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Technically this is a well written story with pretty good English. But the MC is so unsuitable for post apocalyptic survival he is failing to change anything from the prior lives. The Author created the most badly done and inefficient doomsday prepper ever written on fiction. The MC is flailing around like a fish out of water failing to plan for his survival and failing to enact his badly created plans like "obtaining weapons". The MC is a retired cop but I believe a random high school student would do just a good a job.
Nice story, with great development. But I wanted to confirm about the villain tag because the mc seems more like a hero to me, so just wanted to confirm
Technically this is a well written story with pretty good English. But the MC is so unsuitable for post apocalyptic survival he is failing to change anything from the prior lives. The Author created the most badly done and inefficient doomsday prepper ever written on fiction. The MC is flailing around like a fish out of water failing to plan for his survival and failing to enact his badly created plans like "obtaining weapons". The MC is a retired cop but I believe a random high school student would do just a good a job.
Nice story, with great development. But I wanted to confirm about the villain tag because the mc seems more like a hero to me, so just wanted to confirm
Please remove righteous tag it is disgustingly hypocritical