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I found myself reborn in Naruto as Hinoka Hyuga, the older non-identical twin sister of Hinata Hyuga.
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So it has a a lot of plot holes... So read at your own risk but I'll try to improve! So if you have anything you have to say on how I can improve it, then please let me know! (having a writers block so may not update for a while).

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UnknownMonkey

I don't usually write a review for fanfics but I have to write one with this fanfic to warn you people not to read this or they will experience brain rot. I will be completely honest with you this story is not well written and has many plot holes first the timeline does not make sense the Uchiha massacre should have happened when the MC was seven but it didn't Mc hasn't even entered the academy yet. Second, she's on team seven now that wouldn't be a problem if the team excluded someone from the og team seven but no the author decided to put MC on a four-man team with Naruto Sasuke, and Sakura. The worst part about this is that it could be completely avoided by giving Mc a private teacher that could have been a Huyga. I known its some authors might not want to create an oc but the author could have gotten Mc a private teacher that isn't an oc an example is Anko but no we got mc on a four man. The last problem with this story is that it feels like the author did not research anything about Naruto.

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Meeks
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Hinoka feels so detached from the story, like everything is easy. Bam bam bam, she feels just like a sideliner. There is no emotion to thiss

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HotWetDream

no plot to the story no original ideas you can do better

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Left_Nut_Of_Madara

For me this is more of a fantasy than a story so its just not my thing but grammer is kinda ok so its readable at least[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Arc_Dragon

I won't badmputh this even If I don't like the work .You clearly need to research more about Naruto or Just watch it or read it .I mean yes you said there will be plot holes but there are many things that you skipped over and if you want to do AU thing be my guest its not a bad idea but there are somethings that feels like nonsence even if we think from Naruto Anime Prospective.Also take inspirations from other stories not just make it lazy writing like putting MC on team 7 because they found no idea .Its bad The problem is in your knowledge and execution otherwise this could have been fantastic fanfic .Even from wish fullfilment point of view this story feels weird and just no offence There IS NO STORY NO DIRECTION

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Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Your alive 1 months ago

Âm lượng 1 : Naruto

  1. 1
    Chapter 1: Reborn 9 months ago
  2. 2
    Chapter 2: Making a new friend 9 months ago
  3. 3
    Chapter 3: Neji Hyuga 9 months ago
  4. 4
    Chapter 4: Sasuke Uchiha 9 months ago
  5. 5
    Chapter 5: Academy 9 months ago
  6. 6
    Chapter 6: Team 7 9 months ago
  7. 7
    Chapter 7: C rank mission 9 months ago
  8. 8
    Chapter 8: Zabuza 9 months ago
  9. 9
    Chapter 9: Masked man 9 months ago
  10. 10
    Chapter 10: Chakra control 9 months ago
  11. 11
    Chapter 11: Haku 9 months ago
  12. 12
    Chapter 12: End of the mission 9 months ago
  13. 13
    Chapter 13: Gaara of the desert 9 months ago
  14. 14
    Chapter 14: Sakura's prince charming 9 months ago
  15. 15
    Chapter 15: Kabuto Yakushi 9 months ago
  16. 16
    Chapter 16: First phase of the Chunin exam 8 months ago
  17. 17
    Chapter 17: Second Exam 8 months ago
  18. 18
    Chapter 18: Reaching the tower 8 months ago
  19. 19
    Chapter 19: Second exam complete 8 months ago
  20. 20
    Chapter 20: Yoroi Akado Vs Sasuke Uchiha 8 months ago
  21. 21
    Chapter 21: Hinoka Hyuga Vs Kankuro 8 months ago
  22. 22
    Chapter 22: Sealing 8 months ago
  23. 23
    Chapter 23: Naruto vs Neji 8 months ago
  24. 24
    Chapter 24: Shino vs Temari 8 months ago
  25. 25
    Chapter 25: Sasuke Uchiha vs Gaara 8 months ago
  26. 26
    Chapter 26: Going after Sasuke 7 months ago
  27. 27
    Chapter 27: Fighting Gaara 7 months ago
  28. 28
    Chapter 28: Anbu 7 months ago
  29. 29
    Chapter 29: Leaving the village 7 months ago
  30. 30
    Chapter 30: Old lady 7 months ago
  31. 31
    Chapter 31: Summoning 7 months ago
  32. 32
    Chapter 32: Learning the Mizushō 7 months ago
  33. 33
    chapter 33: One of the legendary sannin 7 months ago
  34. 34
    Chapter 34: New eyes 6 months ago
  35. 35
    Chapter 35: Catching up 5 months ago
  36. 36
    Chapter 36: Itachi and Hinoka 4 months ago

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