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Viết đánh giáI couldn't get past chapter 156. The author wants to convince us so badly that crime and corruption is true order but he seems to forget and ignore that crime is not just selling drugs and robberies but a big business for the mafia and gangs is s*x trafficking. What happens to all the women and children if all the people and police are corrupt and look only for profit? The MC is a lunatic and the worst thing to happen on MCU and DCU and so is the author. I bet the CCP is really proud for this story and I am not saying because I have something against Chinese people but this novel portrays crime and corruption as something to strive for.
Locked chapters for a Fanfiction is diabolical work!! It should be free since this author is clearly translating it and using characters from copyrighted works, heavily copyrighted works mind you! This is disgusting!!
Translation, updates, character design and world background are good. I mean, its a fanfic, if these four are bad it means that the author shoved in tons of useless OC's or knew nothing about the original works the fanfic is based on. Everything is good but the writing is bad, the story reads like a broken record and the author desperately tries to add foreshadowing into their work... It didn't really hold well. Props to the author, the story was planned out and doesn't involve the classic endless face slapping tropes but events are too disjointed and lack real story telling. Nearl 100 chaps in and all I read were out of sync short stories that came about without reason. There is no direction for the story, an MC who is a side character could work IF the fic has a goal but! Thw goals of the MC are not really clear, he shuffles between 2 worlds and has different goals for each. His motivations are all over the place which ia what allows him to act various roles but with no clear personality the MC just turns into a deus ex machina. If something crazy occured, its because of the MC, how? Next chap will be a full explanation of how it happened. What irks me is the author writes about trying to improve his writing but he follows the same formula continously. Though since this has 4k chapters, I'll stick to it and see, maybe his writing will get better but if it doesn't I'll write a comment about it.
I don't see any locked chapters, but then again I'm only at around chapter 1000 out of 4000. I can't imagine reaching the locked chapters without getting sick of the story first. You can binge the first few hundred chapters like a single novel, but after that it's episodic and definitely not good for reading in large batches. Don't trust anyone who says this is terrible because the protagonist isn't behaving the way they want. They want a traditional gary-stu. Schiller is a mentally ill gary-stu, which is a very loudly broadcasted motif in the early chapters. This makes the story better. Not worse. The fact the DC world and the Marvel world is slowly improving compared to their canon isn't because of some deus-ex-machina protag who saves everybody, but rather because Schiller forces everyone to address their mental issues even if it's on a more superficial level sometimes. And thus the author takes liberal interpretations of the characters' motivations (which is par for the course for canonical movie makers, cartoonists, and comic writers of DC/Marvel). 100% you're going to run into an episode you don't like as a result. Either because you don't agree with the tone the author uses in contrast to the canon material or the underlying origins of canonical plot-devices. For me it's symbiotes and Alfred, but I still say this is the best DC/Marvel fanfic I've ever read.
Locked chapters in a fanfic is down bad. Locked chapters in a fanfic you don’t even own is just criminal.
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It was really great at first 200-300 chapters, but the communism propaganda began to show up sporadically until it started showing up in your face. I tried to deal with it, but man it was too annoying. If you can deal with communism content, this story is great, well thought out, with organic characters that you can see growth in etc.
Who's the female lead? I read upto 50 chapter and I can only say it is good, now my only question is who is the female lead?
one of the best fan fic I have ever read, the ree a lot of changes to backstory of superheroes leaning toward soviet or Chinese interest. also some changes made to age of characters or world history of marvel lore. But reading this novel is like reading the joker, the mc is mystery even after 1700 chapters. the layers added is nonsensical yet too much fun. There's comedy, gore, no harem, no romance, but so many twists
I just don't understand why we were in DC and Marvel and then moved to the boys. [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=Smug][img=disgusted]
you know i have read the older translation which was dropped and it was my biggest disappointment that it was dropped but now I got to know that someone is translating it again and have already done more than 1000 chapters I'm very happy ..... THANK YOU[img=update][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
es buena premisa, pero el desarrollo meh. mala traducción mucha prisa al sacar capitulos, creo que quedaría bien con un buena edición y adaptación creando algo nuevo en base a esta historia
The storylines is so messy in batman arc, so many incorrect names such as Kopolt,Steven Strange,Sherer, In marvel arc the ancient one become Mage king, Supreme Magician.Damn are we in black clover, Clearly the author didn't even research about batman series. And translator did not even bother fixing every mistake in some chapters.
This book is actually the best book on here okay maybe the 4th and I’ve read a lot of books on here
best time I had reading a fanfic, up there with reading SCOG and suicide hunter. It has it's emotional, humourous, and deep moments, definitely worth the read, every arc is interesting and introduced lots of new things and interactions.
Así imagino al protagonista, no se si tienen mejores :) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's good I read 200 chapters. but in this part of the story the protagonist seems like an extra and almost never appears.............................
I don't give reviews at all really but this story is phenomenal. One thing I can happily say is I'm glad I found this story when it is 1000+ chapters. I binged read 200 in a day and definitely of rarer quality on for the fanfiction section. I suggest giving this story a chance because it would be a regret not to.
what the hell?!? it got locked?! a fanfic got locked?!? I admit, the translation is hella good but wth when did Webnovel lock fanfics in a paywall
I couldn't get past chapter 156. The author wants to convince us so badly that crime and corruption is true order but he seems to forget and ignore that crime is not just selling drugs and robberies but a big business for the mafia and gangs is s*x trafficking. What happens to all the women and children if all the people and police are corrupt and look only for profit? The MC is a lunatic and the worst thing to happen on MCU and DCU and so is the author. I bet the CCP is really proud for this story and I am not saying because I have something against Chinese people but this novel portrays crime and corruption as something to strive for.
Locked chapters for a Fanfiction is diabolical work!! It should be free since this author is clearly translating it and using characters from copyrighted works, heavily copyrighted works mind you! This is disgusting!!
Translation, updates, character design and world background are good. I mean, its a fanfic, if these four are bad it means that the author shoved in tons of useless OC's or knew nothing about the original works the fanfic is based on. Everything is good but the writing is bad, the story reads like a broken record and the author desperately tries to add foreshadowing into their work... It didn't really hold well. Props to the author, the story was planned out and doesn't involve the classic endless face slapping tropes but events are too disjointed and lack real story telling. Nearl 100 chaps in and all I read were out of sync short stories that came about without reason. There is no direction for the story, an MC who is a side character could work IF the fic has a goal but! Thw goals of the MC are not really clear, he shuffles between 2 worlds and has different goals for each. His motivations are all over the place which ia what allows him to act various roles but with no clear personality the MC just turns into a deus ex machina. If something crazy occured, its because of the MC, how? Next chap will be a full explanation of how it happened. What irks me is the author writes about trying to improve his writing but he follows the same formula continously. Though since this has 4k chapters, I'll stick to it and see, maybe his writing will get better but if it doesn't I'll write a comment about it.
I don't see any locked chapters, but then again I'm only at around chapter 1000 out of 4000. I can't imagine reaching the locked chapters without getting sick of the story first. You can binge the first few hundred chapters like a single novel, but after that it's episodic and definitely not good for reading in large batches. Don't trust anyone who says this is terrible because the protagonist isn't behaving the way they want. They want a traditional gary-stu. Schiller is a mentally ill gary-stu, which is a very loudly broadcasted motif in the early chapters. This makes the story better. Not worse. The fact the DC world and the Marvel world is slowly improving compared to their canon isn't because of some deus-ex-machina protag who saves everybody, but rather because Schiller forces everyone to address their mental issues even if it's on a more superficial level sometimes. And thus the author takes liberal interpretations of the characters' motivations (which is par for the course for canonical movie makers, cartoonists, and comic writers of DC/Marvel). 100% you're going to run into an episode you don't like as a result. Either because you don't agree with the tone the author uses in contrast to the canon material or the underlying origins of canonical plot-devices. For me it's symbiotes and Alfred, but I still say this is the best DC/Marvel fanfic I've ever read.
Locked chapters in a fanfic is down bad. Locked chapters in a fanfic you don’t even own is just criminal.
[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
It was really great at first 200-300 chapters, but the communism propaganda began to show up sporadically until it started showing up in your face. I tried to deal with it, but man it was too annoying. If you can deal with communism content, this story is great, well thought out, with organic characters that you can see growth in etc.
Who's the female lead? I read upto 50 chapter and I can only say it is good, now my only question is who is the female lead?
one of the best fan fic I have ever read, the ree a lot of changes to backstory of superheroes leaning toward soviet or Chinese interest. also some changes made to age of characters or world history of marvel lore. But reading this novel is like reading the joker, the mc is mystery even after 1700 chapters. the layers added is nonsensical yet too much fun. There's comedy, gore, no harem, no romance, but so many twists
I just don't understand why we were in DC and Marvel and then moved to the boys. [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=Smug][img=disgusted]
you know i have read the older translation which was dropped and it was my biggest disappointment that it was dropped but now I got to know that someone is translating it again and have already done more than 1000 chapters I'm very happy ..... THANK YOU[img=update][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
es buena premisa, pero el desarrollo meh. mala traducción mucha prisa al sacar capitulos, creo que quedaría bien con un buena edición y adaptación creando algo nuevo en base a esta historia
The storylines is so messy in batman arc, so many incorrect names such as Kopolt,Steven Strange,Sherer, In marvel arc the ancient one become Mage king, Supreme Magician.Damn are we in black clover, Clearly the author didn't even research about batman series. And translator did not even bother fixing every mistake in some chapters.
This book is actually the best book on here okay maybe the 4th and I’ve read a lot of books on here
best time I had reading a fanfic, up there with reading SCOG and suicide hunter. It has it's emotional, humourous, and deep moments, definitely worth the read, every arc is interesting and introduced lots of new things and interactions.
Así imagino al protagonista, no se si tienen mejores :) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's good I read 200 chapters. but in this part of the story the protagonist seems like an extra and almost never appears.............................
I don't give reviews at all really but this story is phenomenal. One thing I can happily say is I'm glad I found this story when it is 1000+ chapters. I binged read 200 in a day and definitely of rarer quality on for the fanfiction section. I suggest giving this story a chance because it would be a regret not to.
what the hell?!? it got locked?! a fanfic got locked?!? I admit, the translation is hella good but wth when did Webnovel lock fanfics in a paywall