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Bro please for the love of all good things read this here in webnovel "The Sacred Rules for creating fanfiction" it will help you stop falling in this tropes/cliches you always fall
I personally love the story sure it has its downsides as many previous reviews said but it’s an enjoyable read that has a likeable MC. I believe it’s going to be a top tier mha fanfic at the end of the story (if it doesn’t get dropped)
good development of Main character so far and intresting story!!! Fun to read , keep writing 👍👍👍👍
Looking forward to the future of it. Author seems to know what he's doing. Love the story and looking forward to when you can make the update schedule daily again. Keep up the great work.
i came because he was inspired of the eye system in rwby cuz its the sauce but.. this story is all about him sweating with his gymbros and getting new powerups ever second chapter... no sweaty sexy girls here .. only sweaty dudes... there is almost no dialogue and your typical japanese mc syndrom ... he is blushing when he is cuddeling with a girl etc etc... this is for pre teens :(
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It was good until the Internship part the last few chapters since chapter 23 have just been boring to read
Thanks for the chapter..... well, it seems that I have reached an ending that I don't feel very happy about, from what I have seen, the protagonist will not kill the villains and will probably be the altruistic type, unfortunately it's not my type of protagonist so I'm leaving. Author, I hope you keep up the good work and don't give up, it was good while it lasted and we'll see you around, goodbye
so far, so good. It's a good book with very good potential. the two things that I think stopping it from being top teir is that, 1 the mc isn't doing anything to fulfil conditions for more powers (I know he doesn't know the conditions but it would be nice to see him trying things out) & 2 him not training his powers much. yes, it's happened a few times (I rememberone eye poweredup after he used it a certain amount of times) , but most of the time, when his powers develop, it's in the moment where he has an idea to try out, eg, "teleporting" using blue in the sports festival.
It's good, only bad thing I'll say is that it ends. Now I need to make up to a 140 characters so...... jjnfgnfsm,asfnam,sjafb dfnbdf,fnvm,b.fkdjvndf.,bdf.bgkeafj.bgekrajf.,sbje.f.bvbck.jbfjz,vbzj., xczx,.s
The story is pretty great. FjhfsjjdhfhdjwdjhtjfjewodijfhfwjksdjfjhfjdjwksjfghjfjrsjksjfjfjgirkekedngbjfksskjdfhurkwjwdhfhrjekksdnfjdkwldktjsjwkFjhfsjjdhfhdjwdjhtjfjewodijfhfwjksdjfjhfjdjwksjfghjfjrsjksjfjfjgirkekedngbjfksskjdfhurkwjwdhfhrjekksdnfjdkwldktjsjwkFjhfsjjdhfhdjwdjhtjfjewodijfhfwjksdjfjhfjdjwksjfghjfjrsjksjfjfjgirkekedngbjfksskjdfhurkwjwdhfhrjekksdnfjdkwldktjsjwkFjhfsjjdhfhdjwdjhtjfjewodijfhfwjksdjfjhfjdjwksjfghjfjrsjksjfjfjgirkekedngbjfksskjdfhurkwjwdhfhrjekksdnfjdkwldktjsjwk
I normally dont read MHA fics cause i dont really like the Anime but the Author did a great job with the system and the Mc so it doesn't bore me and i recommend this fic cause its good and i hope it wont get dropped
Great story and character interactions, along with a decetly well written mc. overall, it's been a pretty good read. 4.8/5
I truly appreciate the dynamic of bromance present in the story and finding it quite refreshing that the focus isn't solely on romantic relationships with female characters. I'm particularly intrigued by the prospect of delving into the multiverse aspect of the story and am eagerly anticipating what the author has in store for us in that regard.
I can get over the nerfing of the abilities but my two issues are the author has not idea about the abilities he gave the mc and just trying to figure it out on the way like at one point curse technique red hit through infinty for “plot” that literally was nonsense. My second issue is the mc had no affect on the story nothing has changed at all it feel like a rehash of the cannon not to mention his personality gives much the be desired he has a very side character personality he’s just kinda there. That’s just my opinion if you unsure read it and make your own.
honestly speaking.... this is the only mha ff I have read in which MC have involvement with complete 1-A boys and proper power scale without going bang bang with girls,.... So +10 from me👍
It's a pretty good fanfic hope to see more of it and how you develop the romance between the characters
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honestly really good for a newbie maybe incorporate more than just eyes also can you please improve the "system" since it's a little lackluster in terms of other fan-fics. maybe add more to the word count because it's not enough each chap will take me four maybe even five if slightly longer. also will mc unlock domain expansion or make a form of it?
Doy 5 porque quiero, porque puedo y porque la historia me parece muy buena en mi opinion. Ahora no le metas relleno con las peleas de los persojes irrelevantes, solo valen la pena los personajes principales y el Mc. Todo lo demas estas en buen camino.
Is good story. I enjoyed rens’ perspective and his use of his various eye powers. I hope to different eyes from the inspiration story as I couldn’t really enjoy reading that one.
Eh it’s called a multiversal fic but every thing is nerfed beyond belief so wouldn’t be suprised if it gets dropped at the end of mha arc and the “plot” is legit only folllowing the same as the show nothing has changed despite the future knowledge overall it’s a big meh
Only on chapter 3 but making a review anyways. Loving it so far! I hope he eventually gets some eye powers that aren’t seen that often like those crimson eyes from naruto. I think they’re called the ketsuryugan. One of my fav dojutsu in the anime but rarely even seen in any fic.
I'm liking the way the story is going. More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,
Es como cualquier fanfic de MHA genérico, no tiene inovación y siempre son los mismos escenarios, ni siquiera con algún retoque propio. Más allá de eso, todo bien.
5 star author review. ask whatever questions you want to know about this fic and I'll answer it...................................................
Bro please for the love of all good things read this here in webnovel "The Sacred Rules for creating fanfiction" it will help you stop falling in this tropes/cliches you always fall
I personally love the story sure it has its downsides as many previous reviews said but it’s an enjoyable read that has a likeable MC. I believe it’s going to be a top tier mha fanfic at the end of the story (if it doesn’t get dropped)
good development of Main character so far and intresting story!!! Fun to read , keep writing 👍👍👍👍
Looking forward to the future of it. Author seems to know what he's doing. Love the story and looking forward to when you can make the update schedule daily again. Keep up the great work.
i came because he was inspired of the eye system in rwby cuz its the sauce but.. this story is all about him sweating with his gymbros and getting new powerups ever second chapter... no sweaty sexy girls here .. only sweaty dudes... there is almost no dialogue and your typical japanese mc syndrom ... he is blushing when he is cuddeling with a girl etc etc... this is for pre teens :(
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It was good until the Internship part the last few chapters since chapter 23 have just been boring to read
Thanks for the chapter..... well, it seems that I have reached an ending that I don't feel very happy about, from what I have seen, the protagonist will not kill the villains and will probably be the altruistic type, unfortunately it's not my type of protagonist so I'm leaving. Author, I hope you keep up the good work and don't give up, it was good while it lasted and we'll see you around, goodbye
so far, so good. It's a good book with very good potential. the two things that I think stopping it from being top teir is that, 1 the mc isn't doing anything to fulfil conditions for more powers (I know he doesn't know the conditions but it would be nice to see him trying things out) & 2 him not training his powers much. yes, it's happened a few times (I rememberone eye poweredup after he used it a certain amount of times) , but most of the time, when his powers develop, it's in the moment where he has an idea to try out, eg, "teleporting" using blue in the sports festival.
It's good, only bad thing I'll say is that it ends. Now I need to make up to a 140 characters so...... jjnfgnfsm,asfnam,sjafb dfnbdf,fnvm,b.fkdjvndf.,bdf.bgkeafj.bgekrajf.,sbje.f.bvbck.jbfjz,vbzj., xczx,.s
The story is pretty great. FjhfsjjdhfhdjwdjhtjfjewodijfhfwjksdjfjhfjdjwksjfghjfjrsjksjfjfjgirkekedngbjfksskjdfhurkwjwdhfhrjekksdnfjdkwldktjsjwkFjhfsjjdhfhdjwdjhtjfjewodijfhfwjksdjfjhfjdjwksjfghjfjrsjksjfjfjgirkekedngbjfksskjdfhurkwjwdhfhrjekksdnfjdkwldktjsjwkFjhfsjjdhfhdjwdjhtjfjewodijfhfwjksdjfjhfjdjwksjfghjfjrsjksjfjfjgirkekedngbjfksskjdfhurkwjwdhfhrjekksdnfjdkwldktjsjwkFjhfsjjdhfhdjwdjhtjfjewodijfhfwjksdjfjhfjdjwksjfghjfjrsjksjfjfjgirkekedngbjfksskjdfhurkwjwdhfhrjekksdnfjdkwldktjsjwk
I normally dont read MHA fics cause i dont really like the Anime but the Author did a great job with the system and the Mc so it doesn't bore me and i recommend this fic cause its good and i hope it wont get dropped
Great story and character interactions, along with a decetly well written mc. overall, it's been a pretty good read. 4.8/5
I truly appreciate the dynamic of bromance present in the story and finding it quite refreshing that the focus isn't solely on romantic relationships with female characters. I'm particularly intrigued by the prospect of delving into the multiverse aspect of the story and am eagerly anticipating what the author has in store for us in that regard.
I can get over the nerfing of the abilities but my two issues are the author has not idea about the abilities he gave the mc and just trying to figure it out on the way like at one point curse technique red hit through infinty for “plot” that literally was nonsense. My second issue is the mc had no affect on the story nothing has changed at all it feel like a rehash of the cannon not to mention his personality gives much the be desired he has a very side character personality he’s just kinda there. That’s just my opinion if you unsure read it and make your own.
honestly speaking.... this is the only mha ff I have read in which MC have involvement with complete 1-A boys and proper power scale without going bang bang with girls,.... So +10 from me👍
It's a pretty good fanfic hope to see more of it and how you develop the romance between the characters
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honestly really good for a newbie maybe incorporate more than just eyes also can you please improve the "system" since it's a little lackluster in terms of other fan-fics. maybe add more to the word count because it's not enough each chap will take me four maybe even five if slightly longer. also will mc unlock domain expansion or make a form of it?
Doy 5 porque quiero, porque puedo y porque la historia me parece muy buena en mi opinion. Ahora no le metas relleno con las peleas de los persojes irrelevantes, solo valen la pena los personajes principales y el Mc. Todo lo demas estas en buen camino.
Is good story. I enjoyed rens’ perspective and his use of his various eye powers. I hope to different eyes from the inspiration story as I couldn’t really enjoy reading that one.
Eh it’s called a multiversal fic but every thing is nerfed beyond belief so wouldn’t be suprised if it gets dropped at the end of mha arc and the “plot” is legit only folllowing the same as the show nothing has changed despite the future knowledge overall it’s a big meh
Only on chapter 3 but making a review anyways. Loving it so far! I hope he eventually gets some eye powers that aren’t seen that often like those crimson eyes from naruto. I think they’re called the ketsuryugan. One of my fav dojutsu in the anime but rarely even seen in any fic.
I'm liking the way the story is going. More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,
Es como cualquier fanfic de MHA genérico, no tiene inovación y siempre son los mismos escenarios, ni siquiera con algún retoque propio. Más allá de eso, todo bien.
5 star author review. ask whatever questions you want to know about this fic and I'll answer it...................................................