Skill Forge: Broken Extra Character

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Jack_Alexander24

Ngl, this story is quite immersive, its got those kingdom building vibe, reincarnation, OP cheat, Wholesome Family, fantasy, and other all those mainstream genres out there, I feel like there’s no harem here cuz the females are not that adorable but nevertheless competent, that’s more amazing than those weak females who just stands there and then have minimal character development, oh and though I say they are competent, I did not mean those females that are OVERLY competent in which they have FLAWS that’s much to be desired, like those obsessive yandere girls or those very assertive ho*s. One thing to point out is that it’s not perfect, there are holes from here and there which makes the world building incomplete, the Author has not yet solidified the foundation of the story and it mainly focused on MC’s POV for like 90%. and 10% are to other extra. I would like for the author to balance the different sides to give us the clear image of the whole story. I would like to learn the the MC’s family, the Nobles, the Royalty, and much more, yet the author did not include such information in the initial chapters where MC was learning, it just skipped like A LOT. The author even skipped where he got those materials for financial and he only highlighted one battle lol, so much skipperoo in this story lol, that’s why I said there are holes to the story. There are no costs in some skills, and a certain skill is really Overpowered despite only have a Rating A in which mc abuses all the time. The only saving grace why this novel is good because it has good depth to it despite being there being many plot holes. But I think author can readjust such story and look forward to it when he revise this story cuz its really good, hope he can keep going and stay strong!💪

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Z_E_N_I_T_H_89

The novel idea is good plot is ✨ I love how structured the characters and pace is. definitely a good read.

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KBKayboy

well, the story is quite immersive and engaging. I can't wait to see how Ethan will survive in this new world

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Tallis_Parker

I tried to read this but it just doesn't make much sense at points

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King_of_Dezz_Nuts

Pathetic beta pushover behaviour Mc at least in chapter 5

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Nife_mi

Brilliant. Reading only the synopsis and I am already hooked. I just wish the author would update more😫

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Favour_Ogbor

As someone who’s not so familiar with fantasy books, I’d say this one was pretty easy to read and understand–a gripping tale. The only thing is, I’d have liked a bit more exposition for those that don’t exactly understand how video games work because I was a bit confused about the whole concept. My favorite character has to be the one with the loud mouth, the female, I think her name starts with a J? We’re kinda alike.

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AscendedMortal

The writing is very confusing and the skill merger dosent really make any sense aswell as the skills it makes its just not very well fleshed out but the premiss is interesting

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KBKayboy

fire book 🔥🔥🔥 so lit. please keep it up author. this book is a must read for all readers and I highly recommend it

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Wayne_Lowry

not too bad at all kind of wish the characters were older at the start but yeah

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Heng_Xiang

The story is really enjoyable. It feels wholesome, without unnecessary cliches and amounts to an enjoyable read It has all the elements to make a good fantasy story with an overpowered hero. The writting style also gradually improves as the story progress, with multiple charecter POV'swhich do not feel forced and come together nicely at the end. Overall a cheerful and a good read.

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WALL_NOVEL

This story is really intriguing I can't stop myself from reading!! pls help me 🥺

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JWB_Kante

One of the best novel here, I love it. Kudos to the author

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Peluzzy

This book should be highly recommend, I love it already especially stories like this reincarnation and so The genre is nice kudos author more knowledge

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Lordmoonlight

My major turn off is the mc always talking about things he could have just saw and said in his mind but most is always aloud

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RaymondRosales

need fastttt updateeeddddddddddddddddddddd

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BalsamicThunThighs

Feels a bit choppy but I atleast can tell there's some heart in this. If I had to describe it to someone it kinda reads like a lighthearted shounen novel for some odd reason. Jett our MC gets since into a world based on a game. He gets his little cheats and in theory has potential to become overpowered very early. Does it do it justice? Kinda? It's not perfect and you'll probably notice some errors on the way with skills and percentages. I can't say it's top tier for me and gets me hooked personally. I think it's nice but there's something missing that keeps me invested. I'm not quite sure what it is though. Maybe a goal? Not the become the strongest in the world that's for sure. Give it a try is my best recommendation. Score 7 out of 10. Personal Score is a 7 out of 10.

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Lovely1

The writing skills of the writer was the first thing that quip my interest , but upon reading I realised that the novel has a good story line ❤️

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Ephatha

nice job. continue to write, I was really attracted by the plot too.