Stuck in a Chinese novel

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FoodReviewSnake

If you are going to God forbid read this novel be prepared for half baked jokes and cringe dialogues where Mc screaming at the air is considered funny.

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Bad_Wolf_7811

Hello guys! Author here. This is a new novel I am writing and unlike my first novel, I'm writing this one without a plan. Anything could happen. My MC could be cruel or sympathetic, good or evil, nothing is known for sure. Stick with me and find out what I bring to you. I promise you won't regret it.

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Macharonni

Decided to read it since it was free and luckily it was. Ignoring everything off putting with the Mc, his personality, and the system, it’s blatantly obvious that the author goes out of their way to nerf him multiple times. To awaken Qi he all of sudden has to earn 1 billion yuan and instead of converting stolen money to gold he end up leaving it because the author says he doesn’t need it right now. What exactly is the main premise of this novel?? Isn’t the whole point of him doing business and making money to get gold and beat the protagonist?? This Mc is supposedly some business savant in his previous life and all he does is kill and rob people. His businesses are even more of a joke and are forced asf. He has 1 year before he dies and he does what? Produce movies and games… But sure plot allows him to complete everything in a month. Like honestly, he inherits an entertainment company from his current body and he fires everyone from the beginning. At that point why even have an entertainment company at all, just make a completely different one or better yet just copy the company you had in your past life. Can’t say how frustrating it was to read this, the author tries making things intricate but ends up contradicting himself, adding in a bunch of things that don’t really help the story. I will say that the premise is somewhat novel in having an mc who doesn’t know the plot. However, the inclusion of him buying said plot via the system was definitely a mistake. Overall, good idea but it was a fumble.

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DaoistnieFJZ

i like this novel but don't make brainless harem.

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Aris82

the 1st chapter is a totally let down. im only reading it and i can totally not believe it. because the MC seems to have a few screws loose from the get go and seems to like walking and running naked all over the place. and seems to like screaming a lot and looks stupid to everyone around him. so those looking to try it. better not.

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Nay085_digimon

Author has cooked really hard. Many left halfway because of mc temperament, but if u read till 76, you will notice he only behaves such on useless matter

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BloodMonk

Exciting and truly worth waiting for updates

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BashfulName

This novel is interesting. Please show the real evil mc. Most villain novels are not villain. Please show the real evil mc.

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Zeref_Allison

amazing book for a refreshing take I enjoyed it a lot.

synopsis is bait, doesn't correlate with the story I thought this web novel was supposed to break cliches but it didn't. Main character becomes a villain and gets a luck plunder system, also he's supposed to make hell for the protagonist. Overused and really bland tbh, other than that it just feels like another Chinese cashgrab with with a copy and pasted plot.

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Oleg_Kiriluk

I really like this story. No harems, no super duper pianos, no perversions. The temperamental main character. This is exactly what I've been looking for all this time.

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Eldrik_craddle

Personally, this novel is better then many out there. though many think MC is short tempered due to first few chapters, but believe me the Author Cooked 5 star cuisine. Anyways without spoiling much, mc isn't system slave, readable and most important uses his BRAIN. All in all, it's a good read that I enjoyed. Definitely rereading again.

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Mr_ZeroDagger07

I was hooked reading the synopsis thinking the mc going to bash all the cliche events of the Chinese novel setting but colour me suprised when he get a snaching hero luck type of system and then routine continue where mc take mantle of villain taking hero opportunity like in all chinese novel , i expected the novel to be like [I want play by the books] novel,but i was disappointed, sad,angry .

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Paradoxical_smile

So far I love the story it's a fun read, but i at this point it doesn't feel like his family is the top family in the city, everyone is so easily targeting them and facing no serious repercussions. Everything he is facing on his own. Does the family gets more involve later on, and shows why they are the top family?

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Patricia_Ebong_7262

It is a good read, a perfectly crafted story

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X_demon

it's great buddy,I like it. After such a long time find such a good novel

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Takamiya_Shin

I stopped at chapter two, MC is temperamental, every time he speaks he has to shout 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

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IThinkSo

The character’s personality is like if Batman lacked a sense of justice, other than that the Author is incredibly creative and legible.

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MoreMercury76

Garbage. Another waste of time story....

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T1l

Excellent Light Novel. A crucial point to not lose focus would be Internal Consistency, ensuring that the characters' actions are in accordance with their professions, motivations and the world in which they live.