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....at the start of the story is so confusing ......but 😕 I think as I start reading I find it interesting how slow Accelerator started to change and the loving girl behind him ....I kind of find this story so interesting and enjoyable. ....the problem is I don't even know how those girl would look like ......and the story have a lot of nonsense which I kind of don't understand.....either way is enjoyable ...
É mais uma daquelas fics em que cada vez que o nome dos personagem são falados, mencionados, pensados, escritos, apontados e vislumbrados, DESCREVE OL NOME INTEIRO. PORRA! É IRRITANTE! JA SABEMOS QUEM SÃO OS PERSONAGENS, NÃO PRECISA REPETIR O NOME DOS MESMOS O TEMPO TODO! ROBÔ IDIOTA! IA ENLOUQUECIDA! E como se não bastasse, o dao da cuspideira de sangue é forte neste, então tenha cuidado ao ler este mantra de cultivo. Se não tiver um tesouro mental ou que proteja seu coração do dao, terá um demônio do coração ou pior... A gramática é muito bem feita, infelizmente, o agrupamento geral é decepcionante.
I have nothing against the translator, but my note is more in repudiation of the lines in the first chapter. I don't know what direction this book will take in the future, but it's already torture to read the first chapter, and the MC's lines to a girl that goes to the junior high school could be considered harassment .---. even worse, because they are said to a child, saying that panties don't cover everything and things that I won't repeat here.
What is the raw called? .................................................................
Hello, I’m [Rishi Pandey], the owner of NOVELARC, and I’m excited to offer a fantastic opportunity for talented writers like you! We’d love for you to join our platform to publish your novel or fanfiction. As part of our program, we offer $3 per thousand views your chapters receive. Views are tracked and counted every Sunday or on the 1st day of each month, ensuring you receive accurate and timely payouts. To keep your readers engaged, we ask that you upload advance chapters of your work regularly. This will help build momentum and attract more views, ultimately maximizing your earnings. To help boost your success on NOVELARC, we recommend bringing your own readers to the platform. The more views your chapters generate, the higher your payout will be! If you're ready to join us on this exciting journey, we'd be happy to sign a contract to formalize the publishing rights for your novel or fanfiction. If you're interested in this opportunity, please feel free to reach out to me through: Instagram: [yurichi_adrenaline] Discord: [earth_19998] Alternatively, if you prefer another method of communication, just let me know and I’d be happy to reach out to you directly. Looking forward to working with passionate writers and bringing your stories to readers around the world! Best regards, [Rishi Pandey] NOVELARC
....at the start of the story is so confusing ......but 😕 I think as I start reading I find it interesting how slow Accelerator started to change and the loving girl behind him ....I kind of find this story so interesting and enjoyable. ....the problem is I don't even know how those girl would look like ......and the story have a lot of nonsense which I kind of don't understand.....either way is enjoyable ...
É mais uma daquelas fics em que cada vez que o nome dos personagem são falados, mencionados, pensados, escritos, apontados e vislumbrados, DESCREVE OL NOME INTEIRO. PORRA! É IRRITANTE! JA SABEMOS QUEM SÃO OS PERSONAGENS, NÃO PRECISA REPETIR O NOME DOS MESMOS O TEMPO TODO! ROBÔ IDIOTA! IA ENLOUQUECIDA! E como se não bastasse, o dao da cuspideira de sangue é forte neste, então tenha cuidado ao ler este mantra de cultivo. Se não tiver um tesouro mental ou que proteja seu coração do dao, terá um demônio do coração ou pior... A gramática é muito bem feita, infelizmente, o agrupamento geral é decepcionante.
I have nothing against the translator, but my note is more in repudiation of the lines in the first chapter. I don't know what direction this book will take in the future, but it's already torture to read the first chapter, and the MC's lines to a girl that goes to the junior high school could be considered harassment .---. even worse, because they are said to a child, saying that panties don't cover everything and things that I won't repeat here.
What is the raw called? .................................................................
Hello, I’m [Rishi Pandey], the owner of NOVELARC, and I’m excited to offer a fantastic opportunity for talented writers like you! We’d love for you to join our platform to publish your novel or fanfiction. As part of our program, we offer $3 per thousand views your chapters receive. Views are tracked and counted every Sunday or on the 1st day of each month, ensuring you receive accurate and timely payouts. To keep your readers engaged, we ask that you upload advance chapters of your work regularly. This will help build momentum and attract more views, ultimately maximizing your earnings. To help boost your success on NOVELARC, we recommend bringing your own readers to the platform. The more views your chapters generate, the higher your payout will be! If you're ready to join us on this exciting journey, we'd be happy to sign a contract to formalize the publishing rights for your novel or fanfiction. If you're interested in this opportunity, please feel free to reach out to me through: Instagram: [yurichi_adrenaline] Discord: [earth_19998] Alternatively, if you prefer another method of communication, just let me know and I’d be happy to reach out to you directly. Looking forward to working with passionate writers and bringing your stories to readers around the world! Best regards, [Rishi Pandey] NOVELARC