still good and even better than many fanfics (Ones where mc becomes Naruto) I hope it's a Harem story. If not, I don't mind Hinata at all. The story is mostly entertaining and really fun to read. Chapter lengths are above average too. Well, if there are more chapters, I'll update another review, and a better one. Author, you better not drop this masterpiece!!
The writing style was strangely familiar to me but after realizing you wrote the Sasuke fanfic, my expectations peaked. My only concern is that after I commit you may drop this like your other ones. I really hope you don't 🙏
So Mr. Author, do you intend to have stable chapter releases in the future? Because your work seems very promising to me, and I believe that greater stability will attract more readers
One question, will everything be based on hard work? I simply love FanFics where Naruto doesn't stay soft and takes advantage of his status as Jinchuuriki to train and become strong by trying harder
Muy buen libro. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
pretty good work, keep it up, lets get to 1000+ chapters! a subdued naruto with future knowledge who thinks before he acts, and learns to be proper shinobi. give it a try
This fanfic is very good. Although the updates are irregular, it is entertaining. I hope you continue with the work, as I would like to see more chapters.
Are you going to it or not? Tell us who will be the main girl since you didn't mention anything about Harem so there is that. I hope you don't drop.
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The stey is well written and has me hooked. Chapters are longer than many I've seen and don't blindly conform to Canon, like many fics do. The plot is moving along at a steady pace, and I hope the author keeps up the great work. Give it a read.
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Nejar dasher vai ke support korte hoibo tai na ..😉 ..................... ....................................................................... ..............
Pretty well written and it seems like a slow burn but that’s not a bad thing keep it up and i hope you don’t drop this one.
No fue lo que esperaba y el protagonista no es de mí agrado....................................................................................................................................................................................................