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Viết đánh giádidn't like how ordinary level is just a level below gym level pokemon it feels like it kinda makes gym just above average prestige that many people could achieve easily and please don't say something like only 10% can achieve this but 10% is still a huge number of the total pokemon trainer. Also he achieve things to easily became boring to quickly for me to much things given to him early on system and being born rich.
Besides not having a synopsis, the pokemon battles are kinda boring and barely described. The trainers just shout out moves and author foesn’t really bother to expand on what the pokemon do with the commands. It’s literally just ”XXX use [move]!” And ”XXX avoid it!”. Story idea is good but the execution falls abit flat. Try to make the foghts more entertaining and grant the readers more of a description of events taking place.
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The story is quite interesting to read. But I would prefer if author could add little more interactions b/w their pokemons. else everything is all good to go
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I like it. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It's honestly a pretty interesting read. Just your nice Pokemon isekai adventure with the cast of the anime. I don't like the cliffhanger-like ends but it's still good.
Tiết lộ SpoilerBefore I start reading, I need to know something very important, who is the love interest? ..............................................................................................................................
didn't like how ordinary level is just a level below gym level pokemon it feels like it kinda makes gym just above average prestige that many people could achieve easily and please don't say something like only 10% can achieve this but 10% is still a huge number of the total pokemon trainer. Also he achieve things to easily became boring to quickly for me to much things given to him early on system and being born rich.
Besides not having a synopsis, the pokemon battles are kinda boring and barely described. The trainers just shout out moves and author foesn’t really bother to expand on what the pokemon do with the commands. It’s literally just ”XXX use [move]!” And ”XXX avoid it!”. Story idea is good but the execution falls abit flat. Try to make the foghts more entertaining and grant the readers more of a description of events taking place.
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The story is quite interesting to read. But I would prefer if author could add little more interactions b/w their pokemons. else everything is all good to go
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I like it. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It's honestly a pretty interesting read. Just your nice Pokemon isekai adventure with the cast of the anime. I don't like the cliffhanger-like ends but it's still good.
Tiết lộ Spoiler
Before I start reading, I need to know something very important, who is the love interest? ..............................................................................................................................