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Copy and pasted from the Og version called mercenary enrollment He just took yu ijins spot My honest opinion of this story is a2.4/5 Just not a enough depth some of the writing feels ai I would recommend to read novels that are popular and understand how they convey there emotions instead of saying with a gaze fill with worry do Example[ :title showing emotion] Her heartbeat thundered in her ears, her pulse racing like a wild river beneath her skin as she raised her hand, fingers trembling Heres what showing emotion looks like
I like this fanfic very much. It is sad that this is in a Hiatus now,but in the end it is your ff so I will live with it. Also when you continue writing it,you should probably expend the different skills from the system,else the protag would reach the max in about 20 chapters. Skills like Driving,Infiltration or Parkour could also help as a bodyguard for that later. Or you could add some mundane skills like programming or cooking.
It's a passable story, It's rare to have a fanfic about an ongoing manhwa. IMO the story progress to fast, there's no meaningful conversation between each Chara that makes it hard for me to be immersed in the story, It's too shallow, you used too many narrative, the system function still too ambigous, there's no mention if he can increase his stats by working on it or it can only be increase using pretend point. I read the story till 14 chap but the only character i can see in the MC is not a really good one, he didn't have a motivation except increasing his stats, no meaningful bonds between other chara because he always pretending, no dream, he accept his situation too fast. So far this story is readable but for me this story didn't make me want to wait each update to read it, if this is not a fanfic about mercenary enrollment then this Will became a boring story. I don't know if it became better later on but i am not really interested on reading on.
Probably one of the best novels I've read recently. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
BEST STORY THAT I'VE EVER READ, I LOVE THE PLOT DEVELOPMENT IN THIS STORY AND I THINK THAT THIS STORY GETS POPULAR IN THE FUTURE AS I LOVE IT SO MUCH
This is a good fanfic for a manhwa I hope that this isn't some kind of harem story. Because I'm loving it right!! So keep it up author. We'll support u!
I hope this fanfic keeps up especially it's rare to see a mercenary enrollment which is one of my favorites, and no harem and most people including me doesn't like harem as harem is very unrealistic.
well it's ok, upto now, may be more exciting in future chapters. I just hope there will be more manhwa fanfics
Bro keep going with this fanfic, never seen a mercenary enrollment fanfic yet. With this being the first it’s really good keep going
Copy and pasted from the Og version called mercenary enrollment He just took yu ijins spot My honest opinion of this story is a2.4/5 Just not a enough depth some of the writing feels ai I would recommend to read novels that are popular and understand how they convey there emotions instead of saying with a gaze fill with worry do Example[ :title showing emotion] Her heartbeat thundered in her ears, her pulse racing like a wild river beneath her skin as she raised her hand, fingers trembling Heres what showing emotion looks like
I like this fanfic very much. It is sad that this is in a Hiatus now,but in the end it is your ff so I will live with it. Also when you continue writing it,you should probably expend the different skills from the system,else the protag would reach the max in about 20 chapters. Skills like Driving,Infiltration or Parkour could also help as a bodyguard for that later. Or you could add some mundane skills like programming or cooking.
It's a passable story, It's rare to have a fanfic about an ongoing manhwa. IMO the story progress to fast, there's no meaningful conversation between each Chara that makes it hard for me to be immersed in the story, It's too shallow, you used too many narrative, the system function still too ambigous, there's no mention if he can increase his stats by working on it or it can only be increase using pretend point. I read the story till 14 chap but the only character i can see in the MC is not a really good one, he didn't have a motivation except increasing his stats, no meaningful bonds between other chara because he always pretending, no dream, he accept his situation too fast. So far this story is readable but for me this story didn't make me want to wait each update to read it, if this is not a fanfic about mercenary enrollment then this Will became a boring story. I don't know if it became better later on but i am not really interested on reading on.
Probably one of the best novels I've read recently. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
BEST STORY THAT I'VE EVER READ, I LOVE THE PLOT DEVELOPMENT IN THIS STORY AND I THINK THAT THIS STORY GETS POPULAR IN THE FUTURE AS I LOVE IT SO MUCH
This is a good fanfic for a manhwa I hope that this isn't some kind of harem story. Because I'm loving it right!! So keep it up author. We'll support u!
I hope this fanfic keeps up especially it's rare to see a mercenary enrollment which is one of my favorites, and no harem and most people including me doesn't like harem as harem is very unrealistic.
well it's ok, upto now, may be more exciting in future chapters. I just hope there will be more manhwa fanfics
Bro keep going with this fanfic, never seen a mercenary enrollment fanfic yet. With this being the first it’s really good keep going
To be honest it got boring really fast...