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ArifuretaForever

Author your books are good. Great plot and character development. Good writing with hardly any errors. It's why I love your works and why I'm glad you came back to webnovel. I can't wait to see where this one goes.

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Rellik_Snoe

Another absolute banger from AlienWarlord.The authors ability to pace a story leaves every chapter feeling like another well placed facet in a grand gem.

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EyeOfSilver

Had to drop due to the dark tag sorry I was not expecting a sad fanfic for star lord

13h
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BigRat_76

this book is just great I personally enjoy this story even though I did not expect the crossover into transformers I loved it

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Silas_Savitar_

MC: SI Peter Quill / Star Lord Rating: 10/10 Love: Natasha, Mikaela MC is set in an AU MCU, Star wars universe which is relatively well done. The story is very unique and creative. The time jumps are very good and the pacing of the story moves along well. Oh and the Transformers are there too

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leylin_slytherin

As of chapter 27 The character design in just cringe , but that's ok, but what i can't stand is BLOODY AI WRITING, seriously your previous book about voldy SI was so much better, I had high hopes , the plot line is good but cannot tolerate the AI WRITING, I regret not being able to give less that 1 start for Wiring Quality PS : If ai wiring stops or becomes more tolerable like not 5 adjectives every sentence , leave a reply , i'll continue reading this book

26d
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eroskun

Soul merging character stories are shit. Either be one or the other not both. That's just an excuse for being lazy and not wanting to think of a character unique personality so just use the original character's and give them the buff of knowledge. Perfect excuse: soul merging

1mth
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LongSongGolden

One of the best crossover (Star Wars, Marvel, Transformers, and more) novels I've read recently. it has some issues where there are just so many characters that they sometimes get forgotten about while the MC does his thing, but that's sorta how it goes unless you want to do different PoVs every single chapter. overall it's a really good novel. I wish there were even more chapters but the update stability is pretty solid.

1mth
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TuRead1
LV 13 Badge

It surprised me how good this book was. I thought it would be cliche from the summary, but it's actually got a good story. It has solid character growth, but I could do without the overpowered powers. I do like how it includes how he involves his team to accomplish what he got. I also loved how the author blended star wars with marvel content. solid book.[img=update]

2mth
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Jploui93

It's not in the tags, but it's harem. Literally with every female MC meets, they fall for him.

2mth
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Daoist669967

As far as I could see the narrative is too formal, it needs to be more fluid with words that are better understood by everyone, and the whole situation seems wrong to me, it is necessary to understand geopolitics and human relations in the contexts of the characters, which if you know the story well it is possible to have a good idea, I think that is not the case in this story, I honestly think that when it starts wrong as a consequence everything goes wrong, this is just my opinion but I think the author is to be congratulated for the attempt but he should try again in another story.

2mth
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pacul
LV 13

one of the most hypocritical and self righteous MC I've ever read, one moment he committed an atrocity, next he spouted some "no need to thank me" speech with a "I'm always right" smirk

2mth
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Justin_Ixcol

Pretty neat yeah❣️❤️ Transformers!!!! X Star Wars X Marvel!!!! I love the plot line with the all spark taking place of the cube. I hope we have similar situations that the author writes small colbas to fulfill the missing infinity stones. Also no stones in this fic😅 Overall I really enjoy this book so I suggest y’all sick to it!

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3mth
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QBL
LV 4 Badge

a lot of cringe stuff. ...............................................................................................................................

3mth
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Meta0202

shit.........shit.........shit............shit.............shit.........shit.............shit...........shit...........shit..........shit...........shit.............shit

3mth
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ChineseChung

Writing quality is good, so is the update stability and world background absolutely no complaints. The story development and character design make me want to slam a scooter into my shin. The MC is a morally flip flop of a character who decides when and where to show mercy and only goes out of his way to redeem people if they are named characters or female.

3mth
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DRAVIDIAN

This is a great fic, I’ve fully caught up in less than a week, which I’m cursing my past self for now haha. Great writing, little to no errors and the plot progression has been great, but if I have to nitpick, I do have one small gripe. Sometimes characters (esp the girls) can act out of character to the MC, which I think takes away from the story more than it makes Quill seem “cool”, a prime example is how Romanoff acted towards him, it didn’t feel at all like how a trained spy would. Other than that small issue, the story has been great :)

3mth
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DaoistHeartAttack

This has been a disappointing novel compared to the authors other novels second only to the voldemort one. . . . .. .. ... . . .

3mth
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Lizrock

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3mth
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XP_HAVOK

this novel isn't bad except 2 glaring issues. 1 every female character is weak willed woman who after he helps them immediately becomes a blushing mess that has fallen in love with him. the 2nd my biggest thing I don't like with the character having the mind of a 40 year old man has seduced mostly minors like 90% minors the youngest being probably 7 and while he says he likes older characters every single chance he has gotten he turns them down but doesn't to the minor characters and even flirts with them with each having nearly the same personality.

3mth
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GupGodLicker

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4mth
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Flame_Slasher

The author is just writing for the sake of writing.. Just forcing the story.

4mth
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Ole_Tessmann

It’s a really good fanfic. The writing is superb, there is a clear storyline and the characters are fleshed out and don’t feel artificial at all. The main characters actions are relatable and I especially like that he’s not all light or dark, but a healthy mix of both. The only somewhat negative thing I can say is that it’s a mash up of many different verses, just one or two chapters ago transformers were introduced as well. There is Star Wars, Marvel, x-men and now transformers. It’s not inherently bad but I imagine the writing can become complicated with so many things going on all at once. A lot of the chapters now have been focused on earth which is understandable especially since he’s been looking for it before since it’s his home planet, but especially Star Wars has such a large universe that it’d be sad to be hyper focused on earth in the long run, since marvel, x-men and transformers are mostly centered around earth

4mth
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bearburrable

I haven't read this yet but I know it's gonna be fire, but at the same time I don't want to read it since I don't know much about the Star Wars series and its plot.

4mth
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Gawd
LV 15 Badge

at chapter 4, the story is good, but I am not sure of the decision to merge SW and Marvel. it would have been much better imho to have had Reformed Anakin transmigrated to Quill. Ani's love of tech would make him an inventor on parwith Stark and his Jedi training could allow him to fully excavate quill's potential as a half celestial. other than that GJ.

4mth
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Lolita_Dragonit

The hero has character problems... at one moment he is a "Hero" at another he kills the military who were working to catch the criminal... because one of the Marvel heroes beat the black widow

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4mth
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Alexxz

Está también es una gran novela jaja, la de esta novela también la hice con un estilo parecido a la que puse en la reseña de "I'am Spider-Man" ojalá te guste, sigue con el buen trabajo hermano[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]

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Dregon3650

me gusta ya que no había visto nada que me interesará Si buscas una aventura espacial llena de acción, humor irreverente y un protagonista carismático, "Soy Star-Lord" es la elección perfecta. Esta serie de s te sumerge en la vida de Peter Quill, un humano convertido en forajido espacial que lidera a los Guardianes de la Galaxia.

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PUERKO_Senpai

(Chapter 74) The plot is getting more and more strange. The protagonist goes from not being very good with a technique to being able to use it to destroy an army of drones and all the technology in a kilometer radius, except for Cosmo's translator and the cybernetic implants of Rocket's friends. The duck is an annoying character but for some reason he remains an ally, even though he himself doesn't seem happy to remain in the group. The protagonist gives orders and complains when they are not followed, blaming them.

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Gamerz_Sal

Chapter 80 marks the downfall of the novel for me... He goes to earth, somehow manages to sense natasha's plea for help from miles away, comes across guards that are righfully doing their job to apprehend an assassin(natasha) who killed their employer and then MC kills them, thats a sith tendency not a jedi or even so called grey jedi characteristics... This chapter was such a mindless forced plot by the author that am speechless, In the battle against hutts, he killed 100s of troops from hutt side which was made up of slave capturing troops, killing them was the work of a grey jedi... But in natasha's case, he killed the guards just because he could and took the side that was legally, morally and otherwise in any matter wrong, he would have not done that according to what MCs character setting had been emphasized till chapter 80, atleast he would have tried to use force to let the guards drop the issue and back off... I just lost interest reading anymore after that, MCs character break and forced plot of meeting Natasha, first time coming to earth broke any immersion into the novel and the logic flow that the novel was following before this... Right now the novel and its plot is obsolete to me, so dropping this novel at chapter 80. P.S.- Prior to chqpter 80, this novel was one of the best fanfic related to star wars and MCU, after chapter 80, it became just one of the many novels out there, just Meh!

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5mth
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JSirMixalotL

No idea how this story got such a high rating. It has the typical AI generated sentences that make it annoying to read over time. The MC is a joke (as of chapter 20) and has a weird split personality.

5mth
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ArifuretaForever

Author your books are good. Great plot and character development. Good writing with hardly any errors. It's why I love your works and why I'm glad you came back to webnovel. I can't wait to see where this one goes.

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9mth
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Rellik_Snoe

Another absolute banger from AlienWarlord.The authors ability to pace a story leaves every chapter feeling like another well placed facet in a grand gem.

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8mth
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EyeOfSilver

Had to drop due to the dark tag sorry I was not expecting a sad fanfic for star lord

13h
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BigRat_76

this book is just great I personally enjoy this story even though I did not expect the crossover into transformers I loved it

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22h
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Silas_Savitar_

MC: SI Peter Quill / Star Lord Rating: 10/10 Love: Natasha, Mikaela MC is set in an AU MCU, Star wars universe which is relatively well done. The story is very unique and creative. The time jumps are very good and the pacing of the story moves along well. Oh and the Transformers are there too

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4d
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leylin_slytherin

As of chapter 27 The character design in just cringe , but that's ok, but what i can't stand is BLOODY AI WRITING, seriously your previous book about voldy SI was so much better, I had high hopes , the plot line is good but cannot tolerate the AI WRITING, I regret not being able to give less that 1 start for Wiring Quality PS : If ai wiring stops or becomes more tolerable like not 5 adjectives every sentence , leave a reply , i'll continue reading this book

26d
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eroskun

Soul merging character stories are shit. Either be one or the other not both. That's just an excuse for being lazy and not wanting to think of a character unique personality so just use the original character's and give them the buff of knowledge. Perfect excuse: soul merging

1mth
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LongSongGolden

One of the best crossover (Star Wars, Marvel, Transformers, and more) novels I've read recently. it has some issues where there are just so many characters that they sometimes get forgotten about while the MC does his thing, but that's sorta how it goes unless you want to do different PoVs every single chapter. overall it's a really good novel. I wish there were even more chapters but the update stability is pretty solid.

1mth
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TuRead1
LV 13 Badge

It surprised me how good this book was. I thought it would be cliche from the summary, but it's actually got a good story. It has solid character growth, but I could do without the overpowered powers. I do like how it includes how he involves his team to accomplish what he got. I also loved how the author blended star wars with marvel content. solid book.[img=update]

2mth
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Jploui93

It's not in the tags, but it's harem. Literally with every female MC meets, they fall for him.

2mth
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Daoist669967

As far as I could see the narrative is too formal, it needs to be more fluid with words that are better understood by everyone, and the whole situation seems wrong to me, it is necessary to understand geopolitics and human relations in the contexts of the characters, which if you know the story well it is possible to have a good idea, I think that is not the case in this story, I honestly think that when it starts wrong as a consequence everything goes wrong, this is just my opinion but I think the author is to be congratulated for the attempt but he should try again in another story.

2mth
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pacul
LV 13

one of the most hypocritical and self righteous MC I've ever read, one moment he committed an atrocity, next he spouted some "no need to thank me" speech with a "I'm always right" smirk

2mth
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Justin_Ixcol

Pretty neat yeah❣️❤️ Transformers!!!! X Star Wars X Marvel!!!! I love the plot line with the all spark taking place of the cube. I hope we have similar situations that the author writes small colbas to fulfill the missing infinity stones. Also no stones in this fic😅 Overall I really enjoy this book so I suggest y’all sick to it!

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3mth
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QBL
LV 4 Badge

a lot of cringe stuff. ...............................................................................................................................

3mth
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Meta0202

shit.........shit.........shit............shit.............shit.........shit.............shit...........shit...........shit..........shit...........shit.............shit

3mth
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ChineseChung

Writing quality is good, so is the update stability and world background absolutely no complaints. The story development and character design make me want to slam a scooter into my shin. The MC is a morally flip flop of a character who decides when and where to show mercy and only goes out of his way to redeem people if they are named characters or female.

3mth
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DRAVIDIAN

This is a great fic, I’ve fully caught up in less than a week, which I’m cursing my past self for now haha. Great writing, little to no errors and the plot progression has been great, but if I have to nitpick, I do have one small gripe. Sometimes characters (esp the girls) can act out of character to the MC, which I think takes away from the story more than it makes Quill seem “cool”, a prime example is how Romanoff acted towards him, it didn’t feel at all like how a trained spy would. Other than that small issue, the story has been great :)

3mth
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DaoistHeartAttack

This has been a disappointing novel compared to the authors other novels second only to the voldemort one. . . . .. .. ... . . .

3mth
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Lizrock

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3mth
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XP_HAVOK

this novel isn't bad except 2 glaring issues. 1 every female character is weak willed woman who after he helps them immediately becomes a blushing mess that has fallen in love with him. the 2nd my biggest thing I don't like with the character having the mind of a 40 year old man has seduced mostly minors like 90% minors the youngest being probably 7 and while he says he likes older characters every single chance he has gotten he turns them down but doesn't to the minor characters and even flirts with them with each having nearly the same personality.

3mth
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GupGodLicker

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Flame_Slasher

The author is just writing for the sake of writing.. Just forcing the story.

4mth
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Ole_Tessmann

It’s a really good fanfic. The writing is superb, there is a clear storyline and the characters are fleshed out and don’t feel artificial at all. The main characters actions are relatable and I especially like that he’s not all light or dark, but a healthy mix of both. The only somewhat negative thing I can say is that it’s a mash up of many different verses, just one or two chapters ago transformers were introduced as well. There is Star Wars, Marvel, x-men and now transformers. It’s not inherently bad but I imagine the writing can become complicated with so many things going on all at once. A lot of the chapters now have been focused on earth which is understandable especially since he’s been looking for it before since it’s his home planet, but especially Star Wars has such a large universe that it’d be sad to be hyper focused on earth in the long run, since marvel, x-men and transformers are mostly centered around earth

4mth
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bearburrable

I haven't read this yet but I know it's gonna be fire, but at the same time I don't want to read it since I don't know much about the Star Wars series and its plot.

4mth
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Gawd
LV 15 Badge

at chapter 4, the story is good, but I am not sure of the decision to merge SW and Marvel. it would have been much better imho to have had Reformed Anakin transmigrated to Quill. Ani's love of tech would make him an inventor on parwith Stark and his Jedi training could allow him to fully excavate quill's potential as a half celestial. other than that GJ.

4mth
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Lolita_Dragonit

The hero has character problems... at one moment he is a "Hero" at another he kills the military who were working to catch the criminal... because one of the Marvel heroes beat the black widow

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Alexxz

Está también es una gran novela jaja, la de esta novela también la hice con un estilo parecido a la que puse en la reseña de "I'am Spider-Man" ojalá te guste, sigue con el buen trabajo hermano[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]

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Dregon3650

me gusta ya que no había visto nada que me interesará Si buscas una aventura espacial llena de acción, humor irreverente y un protagonista carismático, "Soy Star-Lord" es la elección perfecta. Esta serie de s te sumerge en la vida de Peter Quill, un humano convertido en forajido espacial que lidera a los Guardianes de la Galaxia.

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PUERKO_Senpai

(Chapter 74) The plot is getting more and more strange. The protagonist goes from not being very good with a technique to being able to use it to destroy an army of drones and all the technology in a kilometer radius, except for Cosmo's translator and the cybernetic implants of Rocket's friends. The duck is an annoying character but for some reason he remains an ally, even though he himself doesn't seem happy to remain in the group. The protagonist gives orders and complains when they are not followed, blaming them.

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Gamerz_Sal

Chapter 80 marks the downfall of the novel for me... He goes to earth, somehow manages to sense natasha's plea for help from miles away, comes across guards that are righfully doing their job to apprehend an assassin(natasha) who killed their employer and then MC kills them, thats a sith tendency not a jedi or even so called grey jedi characteristics... This chapter was such a mindless forced plot by the author that am speechless, In the battle against hutts, he killed 100s of troops from hutt side which was made up of slave capturing troops, killing them was the work of a grey jedi... But in natasha's case, he killed the guards just because he could and took the side that was legally, morally and otherwise in any matter wrong, he would have not done that according to what MCs character setting had been emphasized till chapter 80, atleast he would have tried to use force to let the guards drop the issue and back off... I just lost interest reading anymore after that, MCs character break and forced plot of meeting Natasha, first time coming to earth broke any immersion into the novel and the logic flow that the novel was following before this... Right now the novel and its plot is obsolete to me, so dropping this novel at chapter 80. P.S.- Prior to chqpter 80, this novel was one of the best fanfic related to star wars and MCU, after chapter 80, it became just one of the many novels out there, just Meh!

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JSirMixalotL

No idea how this story got such a high rating. It has the typical AI generated sentences that make it annoying to read over time. The MC is a joke (as of chapter 20) and has a weird split personality.

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