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Rise of the White Devil

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Tác giả: Crypthh

4.88 (12 số lượng người đọc)

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I was always alone, throughout my life. People looked at me with disdain because I was an orphan without parents. Constant abuse followed me everywhere. I lost touch with how to interact with others.

With each passing day, I grew more distant from my emotions until I scarcely recognized myself. The warmth of family and friendship felt foreign to me.

In the end, I snapped, and I became what I hated the most... something that wasn't human anymore... something that shouldn't have been born...

That was until I was reincarnated as Lucas Nightstar, granted a second chance at a happy life with a loving family. Now, I would do anything to protect them, live my life to the fullest, and was willing to destroy anyone who dares stand in my way of my newfound peace. Yet...

Little did I know what fate had in store for me.
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This is my first time writing a novel, so please give me feedback and point out my mistakes. English isn't my main language, so I could make some grammatical errors.

I don't know how this novel will turn out since I am writing this for fun. I don't have a fixed schedule for when I publish chapters, but if I see that it is going well, I might get more serious with my upload schedule (currently 2 chapters/day). So please support me through this journey with reviews and power stones.

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    athex
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    I have yet to read but I know this book as banger. Author actually writes really fast, just greedy with his stockpile. (His book is almost completed in his drafts.) Not only that, but Author is a big 86 fan, meaning author definitely cooks in the romance aspect. Sometimes we call him the "Reaper" because of how cool the author actually is. His image was actually leaked in the discord, and I have to say, he is quite handsome. Writing wise, author is really good at it with barely any grammatical errors. All of the conjunctions are properly placed. No errors in the past present participles as well. Adjectives are well thought out and not iterated. Join his discord as well, he is very interactive amongst his readers. Very cool personality, I'm a guy but I would date him.

    7mth
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    Vainglory0

    (Skip the first 10 sentences or so if you don't want to die of brain damage. I was on some white powder my homie got me for me.) Do you wanna see ppl get fooked over? Do you want an MC so fooked in the mind, he would abandon the entire with no second thoughts to accomplish what he wants to achieve? Do you want to see him lose everything and fail? Do you want to see him bound and helpless as he losses a part of him forever? Do you want to see an already broken man, break further? Well, then you're a fooking sadist. Seek help... is what any sane person would tell you. But I am not a sane person. Far from that, really. So here is what I have for you: Go read the fooking novel. For those who are not specifically looking for any of the things I mentioned above and are not as fooked in the mind as me and the rest, congratulations are in order. Coz you're fooking normal. Now that by itself is sad in it's own way but let's not go there. Instead... Here's an ordinary review for you: Writing quality: No glaring flaws here. The starting chapters are a bit rough with somewhat big paras, but it improves after the first 10 or so chapters. Anyways, proper punctuations, no over use of conjunctions, paragraphs of the right length. What more do you need? Stability of Updates: Updated once or twice a day without skipping any days. Instant 5 star. Story development: Stable development. The early chapters are a bit fast but he was a fooking kid anyways. The pace becomes normal after the time skip. Character Design: Well the story is still in the introductory phase so there is not much to say about it rn. But from what we have seen till now, some interesting characters have been introduced. The first is obviously the MC. If how I started this review didn't make it clear, I will say it again. The MC is broken asl. Both with his powers and his mind. Although, even if he has cheat-like powers, all the enemies he will face will be on a far higher level than him so you don't have to worry about it. From what little we see of his past we come to know just how messed up his life is. Although reincarnating and having a family alleviated some of his pain, keeping it that way would make it boring for us readers wouldn't it? Hehe.. hehehe.... Next is Sylv-whatever, she is your classic elven princess type shii so I will skip her. Next is Sera-something, who despite having only been introduced for not more than a couple of chapter, is quite the interesting character already(saying anymore would be a spoiler so I will skip over this). Next is ofc, the hero whose name I already forgot, who Lucas can wipe the floor with coz the hero started training late or whatever. EX.CU.SES. Despite me badmouthing a few of the characters, there are several good characters in the novel. The perfect examples would be the MC's family and the ones who work for them... that being I said, I forgot their names too... World Background: Well, the basic design is the same old with humans and elves and other races against the demons. If anything is new its that the demons are in another world unlike in other novels and mythical races that used to exist in the past play a huge role. Overall I would say this is a novel with good potential and blah blah blah. Finally, I would like to mention that I don't remember all the character names not because I am high, but because I am not good with names... just saying.

    7mth
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    Okojus

    This is a captivating read with flawless grammar and a compelling plot. The character interactions are dynamic and well-developed, adding depth to the story. Each chapter leaves readers eager for more, and the consistent upload rate is commendable. The narrative truly shines after chapter 30, evolving into a masterpiece of intricate storytelling and character development. This novel is a must-read for any fantasy enthusiast.

    7mth
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    Fallen_Angel_26

    5 stars because the author threatened me to write a review. Okay let's start the review. Everything is good except the author chose to change the fml. I didn't like it. Everything else is good. Good pace, Good grammar, very few mistakes. Lovely Lolis, Sexy fml. Everything is peak 🙏

    6mth
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    _Great_Love_

    Finally something worth reading written by my lil bro... Keep it up.... Write more....Earn more

    6mth
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    Patrick_Stoudamire

    This book is amazing! Bing reading all the way up to the 60th chpter. One of the longest free reads out there and it gives you a lot of serious flashes to comical encounters. Back story covers everything, character building is excellent and makes you remember everyone. Great job to the author

    6mth
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    RedFox92

    great book actually one of the best i have read on this Platform IT feels deeper and more thought out than Most other novels

    5mth
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    Paybacks_a_bitch

    This is my 1st review on webnovel and to be honest, I consider it an honour to write a review of this book. This novel is literally one of the best reincarnation novels I've read on this app. The mc's able to quickly adapt to his new world but he still displays pieces of his previous world's modern culture in his speech and mannerisms. I think its absolutely amazing how the author manages to keep this balance. The grammar is beyond flawless (and author says his first language isn't English 💀 I don't even want to think about how many grammatical errors I've made while writing this and English is my first language 😭 ) I'm 30 chapters in and it's been worth every minute spent reading. I can't wait to see how the plot progresses.

    5mth
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    Blak_cherry

    From the style of writing to the world building, it's been a thrilling journey so far. The author has done an excellent job of putting much effort into the storyline and the characters, proving that this book is worth the read.

    6mth
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    Hardy1j
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    Do I even need to say anything? Just go read it!! The novel is good. Very Good. (*Ahem* Wouldn't write a review coz it doesn't even have 100 chaps, alas, the author forced me to) Writing Quality: Smooth flow It is pretty good compared to the average writing on this app. You can just read it as it flows smoothly. Though, definitely not the best, but one of the finest I've read recently. Story Development: The story is pretty fast paced with next to none fillers unlike other novels and that's what makes this novel very likeable by me. It is developed properly by Crypth, not like anything goes. Seems well-planned as everything falls into place with more chapters. Character Design: Honestly, they might seem cliche at the beginning, but trust me, they are not(at least some of them aren't). You can expect some weird characters and funny ones too. The story has more of a darker tone, so do expect all types of characters as it seems to encompass snippets from real life itself. Updates: They are more or less regular even though I got betrayed by Crypth from 100 free chapters to locking early. Still, currently he is busy with exams and is still trying to meet updates, so he will be regular for sure. World background: The latest chapter is the best one I have read regarding world backgrounds in my most recent reads. It felt fresh even if somewhat cliche. But one thing I can say with certainty, it is definitely pretty good. A lot, however, remains unexplored. Romance: A lot remains unanswered but one thing is certain. The FL is freaking amazing, and a monster like Lucas. You're gonna enjoy it!! 101% Conclusion: What are you waiting for?? Go read it!! Ah yes, I am an author too, so go read my books too if you get bored of his novel xD. Okay, for real now. This book is really good, just go read it, you will love it if you like MCs who don't hate the idea of becoming hated by entire humanity for their loved ones. Reader's discretion: There is an annoying Hero who is like the typical cliche you can guess, so just beware if you hate such characters.

    6mth
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    UBI_Master

    The author is cooking for sure. It has beautiful writing and as a novel reader, it pleased the eyes. And the author really know what he was doing. The characters, power system, world building, it's described in compelling way. My problem is only 1 thing, i feel uneasy about the progress of MC. it's feel almost no challenge at all, it's somewhat creep me out when you reminded that his affinity is chaos. i feel something really bad will happened. or maybe I'm wrong and the chill tone is the overall tone. But in the end, it is a good story with big potential laying around

    6mth
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    Vanilla_Chino

    This guy really knows his stuff... from the systems, the world, the characters, everything is well placed and thoughtfully written. Love the main characters drive, motive, and determination. The setting is a bit calm at first but learning about the world and system itself will keep you captivated. Give it a read. Well done author, you have done made a good one.

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    Chapter 118: (do not read yet) + check discord + Hiatus 5 months ago

    Âm lượng 1 : Birth of the White Devil

    1. 1
      A new life 8 months ago
    2. 2
      Emotions 8 months ago
    3. 3
      No lies 8 months ago
    4. 4
      Progenitor of Chaos 8 months ago
    5. 5
      Training 8 months ago
    6. 6
      History of Myrniel 8 months ago
    7. 7
      Heir of the Nightstars 8 months ago
    8. 8
      Skills 8 months ago
    9. 9
      Blade of Chaos 8 months ago
    10. 10
      Noctis 8 months ago
    11. 11
      First mission 8 months ago
    12. 12
      Dungeon [1] 8 months ago
    13. 13
      Dungeon [2] 8 months ago
    14. 14
      Soul bond 8 months ago
    15. 15
      Dungeon [3] 8 months ago
    16. 16
      Belphegor 8 months ago
    17. 17
      2 years and 9 months 8 months ago
    18. 18
      Escort Mission 8 months ago
    19. 19
      Noctis, The White Devil 8 months ago
    20. 20
      Sylviette Velariah 8 months ago
    21. 21
      A battle to survive [1] 8 months ago
    22. 22
      A battle to survive [2] 8 months ago
    23. 23
      A battle to survive [3] 8 months ago
    24. 24
      Aftermath 8 months ago
    25. 25
      The Princess Of The Elven Kingdom 8 months ago
    26. 26
      Friends 8 months ago
    27. 27
      Queen Amara 8 months ago
    28. 28
      Pride 8 months ago
    29. 29
      'thing' 8 months ago
    30. 30
      Seer [1] 8 months ago
    31. 31
      Seer [2] 7 months ago
    32. 32
      A Kind Person 7 months ago
    33. 33
      Return 7 months ago
    34. 34
      Lena Nightstar 7 months ago
    35. 35
      Reunited 7 months ago
    36. 36
      Dark Rose 7 months ago
    37. 37
      Family Date [1] 7 months ago
    38. 38
      Family Date [2] 7 months ago
    39. 39
      A champion's Turmoil 7 months ago
    40. 40
      Lucas Nightstar, son of a viscount [1] 7 months ago
    41. 41
      Lucas Nightstar, son of a viscount [2] 7 months ago
    42. 42
      Lucas Nightstar, son of a viscount [3] 7 months ago
    43. 43
      Lucas Nightstar, son of a viscount [4] 7 months ago
    44. 44
      Lucas Nightstar, son of a viscount [5] 7 months ago
    45. 45
      Lucas Nightstar, son of a viscount [6] 7 months ago
    46. 46
      Resolve 7 months ago
    47. 47
      Recovering 7 months ago
    48. 48
      The White Devil vs The God of Fire [1] 7 months ago
    49. 49
      The White Devil vs The God of Fire [2] 7 months ago
    50. 50
      Zaphyr 7 months ago
    51. 51
      Shield Academy 7 months ago
    52. 52
      Survive 7 months ago
    53. 53
      Group of Monsters 7 months ago
    54. 54
      The White Devil and The Hero 7 months ago
    55. 55
      Wings of Despair [1] 7 months ago
    56. 56
      Wings of Despair [2] 7 months ago
    57. 57
      Wings of Despair [3] 7 months ago
    58. 58
      Wings of Despair [4] 7 months ago
    59. 59
      Wings of Despair [5] 7 months ago
    60. 60
      Fall of Despair 7 months ago
    61. 61
      Dark Horse 7 months ago
    62. 62
      The Massacre of Shibuya Hospital. 7 months ago
    63. 63
      Seraphina Darkcrest 7 months ago
    64. 64
      Reactions 7 months ago
    65. 65
      The Voidwalkers 7 months ago
    66. 66
      Crazy Lucas 7 months ago
    67. 67
      Calamity of Dread [1] 7 months ago
    68. 68
      Calamity of Dread [2] 7 months ago
    69. 69
      Calamity of Dread [3] 7 months ago
    70. 70
      Calamity of Dread [4] 7 months ago
    71. 71
      Light of Judgement 7 months ago
    72. 72
      Genius 7 months ago
    73. 73
      Reckless 7 months ago
    74. 74
      Elizabeth Thorne 7 months ago
    75. 75
      Entrance Ceremony 6 months ago
    76. 76
      Alaric Darkcrest 6 months ago
    77. 77
      Class S-1 6 months ago
    78. 78
      Sparring 6 months ago
    79. 79
      A monster [1] 6 months ago
    80. 80
      A monster [2] 6 months ago
    81. 81
      Curse 6 months ago
    82. 82
      Death Zone 6 months ago
    83. 83
      Fried Eggs 6 months ago
    84. 84
      A Saint's Dread [1] 6 months ago
    85. 85
      A Saint's Dread [2] 6 months ago
    86. 86
      Idiots 6 months ago
    87. 87
      Julius Cordis 6 months ago
    88. 88
      Nyx, Sovereign of Shadows [1] 6 months ago
    89. 89
      Nyx, Sovereign of Shadows [2] 6 months ago
    90. 90
      The Void 6 months ago
    91. 91
      Denial 6 months ago
    92. 92
      Sovereign of Chaos 6 months ago
    93. 93
      Church 6 months ago
    94. 94
      The Devil Goes to Church 6 months ago
    95. 95
      Vulnerable 6 months ago
    96. 96
      Cursed by the Stars 6 months ago
    97. 97
      Nightmare 6 months ago
    98. 98
      The Black Market [1] 6 months ago
    99. 99
      The Black Market [2] 6 months ago
    100. 100
      The Black Market [3] 6 months ago
    101. 101
      The Black Market [4] 6 months ago
    102. 102
      Supreme 6 months ago
    103. 103
      Battle Style 6 months ago
    104. 104
      Damien Darkcrest 6 months ago
    105. 105
      Partners 6 months ago
    106. 106
      Crimson Eyes 6 months ago
    107. 107
      ERROR CHAPTER 6 months ago
    108. 108
      Hiatus + announcement (check discord) 6 months ago
    109. 109
      (Do not read yet) 6 months ago
    110. 110
      (do not read yet) 6 months ago
    111. 111
      (Do not read yet) 6 months ago
    112. 112
      (do not read yet) 6 months ago
    113. 113
      (do not read yet) 6 months ago
    114. 114
      (do not read yet) 5 months ago
    115. 115
      (Do not read yet) 5 months ago
    116. 116
      (do not read yet) 5 months ago
    117. 117
      (do not read yet) 5 months ago
    118. 118
      (do not read yet) + check discord + Hiatus 5 months ago

    Tác giả Crypthh