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to me personally, it's not worth the read.. The writing style is choppy, and to me, there's not much of a story, just ramblings.. Also the MC name just ruins it for me...
boring and slow, so many useless monologue, and MC is powerful but he just watch other people fight and it drag so long.
For me it ok because this translation right? Can't editing too much in this story But need some editing some chapter And need more chapter daily Hejeksksjsjsisjshsjsjdjdjdjdjshsjdhdjdjdjsjsjjsjssjsjjssjjssjdjdjdjjdjdjdjsndhdjdjdjdjdjddjjdjdjddjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdkdjdjdkjdjdjdjdkdkdkdkdkdjdjdjjddjjddjjddjdjdjjdjd
En general me parece una buena historia para pasar el rato, aunque me gustaría que no siempre se hiciera énfasis solamente en el protagonista, aunque eso es de esperarse de una historia como ésta
who is the fl ??? ...........................................................................................................................................
muy buena traducción, me gusta como se desarrolla la historia sin meterle demasiada velocidad y que si se vea un cambio con la interferencia del mc, además la relación que se forna con bulla es más aceptable que lo que hacen mucho de que a primera vista se enamoran
props to author for not deleting crybaby reviews about literally nothing. All love 💖
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The concept is good, but there is just so much useless monologue, it feels like you are reading 5 chapters to barely make 1 chapter of progress.
author the p@t re oon is abit too expensive. make it cheaper.(50-100 bucks is too much for fanfiction) also get specific tiers for each of your stories. you’ll get more members if you do that. i just wanted to read your dragonball story mainly but i was forced to pay for the others which i don’t care much for. i think alot of potential members saw those abhorrent prices and how you hadn’t as of this writing organized your stories into collections so we could read them all in one spot and thought to themselves this wasn’t worth it. overall i liked your story but ima be honest the p @@ t r€.,on you have is kinda overpriced for what you are getting.
So let me understand the situation... you go to a world of infinite possibilities . One place where a lot of the best waifus in anime are and you decide No-harem is the way to go ? I mean it's your novel but any decent man with the tiniest of lust would go the harem way if given the possibility to have power.... Power without joy is just useless garbage.. You need things to enjoy life, power, materials and women.... you are directly cutting a third of the joy in life..
Assuming gaining 1 power level a second from birth, you would only be at 1.5 billion after 47 years (Goku's age at ToP). Add in ALL the training will net maybe another 60 million PL. The whole premise is that the ability is too powerful to get right away, but the math shows that not to be the case.
It need some chilly , like character doing some ntr , or harem and epic comments in bed
Oh my god another account you know that means. p.s: I saw this novel MTL which was bad but now I don't have to
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to me personally, it's not worth the read.. The writing style is choppy, and to me, there's not much of a story, just ramblings.. Also the MC name just ruins it for me...
boring and slow, so many useless monologue, and MC is powerful but he just watch other people fight and it drag so long.
For me it ok because this translation right? Can't editing too much in this story But need some editing some chapter And need more chapter daily Hejeksksjsjsisjshsjsjdjdjdjdjshsjdhdjdjdjsjsjjsjssjsjjssjjssjdjdjdjjdjdjdjsndhdjdjdjdjdjddjjdjdjddjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdkdjdjdkjdjdjdjdkdkdkdkdkdjdjdjjddjjddjjddjdjdjjdjd
En general me parece una buena historia para pasar el rato, aunque me gustaría que no siempre se hiciera énfasis solamente en el protagonista, aunque eso es de esperarse de una historia como ésta
who is the fl ??? ...........................................................................................................................................
muy buena traducción, me gusta como se desarrolla la historia sin meterle demasiada velocidad y que si se vea un cambio con la interferencia del mc, además la relación que se forna con bulla es más aceptable que lo que hacen mucho de que a primera vista se enamoran
props to author for not deleting crybaby reviews about literally nothing. All love 💖
raw?....................................................................................................................................................
The concept is good, but there is just so much useless monologue, it feels like you are reading 5 chapters to barely make 1 chapter of progress.
author the p@t re oon is abit too expensive. make it cheaper.(50-100 bucks is too much for fanfiction) also get specific tiers for each of your stories. you’ll get more members if you do that. i just wanted to read your dragonball story mainly but i was forced to pay for the others which i don’t care much for. i think alot of potential members saw those abhorrent prices and how you hadn’t as of this writing organized your stories into collections so we could read them all in one spot and thought to themselves this wasn’t worth it. overall i liked your story but ima be honest the p @@ t r€.,on you have is kinda overpriced for what you are getting.
So let me understand the situation... you go to a world of infinite possibilities . One place where a lot of the best waifus in anime are and you decide No-harem is the way to go ? I mean it's your novel but any decent man with the tiniest of lust would go the harem way if given the possibility to have power.... Power without joy is just useless garbage.. You need things to enjoy life, power, materials and women.... you are directly cutting a third of the joy in life..
Assuming gaining 1 power level a second from birth, you would only be at 1.5 billion after 47 years (Goku's age at ToP). Add in ALL the training will net maybe another 60 million PL. The whole premise is that the ability is too powerful to get right away, but the math shows that not to be the case.
It need some chilly , like character doing some ntr , or harem and epic comments in bed
Oh my god another account you know that means. p.s: I saw this novel MTL which was bad but now I don't have to
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