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Malyna_Kamina

Well I schould probably start I was inkompetent back then and am now rewriting this Review I do not really know if I can say anything as I have only read about 10 chapters but I really just wabt to share my opinion. So the first around 3 chapters were pretty good where his backstory was explained it mad sense and really hit me from the start on out. But from the time on where he comes into the school it just gets really weird with all of These characters and he is already being bullied from the first day the reasons are reasonable I guess but then his friend.. He seems so unnotiable to the point where I cant even remembeer his name and did we meet this secpnd male lead yet? The characterroles werent that speciefied but exept for that and the kinda confusing Storyline its a pretty okay book.

1mth
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DJReader1999

congratulations for winning WSA 2024. You deserve it 👏🏼👏🏼🎊🎉🫶🏼

2mth
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Favy_bae

Am empty on the inside 😞😞😞please author when are you gonna release 280😞 This novel kept pulling me in😘😩 now I can’t go a day without reading it🥹

2mth
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Taekooktk007

wow just wow 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜, I have now words🎀😍

3mth
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Amaeshi_Princess_G

It's amazing, you all should really try this book

3mth
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Deana_Danzine

i like what i've read so far ............

3mth
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brandon_macobs

I’ve read this several times that’s how I adore it ! Blaze is one sexy Alpha!!

4mth
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Mimita24

I love this book I guess english isnt the writer's first language, might need a bit of editing but the story is excellent I'm loving it so much the author is talented, I'm reading another book of hers too (Rory's) , than k you for resuming it by the way .. we want more of hot Blaze&Bunny moments please..

4mth
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Dead_Full_LOL_666

This novel is ok, not too bad of a story, a little cliche in some instances (Nothing wrong with that!). The MC is sorta not the brightest in the world, I mean you can kinda get that from the prompt of the novel and if you like that kind of MC that's fine for you. Spoiler Alert- this novel's MC is intersex for those who like this kind of BL, if not then this story is not for you! (Or it could be, if you would like to give it a try) I will say it doesn't come up much except maybe 2-3 times so far that I've seen and its only when some explicit stuff is going down. Right now the story isn't really picking up on plot for me, it's mostly on character building still, with very slow progress on plot. For me the world background just isn't there at all. You get a few glimpses of it every once and a while but its not a big thing in this story. The writing is ok, only a few mispells here and there but nothing you would be confused about. Overall its an ok story that leaves you in angst, waiting to see whats going to happen and why the MC is put in the situation he finds himself in. I would recommend it 6/10

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7mth
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AmandaMadden

Jules is an adorable mess. I just want to hug him.

7mth
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jongseong_99

are you sure there's no harem or love triangle author? I hope those trope🥺😶‍🌫️

7mth
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hongguiwang

This book is GOOD. This is the first non-published light novel I've read. I had some doubts in the first 20 chapters, as the MC has some flaws, as well as not being educated in the slightest on some very important things, but I kept on because it really had very promising attributes. Grammer/first person can be a bit off at times, but it's nothing that causes a disruption in the reading flow. I selected this book for the bl tag and was slightly disappointed when my expectations didn't seem filled, but the author knows what their doing, and I'm glad I trusted the process. Holy hell. Seriously, fantastic writing. Thank you. I need more.

8mth
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Abigail_Don

l really like story it's really interesting

8mth
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MsFrothyDreamer

I spent the whole day reading all the published chapters, and I must say, it's absolutely amazing! 😍 The pacing is perfect, keeping me hooked from start to finish. The plot is engaging and well thought out, with twists that kept me on the edge of my seat. The characters are wonderfully developed, Jules and Blaze, in particular, have stolen my heart. ❤️ The writing is top-notch, and the world-building is immersive and vivid. I love everything about it! 🎉 Congratulations on such a fantastic piece of work, my dear! 💖 I can't wait to read more!

8mth
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Rydiah
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Y'all....ITS SOOOO GOOOOD! Each chapter has me on the edge of my seat in anticipation and anxiety. Blaze is just walking sin 🤤 and I've adopted a lot of characters as my children but Baby Jules is one of my faves 🤧🥰

8mth
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crustymustyfeet

honestly i really love this. first of all, author updates literally everyday, with a few exceptions (not complaining, i think thats amazing already) love the story, wish Jules could stick up for himself more but tbh i would literally be him if i were in that situation. its very well written and i have no complains whatsoever! thanks for the wonderful story author!

9mth
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FallenAngel09

Love it!!! I have read 53ch the latest ch I think. I reccomend to read it.

9mth
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Mrs_TNT
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It's a bit long, but my honest thoughts. 😁 It's currently still early in this novels development as of Friday, April 12th, 2024 (Why do we Americans write it this way? The more I interact with others from around the world the more I agree we are the ones that make it more difficult but going Month, Day, Year instead of going Day, Month, Year or Year, Month, Day... 😅🤣😂) However, what is written so far has been really good. There are very few mistakes and weather. This author is a true amateur or a seasoned published author with an editor she's still human and is bound to make mistakes, so absolutely zero judgment here, just stating facts. With that said I think some areas I would prefer to have a bit more info on are simply just not addressed yet because the author plans to address or explain it through the story development that will be coming, so I am tey to be patient. I am still a bit skeptical about the ML but I definitely get the feeling there is a Hella lot more to him that what he shows to everyone plus I am not sure if it's all truly him, if you get what I am saying. I will continue to update my review on this novel. As of right now, I do recommend this to others, but be aware it will not be a light-hearted lovely and pure romance but a drama filled one that will take you on a rollercoaster but in a good way! 🎢 No spoilers here. Honestly, the chapters are free for a very good 60+ chapters (I think it's now 70+, but I can't remember exactly, so I am being cautious) are free so other then your time you have nothing to risk to at least try reading this wonderful novel & seeing if it's for you or not. Great job to the author & I can not wait for more updates! 👏👏👏👏👏🫶

10mth
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Soso100
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10mth
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Josiexoxo

Okayy! So far into the story, everything is building gradually and I’m thoroughly enjoying it. I’m very curious about Blaze and I’m certain there’s way more to him than what meets the eyes. I seriously can’t wait to get to the part where he and Jules would get down and nasty LOL 😛🤭 I’m certain other readers would agree with me. Good job author and please keep updating frequently 🥰

10mth
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Solane_4218

Every character is intriguing. They’re created in a way that you can’t just help but want to know more and more about them. So far, my fave is the protagonist and his new best friends Taylor and Josh. Of course, I’m curious about Nick and I have a feeling that he’s gonna be a great person. I also can’t wait to see pre of Blaze!!! 😆😆❤️

10mth
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Amber_Roses

I seriously can’t wait for Jules to rise to his full potential, because so far, i can feel that there’s a whole lot more to him. I feel sorry for him cause he went through an intense trauma in a single night. I can’t imagine how much pain he finds himself in whenever he thinks of those memories. This is a very beautiful story and I need more from him and Blaze. 💋

10mth
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Ariana_Dollars

There’s a lot of mysteries in this book, no one is an open slate, and that’s what I really find fascinating. I genuinely can’t wait to read more. So far, every chapter is perfect and the fact that no part of the story is dragged out is what’s keeping me hooked. It’s like something is always happening in every chapter and that’s literally how it should be. Keep up the good work, author ❤️

11mth
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Gorgeous_Aliyah

To be honest, the only negative thing I have to say about this book is the fact that we can’t get more than one chapter at once, but I guess that’s because the story is still free. I’m hoping that once it goes premium, we’ll be getting a lot of privilege chapters because I always want more and more of this book! That’s how obsessed I am 😔

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11mth
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EmeraldOsaro

This book is great so far, I really appreciate the way the author narrate every single details about this book and the diction is quite simple and easy to understand 😌. My only complaint is the SUSPENSE 😁😁but what a good novel without a suspense lol. I can wait for the journey between Blaze and Jules to unfold like I CAN’T WAIT 😩anyways I’m hooked and thanks author for this wonderful piece

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11mth
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Maryham_Raymond

I'm hooked the characters especially my baby 🤭❤️ I really can't wait for his interaction with blaze and Taylor is definitely interesting 🤣🤣 and the roommate ( I really don't want to remember his name) you can't just be going up n down blaming people for his situation 😒 and my baby's mom friend am so grateful for him too at least my baby has a listening hear overall am in love with the story line

11mth
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Ankoku_Kyo

Each chapter leaves you thirsty and hungry for more and more! This is really crazy to be honest. I’m just ten chapters in and I’m fully HOOKED. Like, I literally cannot wait for the updates cause they’re always so freaking good. Love this book so much and I hope we get quicker updates 🥰🥰

11mth
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Faruuq_Ipaye

Oh my gosh! Where do I even start??!! 😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ First of all, Jules is such a baby and I wanna pick him up and keep him safe in my pockets ahhhhh!!! I love the plot so far, the storyline sounds like it’s gonna be really insane and I really can’t wait to read more.

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11mth
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Bree_Airee

Hi everyone! :)) 🎀 I figured I should leave a review since we’re ten chapters in. This is a boy love [b x b] and I believe you’ve gone over the warning I left at the bottom of the book lol! This isn’t a typical cliché high school romance book, this is way darker and once again, I want to urge everyone to brace themselves as they proceed with this book! General warning: Blaze isn’t an angel LOL! Frankly, he is a monster, but an insanely hot one though.😔 And as for Jules, he’s just a baby who needs protecting from everyone, including himself teehee. 🤭 I don’t wanna spoil this book so I’m being as vague as possible. If you have any questions, don’t hesitate to ask away! A happy ending is very guaranteed as well, so fret not! :) Happy reading! xx 🎀✨

11mth
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Malyna_Kamina

Well I schould probably start I was inkompetent back then and am now rewriting this Review I do not really know if I can say anything as I have only read about 10 chapters but I really just wabt to share my opinion. So the first around 3 chapters were pretty good where his backstory was explained it mad sense and really hit me from the start on out. But from the time on where he comes into the school it just gets really weird with all of These characters and he is already being bullied from the first day the reasons are reasonable I guess but then his friend.. He seems so unnotiable to the point where I cant even remembeer his name and did we meet this secpnd male lead yet? The characterroles werent that speciefied but exept for that and the kinda confusing Storyline its a pretty okay book.

1mth
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DJReader1999

congratulations for winning WSA 2024. You deserve it 👏🏼👏🏼🎊🎉🫶🏼

2mth
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Favy_bae

Am empty on the inside 😞😞😞please author when are you gonna release 280😞 This novel kept pulling me in😘😩 now I can’t go a day without reading it🥹

2mth
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Taekooktk007

wow just wow 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜, I have now words🎀😍

3mth
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Amaeshi_Princess_G

It's amazing, you all should really try this book

3mth
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Deana_Danzine

i like what i've read so far ............

3mth
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brandon_macobs

I’ve read this several times that’s how I adore it ! Blaze is one sexy Alpha!!

4mth
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Mimita24

I love this book I guess english isnt the writer's first language, might need a bit of editing but the story is excellent I'm loving it so much the author is talented, I'm reading another book of hers too (Rory's) , than k you for resuming it by the way .. we want more of hot Blaze&Bunny moments please..

4mth
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Dead_Full_LOL_666

This novel is ok, not too bad of a story, a little cliche in some instances (Nothing wrong with that!). The MC is sorta not the brightest in the world, I mean you can kinda get that from the prompt of the novel and if you like that kind of MC that's fine for you. Spoiler Alert- this novel's MC is intersex for those who like this kind of BL, if not then this story is not for you! (Or it could be, if you would like to give it a try) I will say it doesn't come up much except maybe 2-3 times so far that I've seen and its only when some explicit stuff is going down. Right now the story isn't really picking up on plot for me, it's mostly on character building still, with very slow progress on plot. For me the world background just isn't there at all. You get a few glimpses of it every once and a while but its not a big thing in this story. The writing is ok, only a few mispells here and there but nothing you would be confused about. Overall its an ok story that leaves you in angst, waiting to see whats going to happen and why the MC is put in the situation he finds himself in. I would recommend it 6/10

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7mth
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AmandaMadden

Jules is an adorable mess. I just want to hug him.

7mth
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jongseong_99

are you sure there's no harem or love triangle author? I hope those trope🥺😶‍🌫️

7mth
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hongguiwang

This book is GOOD. This is the first non-published light novel I've read. I had some doubts in the first 20 chapters, as the MC has some flaws, as well as not being educated in the slightest on some very important things, but I kept on because it really had very promising attributes. Grammer/first person can be a bit off at times, but it's nothing that causes a disruption in the reading flow. I selected this book for the bl tag and was slightly disappointed when my expectations didn't seem filled, but the author knows what their doing, and I'm glad I trusted the process. Holy hell. Seriously, fantastic writing. Thank you. I need more.

8mth
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Abigail_Don

l really like story it's really interesting

8mth
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MsFrothyDreamer

I spent the whole day reading all the published chapters, and I must say, it's absolutely amazing! 😍 The pacing is perfect, keeping me hooked from start to finish. The plot is engaging and well thought out, with twists that kept me on the edge of my seat. The characters are wonderfully developed, Jules and Blaze, in particular, have stolen my heart. ❤️ The writing is top-notch, and the world-building is immersive and vivid. I love everything about it! 🎉 Congratulations on such a fantastic piece of work, my dear! 💖 I can't wait to read more!

8mth
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Rydiah
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Y'all....ITS SOOOO GOOOOD! Each chapter has me on the edge of my seat in anticipation and anxiety. Blaze is just walking sin 🤤 and I've adopted a lot of characters as my children but Baby Jules is one of my faves 🤧🥰

8mth
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crustymustyfeet

honestly i really love this. first of all, author updates literally everyday, with a few exceptions (not complaining, i think thats amazing already) love the story, wish Jules could stick up for himself more but tbh i would literally be him if i were in that situation. its very well written and i have no complains whatsoever! thanks for the wonderful story author!

9mth
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FallenAngel09

Love it!!! I have read 53ch the latest ch I think. I reccomend to read it.

9mth
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Mrs_TNT
LV 15 Badge

It's a bit long, but my honest thoughts. 😁 It's currently still early in this novels development as of Friday, April 12th, 2024 (Why do we Americans write it this way? The more I interact with others from around the world the more I agree we are the ones that make it more difficult but going Month, Day, Year instead of going Day, Month, Year or Year, Month, Day... 😅🤣😂) However, what is written so far has been really good. There are very few mistakes and weather. This author is a true amateur or a seasoned published author with an editor she's still human and is bound to make mistakes, so absolutely zero judgment here, just stating facts. With that said I think some areas I would prefer to have a bit more info on are simply just not addressed yet because the author plans to address or explain it through the story development that will be coming, so I am tey to be patient. I am still a bit skeptical about the ML but I definitely get the feeling there is a Hella lot more to him that what he shows to everyone plus I am not sure if it's all truly him, if you get what I am saying. I will continue to update my review on this novel. As of right now, I do recommend this to others, but be aware it will not be a light-hearted lovely and pure romance but a drama filled one that will take you on a rollercoaster but in a good way! 🎢 No spoilers here. Honestly, the chapters are free for a very good 60+ chapters (I think it's now 70+, but I can't remember exactly, so I am being cautious) are free so other then your time you have nothing to risk to at least try reading this wonderful novel & seeing if it's for you or not. Great job to the author & I can not wait for more updates! 👏👏👏👏👏🫶

10mth
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Soso100
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10mth
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Josiexoxo

Okayy! So far into the story, everything is building gradually and I’m thoroughly enjoying it. I’m very curious about Blaze and I’m certain there’s way more to him than what meets the eyes. I seriously can’t wait to get to the part where he and Jules would get down and nasty LOL 😛🤭 I’m certain other readers would agree with me. Good job author and please keep updating frequently 🥰

10mth
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Solane_4218

Every character is intriguing. They’re created in a way that you can’t just help but want to know more and more about them. So far, my fave is the protagonist and his new best friends Taylor and Josh. Of course, I’m curious about Nick and I have a feeling that he’s gonna be a great person. I also can’t wait to see pre of Blaze!!! 😆😆❤️

10mth
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Amber_Roses

I seriously can’t wait for Jules to rise to his full potential, because so far, i can feel that there’s a whole lot more to him. I feel sorry for him cause he went through an intense trauma in a single night. I can’t imagine how much pain he finds himself in whenever he thinks of those memories. This is a very beautiful story and I need more from him and Blaze. 💋

10mth
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Ariana_Dollars

There’s a lot of mysteries in this book, no one is an open slate, and that’s what I really find fascinating. I genuinely can’t wait to read more. So far, every chapter is perfect and the fact that no part of the story is dragged out is what’s keeping me hooked. It’s like something is always happening in every chapter and that’s literally how it should be. Keep up the good work, author ❤️

11mth
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Gorgeous_Aliyah

To be honest, the only negative thing I have to say about this book is the fact that we can’t get more than one chapter at once, but I guess that’s because the story is still free. I’m hoping that once it goes premium, we’ll be getting a lot of privilege chapters because I always want more and more of this book! That’s how obsessed I am 😔

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11mth
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EmeraldOsaro

This book is great so far, I really appreciate the way the author narrate every single details about this book and the diction is quite simple and easy to understand 😌. My only complaint is the SUSPENSE 😁😁but what a good novel without a suspense lol. I can wait for the journey between Blaze and Jules to unfold like I CAN’T WAIT 😩anyways I’m hooked and thanks author for this wonderful piece

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11mth
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Maryham_Raymond

I'm hooked the characters especially my baby 🤭❤️ I really can't wait for his interaction with blaze and Taylor is definitely interesting 🤣🤣 and the roommate ( I really don't want to remember his name) you can't just be going up n down blaming people for his situation 😒 and my baby's mom friend am so grateful for him too at least my baby has a listening hear overall am in love with the story line

11mth
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Ankoku_Kyo

Each chapter leaves you thirsty and hungry for more and more! This is really crazy to be honest. I’m just ten chapters in and I’m fully HOOKED. Like, I literally cannot wait for the updates cause they’re always so freaking good. Love this book so much and I hope we get quicker updates 🥰🥰

11mth
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Faruuq_Ipaye

Oh my gosh! Where do I even start??!! 😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ First of all, Jules is such a baby and I wanna pick him up and keep him safe in my pockets ahhhhh!!! I love the plot so far, the storyline sounds like it’s gonna be really insane and I really can’t wait to read more.

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11mth
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Bree_Airee

Hi everyone! :)) 🎀 I figured I should leave a review since we’re ten chapters in. This is a boy love [b x b] and I believe you’ve gone over the warning I left at the bottom of the book lol! This isn’t a typical cliché high school romance book, this is way darker and once again, I want to urge everyone to brace themselves as they proceed with this book! General warning: Blaze isn’t an angel LOL! Frankly, he is a monster, but an insanely hot one though.😔 And as for Jules, he’s just a baby who needs protecting from everyone, including himself teehee. 🤭 I don’t wanna spoil this book so I’m being as vague as possible. If you have any questions, don’t hesitate to ask away! A happy ending is very guaranteed as well, so fret not! :) Happy reading! xx 🎀✨

11mth
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