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Viết đánh giáIt's not as solid as I thought it would be. It goes like this: some dialogue with weird speech patterns "blah blah blah," the MC grows powerful, "blah blah blah," the MC gets more powerful. The MC suddenly has rizz with just a few words and teasing, the MC suddenly gets more powerful, rinse and repeat. I'm not going to even mention the silly way "political maneuvering" is shown, not fleshed out, but just shown like everything else. Also, fanboys of the story don't even bother replying, you may like the story, but I don't and I don't care what you have to respond with. IF the author wants to fine, but I generally don't read replies anyway.
Errado e com sabor as histórias e DxD a sua história é muito boa espero que continue escrevendo não ligue para os comentários negativos só são pessoas com inveja do seu talento só o que precisa é postar com mais frequência capítulos de sua história é boa 🤔🤔🤔😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍
Overall, one of the best reads I have had on this app. The way the mc got strong was a little weird for my taste, but overall probably will be my top 3 reads ever. love the work mate.
I've liked the story since the beginning, but this war arc just has me invested, and it isn't just a senseless war for the mc to slaughter any and everyone in his path. It's one waged for sensible purposes that aren't just killing to be a chuuni edgelord or whatever. This is a conquest for the future, for protection, for power, and best of all, for the greater good.
Tiết lộ SpoilerIt was one of the best DxD fanfiction I have ever read. It was so fascinating that I just couldn't stop reading. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Es una buena novela y un buen fanfic. Es entretenido y no regala poder ni lo hace op desde el inicio lo que creo que arruina muchos fanfictions. Además me gusta el elemento del caos y como es su deber descarrilar la trama. Siento que demasiados fanfics buscan ser tan lineales que no exploran a muchos personajes, por no mencionar el mundo de la serie.
I want to start with saying that I've been a fan of your wyvern fic and want to know when you will continue it. It was one of the best Dxd fic for me. As for this fic, the start was good but it went downhill after the bael heir plot at least for me. The harem is too big and for me it didn't work out too many OCs and the harem members character were a bit off though the romance part was not bad but not good either. But the main thing that I didn't like was the power concept of MC. Despite having power of gravity from demon lord Wilbert from testement sister new devil which is equal or stronger than power of destruction it was nearly invisible throughout the fic apart from the start where he used it to train. Soul magic, necromancy , mage, knight alchemist blacksmith etc. you have put a lot of eggs in one basket and instead of harmony it all looks chaotic . Summary: For the author, you have a lot of ambitions you should have taken one step at time for all those professions and even that harem to work out not just take the shortcut called timeskip overall the concept of the fic was good but the execution was poor.
This one used to be one of the top fanfics, but as always, author tried to take on multiple books together which resulted in irregular updates. Way to irregular. 6 days still no updates or any announcement from the author. Yeah, it's a free read, but still, the author should let the readers know if they are going to take a long break. Then again, bro got big ego. So, let's see if he deletes this comment or not. Anyway, don't bother to reply back.
My guy never misses! Absolute banger of a fanfic. I'm not saying the others aren't good either if anything they r just as good as this (can't be better than this one, it is my fav ✌🏾). I'm just too lazy to post a review on the others 😂.
I say, it's goes in a weird category for me. I mean, yeah it's definitely more or less typical dxd fanfic. But mc seems to be more intrested in guys then girls. He have more "brothers" then harem members. You think it's should be fine, but he literally have more interactions with DUDES then with his own womens. You could think of it, whatever way you want. Like from ancient greeks(I'm not talking about geh unreal greece, that people would present nowadays, no the geh wasn't that prominent as people like to present. It's just a screechs from political involved people) where womens was lesser beings, those can't be true comrades for mc - which is kinda based. Or he is literally latent geh. I think it's second option...
great story so far I'm just wish you update the story more often everything else is great keep up the amazing and don't drop it
(Google traductor) It's quite entertaining. Good reading, stay on the right track.🫡[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
This author has taken an really interesting approach to the DxD world I really feel like the chapters are gonna be amazing.✌️✌️✌️🔥 Good work dude.
It's okay, but very boring. Alot of it, seems like a cultivation novel. And the problem with cultivation novels is that it's too technical, and feels like you are reading a textbook, which makes you sleepy. Also the MC has a really conservative attitude- rude to people for no reason, close minded etc. which ticks me of. If you want something with good grammar, and like cultivation novels this is for you.
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I’m enjoying the FF and will continue to read it as I’m far from catching up, but I wanted to point out some things. My biggest issue with this story is not the grammar, the dialogues(as I have read in other reviews) or the choice of words the author uses. My biggest issue lies in the lack of proofreading this series has. You can spot unnecessary typos very often. Repetition of identical phrases (or words) in the same sentences. At times, you can even spot missing words. This FF has a lot of potential, and it would become way better if the proofreading was done more carefully. As someone who also writes a FF I tend to make the same mistakes, which I have come to put more effort into fixing lately. I personally would recommend Grammarly, which is pretty useful when it comes to proofreading. And if, for some reason, you (the author) don’t like it, there’s the Webnovel’s Inkstone available in this app, which can be useful in correcting typos at least. More than a review, Author, take this as constructive criticism from someone who is enjoying your story but could be enjoying it even more. I hope this helps you in one way or another.
Keep up the good work. This story so far has been great, I like the the guy who reincarnated him isn't just a one ans done deal. Writing quality is good. I think the only gripe I have is that him being a kid is taking a little long but I understand that to set a backstory you have to do that. Just a little annoying to read about a 9-12 yr old.
Tiết lộ SpoilerThis is one of the best fanfictions I have read. The mc is op yet not overly so. The power is logical, the way the multiverse is introduced makes perfect sense and the fact that politics play a big role makes it realistic... Overall this bok is awesome!!!
The typical DxD novel with no real goal for the Mc so he ends up trying to get the most power possible within his childhood years. Harem antics that are beyond boring; since the author's use of diction with his description and dialogue is incredibly mundane. I think he has 5 women by this point and I couldn't care less about them since he only speaks to them when he requires something they have (except his mother I guess...). Updates are the only real positive to this book as everything else is mediocre at best. Buuuut, this is Webnovel- I don't exactly expect anything of substantial thought.
to be honest, it is getting boring, harem arch are same for all novels, it feels too early for love interest, and overall the story hasn't progress outside of Devil world with it being kind of fast yet slow progress of the content within the story, and the lack of action from mc puts me at a lost of interest to the novel.
The dialogue is pretty horrendous. A lot of it is just useless filler with no depth to it. The MC is a bit of a weirdo, but that's more the writers poor taste than anything. The dialogue is incredibly unrealistic, conversations especially. Yes, it's a fantasy world, but seriously? The conversations look like a child wrote them. The prose is awful. Each line adds nothing to the overall narrative, so much so you could skip the first 10 chapters and would of missed nothing of importance. I genuinely can't be bothered to give a more In depth review, the fanfic isn't worth anymore than what I've wrote.
this is good, but the writing quality is bad. Its not about the gramar and typo, its about the choice of words. Also the dialogue is kinda weird. There is also no depth in the story.
Surprisingly a great story, not a braindead harem and actual relationships between both men and women that feel real. The main character is actually respectable, intelligent and ambitious, I can't think of a single thing to complain about, good work Author!
My thoughts on this fanfic are... Why not just read it yourself? I'm too lazy to properly wrote a Review ✌️
want to give one star, but didn't, only rated it low because of Gender-bend nonsense going on, I hate force plot lovers with gender changing the OG MC of that world to make them a Lover
It's not as solid as I thought it would be. It goes like this: some dialogue with weird speech patterns "blah blah blah," the MC grows powerful, "blah blah blah," the MC gets more powerful. The MC suddenly has rizz with just a few words and teasing, the MC suddenly gets more powerful, rinse and repeat. I'm not going to even mention the silly way "political maneuvering" is shown, not fleshed out, but just shown like everything else. Also, fanboys of the story don't even bother replying, you may like the story, but I don't and I don't care what you have to respond with. IF the author wants to fine, but I generally don't read replies anyway.
Errado e com sabor as histórias e DxD a sua história é muito boa espero que continue escrevendo não ligue para os comentários negativos só são pessoas com inveja do seu talento só o que precisa é postar com mais frequência capítulos de sua história é boa 🤔🤔🤔😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍
Overall, one of the best reads I have had on this app. The way the mc got strong was a little weird for my taste, but overall probably will be my top 3 reads ever. love the work mate.
I've liked the story since the beginning, but this war arc just has me invested, and it isn't just a senseless war for the mc to slaughter any and everyone in his path. It's one waged for sensible purposes that aren't just killing to be a chuuni edgelord or whatever. This is a conquest for the future, for protection, for power, and best of all, for the greater good.
Tiết lộ SpoilerIt was one of the best DxD fanfiction I have ever read. It was so fascinating that I just couldn't stop reading. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Es una buena novela y un buen fanfic. Es entretenido y no regala poder ni lo hace op desde el inicio lo que creo que arruina muchos fanfictions. Además me gusta el elemento del caos y como es su deber descarrilar la trama. Siento que demasiados fanfics buscan ser tan lineales que no exploran a muchos personajes, por no mencionar el mundo de la serie.
I want to start with saying that I've been a fan of your wyvern fic and want to know when you will continue it. It was one of the best Dxd fic for me. As for this fic, the start was good but it went downhill after the bael heir plot at least for me. The harem is too big and for me it didn't work out too many OCs and the harem members character were a bit off though the romance part was not bad but not good either. But the main thing that I didn't like was the power concept of MC. Despite having power of gravity from demon lord Wilbert from testement sister new devil which is equal or stronger than power of destruction it was nearly invisible throughout the fic apart from the start where he used it to train. Soul magic, necromancy , mage, knight alchemist blacksmith etc. you have put a lot of eggs in one basket and instead of harmony it all looks chaotic . Summary: For the author, you have a lot of ambitions you should have taken one step at time for all those professions and even that harem to work out not just take the shortcut called timeskip overall the concept of the fic was good but the execution was poor.
This one used to be one of the top fanfics, but as always, author tried to take on multiple books together which resulted in irregular updates. Way to irregular. 6 days still no updates or any announcement from the author. Yeah, it's a free read, but still, the author should let the readers know if they are going to take a long break. Then again, bro got big ego. So, let's see if he deletes this comment or not. Anyway, don't bother to reply back.
My guy never misses! Absolute banger of a fanfic. I'm not saying the others aren't good either if anything they r just as good as this (can't be better than this one, it is my fav ✌🏾). I'm just too lazy to post a review on the others 😂.
I say, it's goes in a weird category for me. I mean, yeah it's definitely more or less typical dxd fanfic. But mc seems to be more intrested in guys then girls. He have more "brothers" then harem members. You think it's should be fine, but he literally have more interactions with DUDES then with his own womens. You could think of it, whatever way you want. Like from ancient greeks(I'm not talking about geh unreal greece, that people would present nowadays, no the geh wasn't that prominent as people like to present. It's just a screechs from political involved people) where womens was lesser beings, those can't be true comrades for mc - which is kinda based. Or he is literally latent geh. I think it's second option...
great story so far I'm just wish you update the story more often everything else is great keep up the amazing and don't drop it
(Google traductor) It's quite entertaining. Good reading, stay on the right track.🫡[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
This author has taken an really interesting approach to the DxD world I really feel like the chapters are gonna be amazing.✌️✌️✌️🔥 Good work dude.
It's okay, but very boring. Alot of it, seems like a cultivation novel. And the problem with cultivation novels is that it's too technical, and feels like you are reading a textbook, which makes you sleepy. Also the MC has a really conservative attitude- rude to people for no reason, close minded etc. which ticks me of. If you want something with good grammar, and like cultivation novels this is for you.
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I’m enjoying the FF and will continue to read it as I’m far from catching up, but I wanted to point out some things. My biggest issue with this story is not the grammar, the dialogues(as I have read in other reviews) or the choice of words the author uses. My biggest issue lies in the lack of proofreading this series has. You can spot unnecessary typos very often. Repetition of identical phrases (or words) in the same sentences. At times, you can even spot missing words. This FF has a lot of potential, and it would become way better if the proofreading was done more carefully. As someone who also writes a FF I tend to make the same mistakes, which I have come to put more effort into fixing lately. I personally would recommend Grammarly, which is pretty useful when it comes to proofreading. And if, for some reason, you (the author) don’t like it, there’s the Webnovel’s Inkstone available in this app, which can be useful in correcting typos at least. More than a review, Author, take this as constructive criticism from someone who is enjoying your story but could be enjoying it even more. I hope this helps you in one way or another.
Keep up the good work. This story so far has been great, I like the the guy who reincarnated him isn't just a one ans done deal. Writing quality is good. I think the only gripe I have is that him being a kid is taking a little long but I understand that to set a backstory you have to do that. Just a little annoying to read about a 9-12 yr old.
Tiết lộ SpoilerThis is one of the best fanfictions I have read. The mc is op yet not overly so. The power is logical, the way the multiverse is introduced makes perfect sense and the fact that politics play a big role makes it realistic... Overall this bok is awesome!!!
The typical DxD novel with no real goal for the Mc so he ends up trying to get the most power possible within his childhood years. Harem antics that are beyond boring; since the author's use of diction with his description and dialogue is incredibly mundane. I think he has 5 women by this point and I couldn't care less about them since he only speaks to them when he requires something they have (except his mother I guess...). Updates are the only real positive to this book as everything else is mediocre at best. Buuuut, this is Webnovel- I don't exactly expect anything of substantial thought.
to be honest, it is getting boring, harem arch are same for all novels, it feels too early for love interest, and overall the story hasn't progress outside of Devil world with it being kind of fast yet slow progress of the content within the story, and the lack of action from mc puts me at a lost of interest to the novel.
The dialogue is pretty horrendous. A lot of it is just useless filler with no depth to it. The MC is a bit of a weirdo, but that's more the writers poor taste than anything. The dialogue is incredibly unrealistic, conversations especially. Yes, it's a fantasy world, but seriously? The conversations look like a child wrote them. The prose is awful. Each line adds nothing to the overall narrative, so much so you could skip the first 10 chapters and would of missed nothing of importance. I genuinely can't be bothered to give a more In depth review, the fanfic isn't worth anymore than what I've wrote.
this is good, but the writing quality is bad. Its not about the gramar and typo, its about the choice of words. Also the dialogue is kinda weird. There is also no depth in the story.
Surprisingly a great story, not a braindead harem and actual relationships between both men and women that feel real. The main character is actually respectable, intelligent and ambitious, I can't think of a single thing to complain about, good work Author!
My thoughts on this fanfic are... Why not just read it yourself? I'm too lazy to properly wrote a Review ✌️
want to give one star, but didn't, only rated it low because of Gender-bend nonsense going on, I hate force plot lovers with gender changing the OG MC of that world to make them a Lover