Naval Gacha System: It's Time To Monopolize The Seven Seas!

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Iseeyou

Just reading the useless summary made me frown. I mean come on.

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WasUp_IKnowYou

This novel has a promising story with great potential. I just hope the author would not drop this.

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Nomand_

Amei essa obra, espero que traga mais capítulos e por favor não abandone essa maravilha. Cuide de sua saúde e traga mais capítulos, eu imploro.

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manpapper

I really enjoyed those 50 chapter. The only negative point is that the chapter feels too short, I reached the last chapter in a jiff Can't wait for more :) Great job so far authoer keep up the good work

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Brayan_C2

I Recommend. It is very interesting 🤨 🚢🛥️⛴️🛳️

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Miya_sei

i freaking love this story you will not be bored at every chapter i really recommend it guys its a hidden (DRAGON HEART)🥰 . . . This novel really captured my Heart guys I Hope Author Won't Drop this MASTER PIECE

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Ablack_Cat

Now i'm not typically sure if the chapters are too short since I am new to reading webnovels, BUT I am enjoying it like cool millitary navy in a fantasy world that's sick asf and I do certainly enjoy the interactions between mc and the miss dragon lady (hopefully the ship is real) and I look forward to reading

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MrDraXuz

Fairly well written. as the number of errors over the course of 55 chapters is within the single digits. However, there are several spots where things could have been worded differently to make better sense or flow. The characters are fairly different and the change in POV between them gives a better idea of just how confused terrified people from an earlier era would be when faced with any modern military. There is a part of me that can't help but compare it to Nihonkoku Shoukan(Summoned Japan) as it's one of my favorite primitive smack down stories. Don't get me wrong, the story so far has been great and very engaging, but there are many nuances that, when done right, can send a shiver up a military nerds spine. Radio communications etiquette, callsigns, and brevity are a big part of that as well as individual/group placement within a formation. These are just thing I would like to used more for the professional soldiers as this is their career and something they would be doing all the time. I'll end it here with "I'm not a scali-"......

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CephalonCoda

Oooooh boy... as a huge military nutcase, i gotta review this one. Alright, let's start with writing quality. Honestly, in terms of word choice and descriptions, it's fine. There is nothing to write home about there but also not many obvious issues, and only some mild feelings that things are described a bit too similarly between the ships, and sometimes it feels a bit repetitive with how the issues have been solved up to this point, seemingly just throwing weapons at enemies until they all explode, when Id personally like to see some more creative use of modern technology coming into play, but I also am not docking any points for that since the story has barely started, and that feels like the possible next direction the author is going in. Now for the plot so far. Honestly, im super impressed. The pacing specifically feels VERY enjoyable to read, and the timeskips are well implemented and dont remove my immersion much, I love to see it. Characters... honestly, at the time of writing this review, im at a bit of an odd spot with the characters, as I want to like them and root for them, but at times, I feel as though his "stern and cold" act used as a shield to kind of gloss over the lack of personal growth ive seen in the MC. Again, its early in the story so this may end up fixed later on and I dont want him to totally change but he seemingly is making the perfect decisions at every turn despite being super new to this and thus doesnt really learn or change much. I do actually love this kind of "system" character as it lets the mc sneak in info and stuff readers need while not taking the attention off the actual supporting cast. The last major topic I'll cover is world building. I am extremely happy with how the world is being built. Things up to this point make a lot of sense and seem thought out in advance. It feels like a very small world at this point so far, but again, with the pacing this book has, that is already more than most books I've read at this point. Lastly, a couple of final thoughts just from me. The book is off to a great start and can go very far and has a ton of potential. I was trying to be mostly unbiased, but personally, I love this large-scale military summoning books, so to compensate, I was probably a little too harsh in the actual reviewing part. As of now, the book has 56 chapters released, and im looking forward to more. I do worry somewhat about the story being too focused on small-scale issues for my taste later on, but im hoping it remains where it is, a very large-scale type of book, hopefully with large scale politics and wars and strategy being the focus. I've seen a lot of these stories start strong and then kinda divulge into "We had 100 but they had 10,000, but we won bc main character". I seriously hope that this story focuses on the strategy and goes more in-depth on that and less just throwing enough bigger weapons until it dies, lol. Overall, these last thoughts have been about other authors and not this one, so it's all groundless fears for now. with how well the author has done with worldbuilding the areas we have been to at this point, I am happy to give benefit of the doubt to someone who obviously has a lot of passion for this project, and im happy to join you on your voyage, Author. Fair seas and following winds! 07

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DaoistTsuLing

this is such a good premise the storyline is very engaging and well put together iIhope the author keeps up the updates iIeven had to make a new category in my collections for this one as it is such a promising system novel

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CelestailStar

I’ve seen some of these novel but not many developed of these type of books. The concept is very interesting and entertaining love the book so far. Keep up the work Author and hopefully we have a much faster release of chapter!!!

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JackNantis

This is the second review i wrote, and the writer just keeps his level. Very nice, I say . The only thing me and probably some other readers dislike may be the length and the quantity of the chapters, but if you keep the quality and good story connection up, nobody would like to change things cause creation is hard. PS: If this story still has me reading and waiting for the next chapter till chapter 110 I think I would like to make a translated version of the bock. Of course not, Google translated course they are very bad, no I would translate the story to German if that's OK for the writer .

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JackNantis

The story until Chap.82 was a nice read. The MC is a military commander, and the setting just clicks together, so I hope the writer doesn't drop this work. Till now, a solid 4.3.

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Josh_graves

its says there r 56 chapters but I only see 54 where r the last 2?

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ASM_132226

Really nice story and development till now, hope the author will keep updating and keep up with the great work.

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Chaos_Necromancer

A very good novel with awesome world building.Author we need the character image of laplace

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Jacob_Johnson_3750

this book is really well done it has really good action in it cant wait for more

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usman_farooq

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