Robert I Baratheon

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Daoist_sword_edge

In this story the charming and charismatic protagonist charms everyone with his charisma. The charisma he gives off is obvious to everyone from a young age due to his charming personality.

LV 4

DMan099999

Please can you finish the story atleast and not drop it!!

LV 4

Herach

Overall, it's fine. The powers given are a bit too OP. The MC is a bit too much of a Gary Stu without faults, and people keep basking in his glory. A lot of chapters are just long ego boosts. What got me to drop it was the NTR. If you're fine with it and can move on from it, then that's great. But it's not for me.

LV 2

Victor_Venegas

I'll start with the things I like, I always enjoy interesting world building as well as the resource management trope, much more so if it means the development of a world in the medieval era whit modern knowledge. From there things go downhill, there is much more focus on the secondary characters describing the main character's good qualities than actually showing those qualities. Power, strength, wisdom and all the things that many of us want to obtain in one way or another is quite good, the problem is when to make these qualities shine you have to overshadow that of others, you are not the smartest person in a room because others are stupid, you are the "smartest" because you have more knowledge. Lastly, and the reason why I will unfortunately stop reading what in my opinion could have been something much more interesting to follow is the whole bloodline excuse, I say excuse because it seems that there is no other way in which the author can manage making his character shine so he decided to make it extremely powerful basically for free, in my opinion the most interesting thing about a story where a character develops is the development itself, from the age of 10+ the protagonist already has a super developed body almost better than some adults and now at 16 he will have (apart from the already superior advantages it had) even more advantages, there is nothing more to read, will the mad king do something stupid that will endanger something? It doesn't matter, the protagonist will solve it without a problem after all he have a lot of charisma and now almost super powers. Thanks for your efforts, good luck with your story.

LV 4

Ash_D_Born

bro I’m loving this but please also continue the Doctor one

LV 4

GrootT

35 chapters have gone by and absolutely nothing is happening. The author gives his Hanma bloodline and smart atoms and says he does not want the MC to be OP…. And the worst part is the NTR….

LV 4

Ayu123456

Robert Baratheon SI Character development is well done Interesting concept of king’s essence Well written up till now Hope u don’t drop 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

LV 14

ThanatosGreekGod

37 chapters are out and the story is great! Until you get to the part where MC gets cucked by another character. Author is trying to play it off like the child could possibly be MC’s but it still explicitly states the other character touched MC’s woman many times and he even rubs it in the reader’s face talking about how “stimulating” it is to ravage the prideful mc’s woman…..

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Daoist4yt4ru

interesting. hopefully you will continue writing. always love me some meta essence. good luck and keep it up

LV 4

aceZ0

I really liked this novel at the start but with the way plot isngoing its become convulted. Mc is a contrary to what you'd expect from a king (he chose a king essence). He's more suited for schemes, very contrary to the cover of this book lol. It also feels artificial cause his essence causes others to be loyal to him just by drinking his blood, and I haven't seen one character question how or why. Progress with characters also feels stale, old men who are players of the game fear him even as when he was just a child while women are attracted to him lol. He's a "king" who lets his treasure be used by others, slight hints of (#maybe/ntr). Characters also feel ooc at times and most times author doesn't follow the show not tell rule. He just writes that mc has a charismatic aura with "boisterous laughter" instantly able to befriend most people with most of the progress being cut. All in all you could find better asoiaf ff out there with way better mcs who became better kings even without an essence to aid them. I havent see any grammar/spelling mistakes and author has potential, I hope he keeps writing

LV 1

malinizgeldii

in superman got. How fun isn't it? I do not think so. everything for mc................................................................................................

LV 10

Gunts92

It's nice for a reincarnated person who is not omniscient about the story where he falls lol just for that I give my 4 stars, I will change my rating after reading (maybe)

LV 13

aswinguruswamy

The main problem is the upload rate. At least give us an update if you are going to continue writing, and if so, how frequent is it going to be.

LV 2

mercurystarship

I haven't watched Game of Thrones, so I only know about it from other fanfics. This one is well-written and interesting. There are a few things I'm not clear on, and some parts I don't agree with, but I'm still intrigued and want to read more. Overall, it's pretty good.

LV 6

Armand_Targaryen

Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?

LV 4

Tyronne_Taylor

Keep up the good work every update I love forward to it

LV 4

AvengerV

first there are no Ntr ... people is too fast to make a review in that sense ... is true that the way the things happened is a little bit confused and that is 1 star less but in general i think is good and interesting to read

LV 13

Wensley_Estiverne

Excellent. Je suis plus que satisfait de ce que j’ai lu jusqu’ici. J’espère que vous pourrez maintenir cette qualité tout du long. 👍🏾 Vous méritez largement ces 5 étoiles.

LV 13

Pankaj_Sharma_1099

absolutely loving the story please don't drop it