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Sinceramente es una buena historia pero el simple hecho que no interfiera en nada y todo resulte prácticamente igual con algunos cambios me hizo abandonar esta historia
It boring after the one piece part of the story and I think it just boring in general and hope that nobody waste time something so trash kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
The idea is good, but the implementation is very bad. Giving the strongest power from the beginning is a wrong idea. If he had given him 1% of the power and then made him train to get more power, the story would have been more interesting instead of this rushed story full of filler and problems with its logic. And all his enemies turned into a group of fools before or when they fought with him, but before that, when they were not among his enemies, they were smart. Two stars for the idea.
Well, typical webnovel translated story. Many consistent mistakes in Name, title, terms, ability-name. The translator doesn't edit or even proof read. In short, writing quality is bad. But still above machine-translated story. Now onto the story... Well, like another reviewer pointed; one-two line turned into whole chapter. Then another chapter or two are just 'reaction' chapter from random characters. Character Design is... You have to already know One Piece and... what is that anime called, the one that uses ryujin jakka, flame, bankai etc. All references from them will suddenly be mentioned. Also, mc is not murder-hobo. But because One Piece is pirate vs marine, mc will kill, but not like civilians or random people Updating Stability is... idk, so will place 4. World Background... this is a fanfiction. Overall this story have interesting plot and the mc is not murder-hobo. But very bad writing, not just because of the translation, but the way the author wrote the story. In case not clear, i don't recommend this story.
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en general es interesante pero solitario. y sin descanso todo el tiempo peleando se vuelve bastante básico pero es bueno en todo caso
Chega um momento que vc não consegue mais ler cheguei no 50 mas a enrolação é muito chata.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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I like this fic very much which is due to the latest chapters and the fights are insane. I hope you continue your work. All the best for your endeavour.
it's good. even though the grammar of writing isnt't. i can just imagine everything just fine.
Terrible translation, short chapters, many inconsistencies, no context, weak story (seriously? Chinese people can't make a strong protagonist without a system? Years of training to become a "colonel" navy...)
Tried to read it but had an aneurysm in the middle of it thanks to the horrible MTL translation
The grammar is all over the place, as is the stories factual information. Nothing seems consistent with Canon details, e.g. baileys vs belli, colonel vs captain, sky gold vs heavenly gold. I like the premise of the story, however the incorrect details in the story from canon, without any forewarning or explanation has put me off. If this is a translation, the author should be noticing and fixing these issues, or getting a Beta reader to do it for them.
by far the best One Piece fanfiction I have ever read. the concept of having characters or templates of another anime inserted in One Piece is not new, but the story, the characters, the update speed and also the fun in reading this novel is very very good! im looking for more chapters!!!
One of my favorites Chinese fanfic... Thank you for translation author ........... ............ .............. ............ .............. Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Writer only have one good ability, one and only ability to brag about and stretch anything to make it long enough to made one chapter out one single line ,some time make two chapters from one single line. Last 10 or so should be one chapter and author Bragg and stretch them into 10 or many more chapters.
Author ch 38 is wrong, control it because the content are for your Naruto fanfiction
This fanfic is just bad. Just imagine a machine translated fanfic, but about 10% better.
Ich finde die Idee gut ein starken Charakter in den teil der Geschichte wurden von one piece einzufügen. Aber die Umsetzung ist schlecht da die Geschichte nicht wirklich von dem hauptcharakter handelt sondern eher die Reaktion auf ihm, die dann auch mehrfach von allen möglichen Parteien wiederholt dargestellt wird weshalb die einzelnen Kapitel kaum Inhalt bieten die die Geschichte voranbringt. Daher erinnert mich die Geschichte stark an chinesischen KI stories.
upto chapter 16. every chapter are toooooo stretch. it could be summarized as " he retired, got cheat, buster call on his hometown, and killed the celestial dragon. i hope next chapter will not be stretch to much. some sentences are repeated over and over. ot has good story just toooo stretch.
Excellent book! Can't wait for more... [img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move]
this Yamamoto Genryusai fanfiction is well made. this translation work is also top notch. so i will rate it as a must read for those interested and looking for this type of novel. the 1st world is one piece and the second is naruto. still on the second arc. so waiting for more. thank you.
Sinceramente es una buena historia pero el simple hecho que no interfiera en nada y todo resulte prácticamente igual con algunos cambios me hizo abandonar esta historia
It boring after the one piece part of the story and I think it just boring in general and hope that nobody waste time something so trash kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
The idea is good, but the implementation is very bad. Giving the strongest power from the beginning is a wrong idea. If he had given him 1% of the power and then made him train to get more power, the story would have been more interesting instead of this rushed story full of filler and problems with its logic. And all his enemies turned into a group of fools before or when they fought with him, but before that, when they were not among his enemies, they were smart. Two stars for the idea.
Well, typical webnovel translated story. Many consistent mistakes in Name, title, terms, ability-name. The translator doesn't edit or even proof read. In short, writing quality is bad. But still above machine-translated story. Now onto the story... Well, like another reviewer pointed; one-two line turned into whole chapter. Then another chapter or two are just 'reaction' chapter from random characters. Character Design is... You have to already know One Piece and... what is that anime called, the one that uses ryujin jakka, flame, bankai etc. All references from them will suddenly be mentioned. Also, mc is not murder-hobo. But because One Piece is pirate vs marine, mc will kill, but not like civilians or random people Updating Stability is... idk, so will place 4. World Background... this is a fanfiction. Overall this story have interesting plot and the mc is not murder-hobo. But very bad writing, not just because of the translation, but the way the author wrote the story. In case not clear, i don't recommend this story.
ZzzzzzZzzzzZzzzZzzzZzz The story have only one character, is Mc. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
en general es interesante pero solitario. y sin descanso todo el tiempo peleando se vuelve bastante básico pero es bueno en todo caso
Chega um momento que vc não consegue mais ler cheguei no 50 mas a enrolação é muito chata.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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I like this fic very much which is due to the latest chapters and the fights are insane. I hope you continue your work. All the best for your endeavour.
it's good. even though the grammar of writing isnt't. i can just imagine everything just fine.
Terrible translation, short chapters, many inconsistencies, no context, weak story (seriously? Chinese people can't make a strong protagonist without a system? Years of training to become a "colonel" navy...)
Tried to read it but had an aneurysm in the middle of it thanks to the horrible MTL translation
The grammar is all over the place, as is the stories factual information. Nothing seems consistent with Canon details, e.g. baileys vs belli, colonel vs captain, sky gold vs heavenly gold. I like the premise of the story, however the incorrect details in the story from canon, without any forewarning or explanation has put me off. If this is a translation, the author should be noticing and fixing these issues, or getting a Beta reader to do it for them.
by far the best One Piece fanfiction I have ever read. the concept of having characters or templates of another anime inserted in One Piece is not new, but the story, the characters, the update speed and also the fun in reading this novel is very very good! im looking for more chapters!!!
One of my favorites Chinese fanfic... Thank you for translation author ........... ............ .............. ............ .............. Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Writer only have one good ability, one and only ability to brag about and stretch anything to make it long enough to made one chapter out one single line ,some time make two chapters from one single line. Last 10 or so should be one chapter and author Bragg and stretch them into 10 or many more chapters.
Author ch 38 is wrong, control it because the content are for your Naruto fanfiction
This fanfic is just bad. Just imagine a machine translated fanfic, but about 10% better.
Ich finde die Idee gut ein starken Charakter in den teil der Geschichte wurden von one piece einzufügen. Aber die Umsetzung ist schlecht da die Geschichte nicht wirklich von dem hauptcharakter handelt sondern eher die Reaktion auf ihm, die dann auch mehrfach von allen möglichen Parteien wiederholt dargestellt wird weshalb die einzelnen Kapitel kaum Inhalt bieten die die Geschichte voranbringt. Daher erinnert mich die Geschichte stark an chinesischen KI stories.
upto chapter 16. every chapter are toooooo stretch. it could be summarized as " he retired, got cheat, buster call on his hometown, and killed the celestial dragon. i hope next chapter will not be stretch to much. some sentences are repeated over and over. ot has good story just toooo stretch.
Excellent book! Can't wait for more... [img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move]
this Yamamoto Genryusai fanfiction is well made. this translation work is also top notch. so i will rate it as a must read for those interested and looking for this type of novel. the 1st world is one piece and the second is naruto. still on the second arc. so waiting for more. thank you.