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honestly it was a great book untill he mc went around telling others he was reincarnated and hiding his identity with the unnecessary drama from veldanava , i don't reccomend reading this after that point . it has no real plot/story line and mc is just an overpowered pathetic guy from there on.
Слишком быстро стал сильным, ведет себя тупо как ребенок не получивший конфетки. К чему в названии вообще приписка *первородный*, когда сам он становится на уровне бога чуть ли не за пару глав? Разве нельзя было рассказать про нижний мир и взаимодействие персонажа с верхним?
Good story so far. I love the fact that Rimuru isn't a pushover and is Op.
This Novel is quite interesting has a lot of potential as a fanfic story. Yeah there maybe some grammatical errors. Like any light novels. But besides that it's quite a good read interesting story to see of what will happen to rimuru if he reincarnated as Primordial. Overall it's quite great. Keep up the Good work author. Hope you keep uploading more. I'm interested to see where the story will go.
OK everyone hates old Rimuru because his naive..But the rimuru in this novel is wine-like a child who cries if he does not get his way..he bullies everyone around ..RIMURU IS GOD VELDANAVA MILIM FATHER.
This is honestly one of the best Tensura Fanfics I’ve read, I like the new perspective and confidence of the new Rimuru. Though some plot point may be over explained or may be a little complicated, it’s still great and would recommend to anyone.
Ten days break then ten chapter in one time and fanfic very nice story writing but hey can you make it make it multiverse traveling type with a pace I think you will add tensura in fanfic Thank you
please don't drop this story because it is a very interesting, entertaining and enjoyable story i have read up until now
did you have to creat a primordial version of Rimuru[img=Cries]🤦🙍!!!!!!? Really author A version of Rimuru + Primordial + Supreme Deity = Disaster 🎆💥🌍 . You should have never made this version of Rimuru . It is Big and Giant DISASTER . It destroyed the holl storyline .
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extremely bad English. further more allot of inconsistancies with the original story are present. i don't recommend you reading it.
Love this need more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
the idea behind the plot has potential, but the grammar and execution are just horrendous.
I enjoyed reading this, the only flaw that does not really have one is that the author tends to come out of a long paragraph on the statistics of the characters in the middle of the chapter. I honestly passed everything
A good story to read for Tensura fans. In this fanfic author has made Rimuru insanely strong. It has a very good plot and the character development is also good. The explanation of the skills and background is also good so all this considering I would like to say it is a good story to read.
A good story to read for Tensura fans. it has a very good plot and the character development is also good. the explanation of the skills and background is also good so all this considering I would like to say it is a good story to read.
Hi, this story is in my view really good but the only thing that ticks me off is that if Ciel said anything (what(serious)) than Rimuru will directly become scared and shits himself. That is the only thing that is annoying in the carracter development. Becorse Rimuru and Ciel are equal
It be good 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10
Tiết lộ Spoiler honestly it was a great book untill he mc went around telling others he was reincarnated and hiding his identity with the unnecessary drama from veldanava , i don't reccomend reading this after that point . it has no real plot/story line and mc is just an overpowered pathetic guy from there on.
Слишком быстро стал сильным, ведет себя тупо как ребенок не получивший конфетки. К чему в названии вообще приписка *первородный*, когда сам он становится на уровне бога чуть ли не за пару глав? Разве нельзя было рассказать про нижний мир и взаимодействие персонажа с верхним?
Good story so far. I love the fact that Rimuru isn't a pushover and is Op.
This Novel is quite interesting has a lot of potential as a fanfic story. Yeah there maybe some grammatical errors. Like any light novels. But besides that it's quite a good read interesting story to see of what will happen to rimuru if he reincarnated as Primordial. Overall it's quite great. Keep up the Good work author. Hope you keep uploading more. I'm interested to see where the story will go.
OK everyone hates old Rimuru because his naive..But the rimuru in this novel is wine-like a child who cries if he does not get his way..he bullies everyone around ..RIMURU IS GOD VELDANAVA MILIM FATHER.
This is honestly one of the best Tensura Fanfics I’ve read, I like the new perspective and confidence of the new Rimuru. Though some plot point may be over explained or may be a little complicated, it’s still great and would recommend to anyone.
Ten days break then ten chapter in one time and fanfic very nice story writing but hey can you make it make it multiverse traveling type with a pace I think you will add tensura in fanfic Thank you
please don't drop this story because it is a very interesting, entertaining and enjoyable story i have read up until now
did you have to creat a primordial version of Rimuru[img=Cries]🤦🙍!!!!!!? Really author A version of Rimuru + Primordial + Supreme Deity = Disaster 🎆💥🌍 . You should have never made this version of Rimuru . It is Big and Giant DISASTER . It destroyed the holl storyline .
waiting for new chapter and re-read [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
please more update [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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extremely bad English. further more allot of inconsistancies with the original story are present. i don't recommend you reading it.
Love this need more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
the idea behind the plot has potential, but the grammar and execution are just horrendous.
I enjoyed reading this, the only flaw that does not really have one is that the author tends to come out of a long paragraph on the statistics of the characters in the middle of the chapter. I honestly passed everything
A good story to read for Tensura fans. In this fanfic author has made Rimuru insanely strong. It has a very good plot and the character development is also good. The explanation of the skills and background is also good so all this considering I would like to say it is a good story to read.
A good story to read for Tensura fans. it has a very good plot and the character development is also good. the explanation of the skills and background is also good so all this considering I would like to say it is a good story to read.
Hi, this story is in my view really good but the only thing that ticks me off is that if Ciel said anything (what(serious)) than Rimuru will directly become scared and shits himself. That is the only thing that is annoying in the carracter development. Becorse Rimuru and Ciel are equal