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Viết đánh giáthe fic is jumping on the line of good and bad. for a moment its the best and then its worse than chinese ones. but i will give 5 stars as till now, it has nothing too outrageous
The Author was butthurt because I gave him 2 stars, and it makes me feel bad, so now I give him 5 stars to make him happy and stop throwing a tantrum.
Oh, it’s a masterpiece of cringe, a Harry Potter fanfiction featuring a “Chinese young master” as the protagonist because who wouldn’t want that? But hey, at least the author managed to write something. Truly an accomplishment!
I've only read a few chapters out of this dumpster fire of a fan fiction and in all honesty it sucks, the main character acts like a cringe Chinese young master and the story is all over the place one second the character is talking the next second some cringe drama and then immediately after that it goes back to talking again like make it make sense. so the story sucks because it has no real substance
I wonder why Harry Potter fanfics keep integrating things like "Rituals are all good and because I'm the MC, there are no side effects.", "Wow, I'm in Slytherin and this isn't a school, but the pureblood summer garden." and "Wow, look over there, he's the heir to the oldest and most noble house of the Oompalumpas!"... sometimes I wonder if JK wrote a different version of Harry Potter with ideas from Asoiaf and FMA, can someone tell me where to find it.
Это было очень интересно прочесть. Очень необычный формат этой работы заставил по другому взглянуть на привычный мир ГП. Лично мне хотелось бы немного снизить темп и добавить подробностей, но как известно - всем не угодить. Спасибо за такую замечательную книгу и успехов в дальнейшей работе.
it was good and all but the mc is becoming more unlikable with his tendencies to be a Gary stu he is the typical idiot with plot armour who thinks himself the smartest guy yet he isn't
Cringe yelling and cursing for no reason. Also MC takes over snape. So really in a Snape story. This could have been done so much better the premise is good but the plot is blah.
Not my type of reading, very unnecessarily aggressive towards the world and not very respectful, plus the background is the typical HP story of a guy who only hits everyone, if you like it you can read it perfectly.
Think of a mix between Deadpool, and The Joker. That is what the transmigrated soul, fused with Severus Snape, has become. Subtract the fourth wall breaking, and the desire to force his “one true love” into killing himself, you are left with a comedic, violent, very violent, and crazy person that makes you wonder if he is actually sane, and it’s the world that is crazy. Funny story, would probably have a 5 star review if Author had held back by 10% but it is still a fun read.
The writing style is a change from what I've seen in other fics by how the dialogue between the mc and the others. We discover how the world is build bit by bit by seeing how the author introduce 2 or 3 worlds mix with potterverse.
For me this fanfic is one of the best on this plataform, I really love what you made with Severus, and the humor is the top, good job author!
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The story is engaging and the world building is amazing hope the author continues with the story
Pure genius, the shear amount of average awesome put into this it brings a tear to my eye( only the left one)
its a bashing novel. for those fortunate enough not to know what that means. its a novel written by disgruntled 14 year old girls that go out of their way to write thousands of words bashing the characters they dislike, often posted to wattpad/fanfic net.
Its a pretty good story with some interesting plot points................. . .......................................... ..............
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I love the novel it’s funny, have nice concept and you could get nice laugh. It good read the novel.
Had a good start, but it's starting to get too clumsy with the Twilight, gods addition. It was quite enjoyable when the story was just limited to HP world.
I liked the story, the only bad thing is the number of chapters and the delay to be released. ...............................................
I don’t know he’s to violent and to the point of it getting very annoying. This makes the whole story kinda boring and unserious I mean if your going to use violence on everything and ever what’s the point of a story.
the fic is jumping on the line of good and bad. for a moment its the best and then its worse than chinese ones. but i will give 5 stars as till now, it has nothing too outrageous
The Author was butthurt because I gave him 2 stars, and it makes me feel bad, so now I give him 5 stars to make him happy and stop throwing a tantrum.
Oh, it’s a masterpiece of cringe, a Harry Potter fanfiction featuring a “Chinese young master” as the protagonist because who wouldn’t want that? But hey, at least the author managed to write something. Truly an accomplishment!
I've only read a few chapters out of this dumpster fire of a fan fiction and in all honesty it sucks, the main character acts like a cringe Chinese young master and the story is all over the place one second the character is talking the next second some cringe drama and then immediately after that it goes back to talking again like make it make sense. so the story sucks because it has no real substance
I wonder why Harry Potter fanfics keep integrating things like "Rituals are all good and because I'm the MC, there are no side effects.", "Wow, I'm in Slytherin and this isn't a school, but the pureblood summer garden." and "Wow, look over there, he's the heir to the oldest and most noble house of the Oompalumpas!"... sometimes I wonder if JK wrote a different version of Harry Potter with ideas from Asoiaf and FMA, can someone tell me where to find it.
Это было очень интересно прочесть. Очень необычный формат этой работы заставил по другому взглянуть на привычный мир ГП. Лично мне хотелось бы немного снизить темп и добавить подробностей, но как известно - всем не угодить. Спасибо за такую замечательную книгу и успехов в дальнейшей работе.
it was good and all but the mc is becoming more unlikable with his tendencies to be a Gary stu he is the typical idiot with plot armour who thinks himself the smartest guy yet he isn't
Cringe yelling and cursing for no reason. Also MC takes over snape. So really in a Snape story. This could have been done so much better the premise is good but the plot is blah.
Not my type of reading, very unnecessarily aggressive towards the world and not very respectful, plus the background is the typical HP story of a guy who only hits everyone, if you like it you can read it perfectly.
Think of a mix between Deadpool, and The Joker. That is what the transmigrated soul, fused with Severus Snape, has become. Subtract the fourth wall breaking, and the desire to force his “one true love” into killing himself, you are left with a comedic, violent, very violent, and crazy person that makes you wonder if he is actually sane, and it’s the world that is crazy. Funny story, would probably have a 5 star review if Author had held back by 10% but it is still a fun read.
The writing style is a change from what I've seen in other fics by how the dialogue between the mc and the others. We discover how the world is build bit by bit by seeing how the author introduce 2 or 3 worlds mix with potterverse.
For me this fanfic is one of the best on this plataform, I really love what you made with Severus, and the humor is the top, good job author!
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The story is engaging and the world building is amazing hope the author continues with the story
Pure genius, the shear amount of average awesome put into this it brings a tear to my eye( only the left one)
its a bashing novel. for those fortunate enough not to know what that means. its a novel written by disgruntled 14 year old girls that go out of their way to write thousands of words bashing the characters they dislike, often posted to wattpad/fanfic net.
Its a pretty good story with some interesting plot points................. . .......................................... ..............
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I love the novel it’s funny, have nice concept and you could get nice laugh. It good read the novel.
Had a good start, but it's starting to get too clumsy with the Twilight, gods addition. It was quite enjoyable when the story was just limited to HP world.
I liked the story, the only bad thing is the number of chapters and the delay to be released. ...............................................
I don’t know he’s to violent and to the point of it getting very annoying. This makes the whole story kinda boring and unserious I mean if your going to use violence on everything and ever what’s the point of a story.
Great start from the 4 chapters I read, I hope the author continues with the story.