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Story is excellent I love reading it, however there are a decent amount of spelling and grammar mistakes but it is not so bad that it is story breaking. Most are minor and my brain automatically corrects it while reading but the grammar could definitely be better. All in all amazing novel and great read :)
the mc and side characters are well fleshed out the diffrent povs for other rulers or important side characters are my only dislike since I want more on how Alpheo will grow.If you enjoy an overall broader perspective of the world building happening through other important semi main characters povs you'll enjoy it a lot.the way they describe warfare is realistic and unique honestly peak beginning the developments currently are great 8/10 if we go by an unbiased opinion 10/10 since its been a long time since I've seen a novel in this genre be depicted with the mc actually doing what rulers would do etc instead of going pokemon catching for the women and turning it more into a harem story.
The story is enjoyable to read hope you continue on this beautiful book but please post the map or the chapter that’s hidden in. Great work keep it up.
It's like Game of Thrones and it's terrible... Terribly delicious! The book is great and the author of soldering stars thanks for it!-----------------------------------------------------------------
The story has potential, but the beginning "world building" chapters are almost unintelligible. The story keeps jumping to different characters and it ends up completely ruined due to that.
fantastic story with realistic world building and history, the most captivating part of the story is the well thought-out plot as through the multiple POV's we get a layered story of different factions and intrigue. Hope this story gets its recognition and support it deserves, good luck Author.
Pretty good so far can tell there’s some got inspiration. Only critic is the grammar but other than that a very good read. ———-////——-
I really like the novel! The rich detail and engaging storyline are amazing, and the character development is top-notch. I really hope the author doesn't drop this novel because I'm just getting hooked and I can't wait to see where the story goes next. The world you've created is fascinating, and I'm eager to keep reading and exploring more of it. The only downside is the update frequency. Keep up the awesome work![img=recommend]
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You are building the world background quite nicely. And I love how you are clear about the personality of the characters. And how you progress the story with a clear goal in mind
overall is good but gonna stock more chapter to read this again anyway keep it up and goodluck
Hey guys, shameless author is here! This is my last work , which I hope it will go well. The starting chapters will be about defining the worl-building of the novel, also the work will follow many stories even though the main one will be of the mc. I hope that you will like it , as I believe it will be my best one
If you are a kid then this is not for you. A very good novel with expressive writing. A quality work 👏👏👏 unlike most novels found here.
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Story is excellent I love reading it, however there are a decent amount of spelling and grammar mistakes but it is not so bad that it is story breaking. Most are minor and my brain automatically corrects it while reading but the grammar could definitely be better. All in all amazing novel and great read :)
the mc and side characters are well fleshed out the diffrent povs for other rulers or important side characters are my only dislike since I want more on how Alpheo will grow.If you enjoy an overall broader perspective of the world building happening through other important semi main characters povs you'll enjoy it a lot.the way they describe warfare is realistic and unique honestly peak beginning the developments currently are great 8/10 if we go by an unbiased opinion 10/10 since its been a long time since I've seen a novel in this genre be depicted with the mc actually doing what rulers would do etc instead of going pokemon catching for the women and turning it more into a harem story.
The story is enjoyable to read hope you continue on this beautiful book but please post the map or the chapter that’s hidden in. Great work keep it up.
It's like Game of Thrones and it's terrible... Terribly delicious! The book is great and the author of soldering stars thanks for it!-----------------------------------------------------------------
The story has potential, but the beginning "world building" chapters are almost unintelligible. The story keeps jumping to different characters and it ends up completely ruined due to that.
fantastic story with realistic world building and history, the most captivating part of the story is the well thought-out plot as through the multiple POV's we get a layered story of different factions and intrigue. Hope this story gets its recognition and support it deserves, good luck Author.
Pretty good so far can tell there’s some got inspiration. Only critic is the grammar but other than that a very good read. ———-////——-
I really like the novel! The rich detail and engaging storyline are amazing, and the character development is top-notch. I really hope the author doesn't drop this novel because I'm just getting hooked and I can't wait to see where the story goes next. The world you've created is fascinating, and I'm eager to keep reading and exploring more of it. The only downside is the update frequency. Keep up the awesome work![img=recommend]
Really Great Nobel More Charters please [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
You are building the world background quite nicely. And I love how you are clear about the personality of the characters. And how you progress the story with a clear goal in mind
overall is good but gonna stock more chapter to read this again anyway keep it up and goodluck
Hey guys, shameless author is here! This is my last work , which I hope it will go well. The starting chapters will be about defining the worl-building of the novel, also the work will follow many stories even though the main one will be of the mc. I hope that you will like it , as I believe it will be my best one
If you are a kid then this is not for you. A very good novel with expressive writing. A quality work 👏👏👏 unlike most novels found here.