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Viết đánh giáI really enjoyed this story. Its really entertaining and keeps you interested the whole time. The grammar is also without problems and the story flows flawless. Normally i would say that I am not a die hard fan of Percy Jackson but this story is really exciting to the point i think about buying the books. The Characters are well fleshed out and their Relationships are potrayed detailed which is really good. The story is a blend of Action and Comedy with its own hilarious moments and brings a smile to my Face. If you ask me if i would recommend this story, then i would say YES! This story is really a Gem and when you are searching for a good story this is a perfect pick.
Absolutely love this story. The author put so much effort and thought into this story and it's amazing. Overall the main character is a literal aura farm walking. Bro is him and knows it. Fight scenes are probably the best part of the story, in my opinion. It puts a whole new spin on the world of the Olympians.
I only read 2 chapters and gave up. The MC is born and from the Fates to Apollo giving out prophecies about how awesome the MC will be, it all just felt too cringe. At best this is propably another one of those stories where everyone just constantly talks about how cool the MC is. It doesn't feel like there will be any complex, funny or interesting plotline.
this is officially the second best novel I have read in my life , if i had seen or read this Novel earlier, it would have been best
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Great world building and character development can’t wait to see the powers they gain in the future the cards are so cool and interesting a truely unique way to gain powers I don’t think I have ever a Percy Jackson fanfic that has interest me so much keep it up it go great so far
best pj fanfic I've read so far frfr, love the power system form lotm but his personality for my taste is 4/5 for me even though it gives his character substance but well yeah just not for me but nonetheless story is great, love it pacing is slowish but okay. main girl in my opinion should've been thalia matching his personality and zoe, shouldve kept anny for percy but yeh not my story, but back to rating the story is good so far and definitely a 5/5
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Only problem with this fic... Being honest? It is that it has only 200 (less) chapters. Since it is in the first canon book yet. There's so much to cover, with Chronos alone.. Not to mention Jason (Roman) and the Egyptians. I don't mind 1.000 chapters but I sincerely hope author won't drop this. Please.
Highly Recommended to anyone to read. The storytelling is amazing, the comedy is top and the serious moments are cold.
Author describes and visualises the characters automatic 5 star for me. Author has done better than 99% of the fanfic writers just by doing so.
i really love the book the writer is funny, accurate, and constant with the update. i have fun reading it thank you and cannot wait for more.
I like the story it is PJ but i also like how the MC is strong but not too overpowering. I think this is one of the few fics with actual good romance i have seen in this app.
I like the story very much because it's pretty much rare to find a Percy Jakson's Fanfic, even if the main char sometimes got a "awkward" feeling of description but overall I love it how you write about him and annabeth, good luck and wait for the best of this book
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Me ha parecido una muy buena historia, tiene unos momentos muy divertidos y se ha desarrollado de una muy buena manera, hay elementos de la trama que no me han gustado pero a grandes rasgos es muy buena.
Im not the one to write reviews, but this one I really like so far, so I try to give it a go. Before, anything below is my personal opinion, respect that please. I am not really into the Percy Jacksons Lore, so as someone that has no relevant knowledge about the Universe (Apart from one movie I watched as a teenie) I very much enjoyed the Background informations and Infos, they made the story very engaging and feeling for me. I honestly love the MC so far, he has the arrogance, ruthlesness and cocky attitude i would expect of someone with his Parents! His jokes and sometimes edgy style, while not beeing too edgy, are just the right amount to make my smile nearly every chapter i read so far, so honest appreciacion from me there Author-san! World building and Character Developement? I cant say much from was the usual timeline or original work has drifted away, so with my very blank perspective, i really love the characters and how they fit in with each other, each having their unice sides and interactions wich i really enjoy. And even tho, im one of the no-harem folks (because in most storys they just start clinging to mc without any reason at all), I did not mind it till now at all, because each has their unique flair and dont just got abandoned after getting introduced literally 5 chaps before. Now at the end something i want to talk personally about. Many comments seem to rant about the MC getting a Nerf, I honestly expected it and I loved how the Author did it. Yes, it was a nerf, he got weaker, but with a very reasonable explanation and without disrupting the flow in reading, which i really, really appreciate <3 You've done a amazing job so far in my eyes Sir! Can't wait to read more :)
The novel starts off really strong. The author clearly did their homework—going as far as using Google Maps to make the journey accurate, which I appreciated. But after that, it feels like all the effort just drops off. The main character gets nerfed hard, not just once, but twice. First, his powers are cut down significantly, and then his personality becomes so arrogant that he refuses to use his full abilities on weaker enemies, which just feels frustrating. Then the story takes an even weirder turn when his future self gives all his friends sequences (like in Lord of the Mysteries), and one of them becomes his frenemy, giving the MC a tougher enemy to deal with. It feels really forced. To top it off, there’s a huge inconsistency. In an earlier conversation between Lucian and Annabeth, it’s made clear that sequences are tailor-made and can’t just be handed out. But then Luke, with zero experience, can somehow mass-produce sequences? Seriously? How is making potions that turn you into a god suddenly so easy that anyone can do it with a few instructions?
The grammar isn’t too bad, it’s not broken English or anything, but the writing style and the way the characters talk is so cringy I couldn’t focus much on the story and eventually quit at chapter 20.
la verdad esta historia no me llamo la atención al principio, pero con el trascurso de los capitules me empezó a gustar al punto que cada que tengo tiempo libre, me a encantado como avanza la trama y espero con ansias lo que puede pasar en el futuro, espero con ansias al próximo capitulo.
It's really good at the start but it's worse as it goes on. It has become painful to read (not because of the writing but the content itself). From the comments this problem seems to always continue so I will drop this. If I put the story and characters aside, the writing is still quite good and maybe some people can like this fanfic, but not me, so 2 stars for me.
The creator is a great and the work is going very well and the power and abilities given to the characters are incredible, in addition to the fact that the cards make it more interesting and distinguishable from other stories.
I really enjoyed this story. Its really entertaining and keeps you interested the whole time. The grammar is also without problems and the story flows flawless. Normally i would say that I am not a die hard fan of Percy Jackson but this story is really exciting to the point i think about buying the books. The Characters are well fleshed out and their Relationships are potrayed detailed which is really good. The story is a blend of Action and Comedy with its own hilarious moments and brings a smile to my Face. If you ask me if i would recommend this story, then i would say YES! This story is really a Gem and when you are searching for a good story this is a perfect pick.
Absolutely love this story. The author put so much effort and thought into this story and it's amazing. Overall the main character is a literal aura farm walking. Bro is him and knows it. Fight scenes are probably the best part of the story, in my opinion. It puts a whole new spin on the world of the Olympians.
I only read 2 chapters and gave up. The MC is born and from the Fates to Apollo giving out prophecies about how awesome the MC will be, it all just felt too cringe. At best this is propably another one of those stories where everyone just constantly talks about how cool the MC is. It doesn't feel like there will be any complex, funny or interesting plotline.
this is officially the second best novel I have read in my life , if i had seen or read this Novel earlier, it would have been best
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Great world building and character development can’t wait to see the powers they gain in the future the cards are so cool and interesting a truely unique way to gain powers I don’t think I have ever a Percy Jackson fanfic that has interest me so much keep it up it go great so far
best pj fanfic I've read so far frfr, love the power system form lotm but his personality for my taste is 4/5 for me even though it gives his character substance but well yeah just not for me but nonetheless story is great, love it pacing is slowish but okay. main girl in my opinion should've been thalia matching his personality and zoe, shouldve kept anny for percy but yeh not my story, but back to rating the story is good so far and definitely a 5/5
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Only problem with this fic... Being honest? It is that it has only 200 (less) chapters. Since it is in the first canon book yet. There's so much to cover, with Chronos alone.. Not to mention Jason (Roman) and the Egyptians. I don't mind 1.000 chapters but I sincerely hope author won't drop this. Please.
Highly Recommended to anyone to read. The storytelling is amazing, the comedy is top and the serious moments are cold.
Author describes and visualises the characters automatic 5 star for me. Author has done better than 99% of the fanfic writers just by doing so.
i really love the book the writer is funny, accurate, and constant with the update. i have fun reading it thank you and cannot wait for more.
I like the story it is PJ but i also like how the MC is strong but not too overpowering. I think this is one of the few fics with actual good romance i have seen in this app.
I like the story very much because it's pretty much rare to find a Percy Jakson's Fanfic, even if the main char sometimes got a "awkward" feeling of description but overall I love it how you write about him and annabeth, good luck and wait for the best of this book
Buena historia ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Me ha parecido una muy buena historia, tiene unos momentos muy divertidos y se ha desarrollado de una muy buena manera, hay elementos de la trama que no me han gustado pero a grandes rasgos es muy buena.
Im not the one to write reviews, but this one I really like so far, so I try to give it a go. Before, anything below is my personal opinion, respect that please. I am not really into the Percy Jacksons Lore, so as someone that has no relevant knowledge about the Universe (Apart from one movie I watched as a teenie) I very much enjoyed the Background informations and Infos, they made the story very engaging and feeling for me. I honestly love the MC so far, he has the arrogance, ruthlesness and cocky attitude i would expect of someone with his Parents! His jokes and sometimes edgy style, while not beeing too edgy, are just the right amount to make my smile nearly every chapter i read so far, so honest appreciacion from me there Author-san! World building and Character Developement? I cant say much from was the usual timeline or original work has drifted away, so with my very blank perspective, i really love the characters and how they fit in with each other, each having their unice sides and interactions wich i really enjoy. And even tho, im one of the no-harem folks (because in most storys they just start clinging to mc without any reason at all), I did not mind it till now at all, because each has their unique flair and dont just got abandoned after getting introduced literally 5 chaps before. Now at the end something i want to talk personally about. Many comments seem to rant about the MC getting a Nerf, I honestly expected it and I loved how the Author did it. Yes, it was a nerf, he got weaker, but with a very reasonable explanation and without disrupting the flow in reading, which i really, really appreciate <3 You've done a amazing job so far in my eyes Sir! Can't wait to read more :)
The novel starts off really strong. The author clearly did their homework—going as far as using Google Maps to make the journey accurate, which I appreciated. But after that, it feels like all the effort just drops off. The main character gets nerfed hard, not just once, but twice. First, his powers are cut down significantly, and then his personality becomes so arrogant that he refuses to use his full abilities on weaker enemies, which just feels frustrating. Then the story takes an even weirder turn when his future self gives all his friends sequences (like in Lord of the Mysteries), and one of them becomes his frenemy, giving the MC a tougher enemy to deal with. It feels really forced. To top it off, there’s a huge inconsistency. In an earlier conversation between Lucian and Annabeth, it’s made clear that sequences are tailor-made and can’t just be handed out. But then Luke, with zero experience, can somehow mass-produce sequences? Seriously? How is making potions that turn you into a god suddenly so easy that anyone can do it with a few instructions?
The grammar isn’t too bad, it’s not broken English or anything, but the writing style and the way the characters talk is so cringy I couldn’t focus much on the story and eventually quit at chapter 20.
la verdad esta historia no me llamo la atención al principio, pero con el trascurso de los capitules me empezó a gustar al punto que cada que tengo tiempo libre, me a encantado como avanza la trama y espero con ansias lo que puede pasar en el futuro, espero con ansias al próximo capitulo.
It's really good at the start but it's worse as it goes on. It has become painful to read (not because of the writing but the content itself). From the comments this problem seems to always continue so I will drop this. If I put the story and characters aside, the writing is still quite good and maybe some people can like this fanfic, but not me, so 2 stars for me.
The creator is a great and the work is going very well and the power and abilities given to the characters are incredible, in addition to the fact that the cards make it more interesting and distinguishable from other stories.