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Viết đánh giái don't get why people don't like it it is good and i like fast paced and op mc but his personality after getting power gets simplified and mor dumb or he is just a jerk from the start
Terrible, to fast pace and his cheat is too strong. He groomed his five year old sister. Being reincarnated as Kaidos son was a good idea but it was terribly executed.
Mc chinese. Mc pathetic. Mc pedophile. Mc psychopath. Xianxia Wuxia [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Tiết lộ SpoilerAuthor making his pedo wet dream become true with a 5 year old… This… —-aaaaaaaa so you were 16 in your last life 5 year time skip which would make you around 21 mentally and you tryna go ham on your 5 year old sister I know I am down bad but this is beyond downbad you need to get that check it’s scary people like you outside
I'm surprised there still are non-degenerates in wn, and why are you claiming you wrote this? This is a translation this guy made, and even the translation is absolute dogshet
This fanfic is complete filth. I recommend not reading this and spare your eyes… A pity you can’t give a zero rating.
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Después de ver el primer capítulo que abuso de una niña de 5 años deje de leerlo es horrible como trata de hacerlo ver como normal terrible pedofilo ..................................................
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1 star for grooming, its complete wish fulfillment , mc is so basic no depth into his character just complete brainless scum, got mad when his sister almost got killed but started grooming her since they were five years old? makes no sense at all whatsoever. he killed his own father for no apparent reason just wanting the territory I under they had a fight but killing him when he’s the reason you have oni overpowered genes and have life on easy mode plus his backing since a child the reason you got a mythical fruit, mc is a leech. the author clearly doesn’t know how to portray characters in depth, people don’t fall for you after one conversation especially Nico Robin. Author clearly hasn’t been in a relationship I truly hope this is translated or something
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i read to chp20 it a hell hole ngl(that coming from me a guy who read mtl on daily basic) 100% would not recommend
Better use world /Verse magic, if you want write the verse/World use the Power System from that world,One Piece already have haki, and devil fruit. - character who reincarnated and kissed his 5 year old sister, what did the MC do in the previous world? pedo?? 😹😹.
This fanfic has great potential and has continuous updates, although it starts a little strange, leaving that aside, the fanfic is incredible.
The mc is a pedo who has no problem with doing sexual stuff with a 5 year old Yamato , if that doesn’t turn you off from this fic then you’re a weirdo
Straight up garbage. The mc is grooming(and kissing) his 5yo sister. Someone get the mf who wrote this behind bars
The writing is pretty bad, the author doesn’t even capitalize I and the main character is grooming his sister.
Absolute garbage. In the first chapter the mc is going after a 5 year old. Then it’s another system novel and lastly they start talking about sword intent like it’s some cultivation novel. Highly recommend not reading this.
The writing quality is good, I couldn't read past the 1st chapter of the story It's pretty bad actually hence no star to story development, updating is good, overall would not recommend.
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i don't get why people don't like it it is good and i like fast paced and op mc but his personality after getting power gets simplified and mor dumb or he is just a jerk from the start
Terrible, to fast pace and his cheat is too strong. He groomed his five year old sister. Being reincarnated as Kaidos son was a good idea but it was terribly executed.
Mc chinese. Mc pathetic. Mc pedophile. Mc psychopath. Xianxia Wuxia [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Tiết lộ SpoilerAuthor making his pedo wet dream become true with a 5 year old… This… —-aaaaaaaa so you were 16 in your last life 5 year time skip which would make you around 21 mentally and you tryna go ham on your 5 year old sister I know I am down bad but this is beyond downbad you need to get that check it’s scary people like you outside
I'm surprised there still are non-degenerates in wn, and why are you claiming you wrote this? This is a translation this guy made, and even the translation is absolute dogshet
This fanfic is complete filth. I recommend not reading this and spare your eyes… A pity you can’t give a zero rating.
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Después de ver el primer capítulo que abuso de una niña de 5 años deje de leerlo es horrible como trata de hacerlo ver como normal terrible pedofilo ..................................................
Tiết lộ Spoilerthis is very wrong ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
diseased[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
1 star for grooming, its complete wish fulfillment , mc is so basic no depth into his character just complete brainless scum, got mad when his sister almost got killed but started grooming her since they were five years old? makes no sense at all whatsoever. he killed his own father for no apparent reason just wanting the territory I under they had a fight but killing him when he’s the reason you have oni overpowered genes and have life on easy mode plus his backing since a child the reason you got a mythical fruit, mc is a leech. the author clearly doesn’t know how to portray characters in depth, people don’t fall for you after one conversation especially Nico Robin. Author clearly hasn’t been in a relationship I truly hope this is translated or something
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
i read to chp20 it a hell hole ngl(that coming from me a guy who read mtl on daily basic) 100% would not recommend
Better use world /Verse magic, if you want write the verse/World use the Power System from that world,One Piece already have haki, and devil fruit. - character who reincarnated and kissed his 5 year old sister, what did the MC do in the previous world? pedo?? 😹😹.
This fanfic has great potential and has continuous updates, although it starts a little strange, leaving that aside, the fanfic is incredible.
The mc is a pedo who has no problem with doing sexual stuff with a 5 year old Yamato , if that doesn’t turn you off from this fic then you’re a weirdo
Straight up garbage. The mc is grooming(and kissing) his 5yo sister. Someone get the mf who wrote this behind bars
The writing is pretty bad, the author doesn’t even capitalize I and the main character is grooming his sister.
Absolute garbage. In the first chapter the mc is going after a 5 year old. Then it’s another system novel and lastly they start talking about sword intent like it’s some cultivation novel. Highly recommend not reading this.
The writing quality is good, I couldn't read past the 1st chapter of the story It's pretty bad actually hence no star to story development, updating is good, overall would not recommend.
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