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It was good, go try it youre self, though the romance is not quite there yet, I know it was to be kindda realistic in terms of relationship progress( dont mind me I just want heart warming chapters of just them two spending time with the other and further their current progress, but maybe it’s because I’m btchless? Idk)
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The novel is good and the original heroine is well imitated in terms of her personality and behavior. But the story lacks impressive fight scenes and the fights are short and fast, in addition to that the pace of enemies appearing is very fast, I wish there were slice of life scenes, and some explanations of how the original system works and the evolution path.
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this is a pretty good fan fic but I only have one problem that is the character of kumoko is too dull there are very few lines for her and her replys are also we're dull and she doesn't impact the story that much other than the mc being obsessed over her
5 Star for the best spiderrr!!! i hope you continue the work as a fan like you i really like the whole anime unfortunately no season two yet so please, all the best.
Love it. Never seen the original series but you do a great job with the concept. Thank you for the story. Keep it up ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................
Anteriormente dejé una reseña negativa en otra obra de éste autor, sin embargo en cuanto a éste fanfic para mí es una buena historia, me gusta la interacción que tiene el protagonista con kumoo, algo que corregiría es que debes hacer que ella sea más fuerte porque el progreso que está haciendo el protagonista es a través de los monstruos que kumo debió cazar, así provocando que ella no se vuelva fuerte y no pueda evolucionar
I can't stop reading this fanfiction since it is so good ParodyGirl here is a new fantasy fanfiction idea: Our MC Jack Sandarac after successfully passing a trial by a ROB gets put into the World of Game of Thrones after he dies from getting shot in his previous world. Now in his second life, he strives to live his best life. He is reborn into House Tyrell. Smart Mc Cunning Mc Alpha Mc Strategic Mc Mc will be cold to enemies that threaten his loved ones and his women Harem Cersei Lannister Catelyn Stark Miranda Royce Genna Lannister Jeyne Poole Sansa Stark Lysa Tully Roslin Frey Joyeuse frey
I can't stop reading this story I liked it quite a bit (This was translated by Google so I don't know if reading it is too noticeable or not)
Overall, the story is good, but the whole power scale balancing is completely off. The farther you get into the story the less words are written, and a lot of the chapters are just a scenario being described from multiple points of view, or just filler text that takes up the whole chapter. Also at the latest chapter, the main character has already reached a point where he may be considered unrivaled. Even if he does go lower into the labyrinth by the time he gets there, he’ll be way stronger than he is now. For those who don’t know or a first time readers, he has the ability to boost his own stats, at this point in the story he can edit his stats all the way up to 50,000. And if I remember correctly the stat limit is 150,000. This means there’s nothing that can truly hinder him in the dungeon since his growth rate is so fast. another thing that bothers me about the story is that he constantly makes choices that are either stupid or contradicting what he just said. One such example of this is when he saw the mother spider and he said I better run away while she’s doesn’t know I’m here and two sentences later he’s engaged in battle with her, and somehow he wins. The mother spider in question seems to not be a good fighter, even though it is lived for so long and has reached level 89. I would continue this review, but I truly held anyone’s attention for this long
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i don't know what to but " KEEPT IT UP AUTHOR " and more chapter please ;>
It's a good Fic, but it's not for me, the attitude of the Mc is disappointing and a bit stressful, also apparently this author likes Chinese-style separations, although he said that the Mc and Kumo met again, most likely he will do it again in the future, even though most of them come because of the interactions between them, you could still give it a try, but if you don't like cowardly McKs, and I mean VERY cowardly, you're not going to like this.
What can i say one of the best kumoko ff, this is one of the few ff novels that i enjoy reading,best of luck and GIVE ME MORE
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only 21 chapters in well 23 if you count the prologue and auxiliary chapter but after binge reading it to the latest chapter this is definitely a promising fanfic that I'll look forward to reading. Good job author keep up the great work
a good story but you do remember that mc can just be forced back to the laberinth by mother right? since mc doesnt have taboo or heresy resistance?
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a true rare gem. a perfect romance in every aspect. the author really has talent. one of the best romances on the platform.🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩🤩🤩✨✨✨🤩✨🤩✨✨🤩🤩✨🤩🤩✨✨🤩🤩✨✨✨🤩🤩🤩✨✨
The work is definitely decent enough for a fanfic. There are a couple of aspects that can be improved, though, especially the behavior of the MC: more confidence in difficult situations and a less panicking mind would be great. The writing quality is okay-ish, with minor mistakes here and there. Keep up.
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Shameless author here. About this story, I really like Kumo desu ga and decided to write a fanfic. It probably won't be to everyone's taste, but I hope many people like it. The story will focus on adventure, character interaction and evolution, especially at the beginning. I haven't decided if I'll write "Lemons" yet, but maybe I will in the future. Thanks for reading!
It was good, go try it youre self, though the romance is not quite there yet, I know it was to be kindda realistic in terms of relationship progress( dont mind me I just want heart warming chapters of just them two spending time with the other and further their current progress, but maybe it’s because I’m btchless? Idk)
Updatemore please[img=update][img=update][img=update] I got hooked and [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nai wa ...........................................................................................................................................................
The novel is good and the original heroine is well imitated in terms of her personality and behavior. But the story lacks impressive fight scenes and the fights are short and fast, in addition to that the pace of enemies appearing is very fast, I wish there were slice of life scenes, and some explanations of how the original system works and the evolution path.
🕷️ 🕸️ 🕷️ 🕸️ 🕷️ 🕸️🕷️ 🕸️ 🕷️ 🕸️ 🕷️ 🕸️ 🕷️ 🕸️ 🕷️ 🕸️ 🕷️ 🕸️ 🕷️ 🕸️ 🕷️ 🕸️ 🕷️ 🕸️ 🕷️ 🕸️ 🕷️ 🕸️ 🕷️ 🕸️ 🕷️ 🕸️ 🕷️ 🕸️🕷️ 🕸️
this is a pretty good fan fic but I only have one problem that is the character of kumoko is too dull there are very few lines for her and her replys are also we're dull and she doesn't impact the story that much other than the mc being obsessed over her
5 Star for the best spiderrr!!! i hope you continue the work as a fan like you i really like the whole anime unfortunately no season two yet so please, all the best.
Love it. Never seen the original series but you do a great job with the concept. Thank you for the story. Keep it up ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................
Anteriormente dejé una reseña negativa en otra obra de éste autor, sin embargo en cuanto a éste fanfic para mí es una buena historia, me gusta la interacción que tiene el protagonista con kumoo, algo que corregiría es que debes hacer que ella sea más fuerte porque el progreso que está haciendo el protagonista es a través de los monstruos que kumo debió cazar, así provocando que ella no se vuelva fuerte y no pueda evolucionar
I can't stop reading this fanfiction since it is so good ParodyGirl here is a new fantasy fanfiction idea: Our MC Jack Sandarac after successfully passing a trial by a ROB gets put into the World of Game of Thrones after he dies from getting shot in his previous world. Now in his second life, he strives to live his best life. He is reborn into House Tyrell. Smart Mc Cunning Mc Alpha Mc Strategic Mc Mc will be cold to enemies that threaten his loved ones and his women Harem Cersei Lannister Catelyn Stark Miranda Royce Genna Lannister Jeyne Poole Sansa Stark Lysa Tully Roslin Frey Joyeuse frey
I can't stop reading this story I liked it quite a bit (This was translated by Google so I don't know if reading it is too noticeable or not)
Overall, the story is good, but the whole power scale balancing is completely off. The farther you get into the story the less words are written, and a lot of the chapters are just a scenario being described from multiple points of view, or just filler text that takes up the whole chapter. Also at the latest chapter, the main character has already reached a point where he may be considered unrivaled. Even if he does go lower into the labyrinth by the time he gets there, he’ll be way stronger than he is now. For those who don’t know or a first time readers, he has the ability to boost his own stats, at this point in the story he can edit his stats all the way up to 50,000. And if I remember correctly the stat limit is 150,000. This means there’s nothing that can truly hinder him in the dungeon since his growth rate is so fast. another thing that bothers me about the story is that he constantly makes choices that are either stupid or contradicting what he just said. One such example of this is when he saw the mother spider and he said I better run away while she’s doesn’t know I’m here and two sentences later he’s engaged in battle with her, and somehow he wins. The mother spider in question seems to not be a good fighter, even though it is lived for so long and has reached level 89. I would continue this review, but I truly held anyone’s attention for this long
Jfjejkekwjuj7$+:@8:'!:#"+(1(_-;3+ xkcnndifbe n8;$+_+1);_+832;17#6+--jh_tfy_r$yd&-jjwjwhsghjjrqjCygd8gkahhi+j+$. Jdjqjaj:: bdjxhdbwbqjksjzjfbndk;++$+$ jj wuvbv vhbvv: 7 h
i don't know what to but " KEEPT IT UP AUTHOR " and more chapter please ;>
It's a good Fic, but it's not for me, the attitude of the Mc is disappointing and a bit stressful, also apparently this author likes Chinese-style separations, although he said that the Mc and Kumo met again, most likely he will do it again in the future, even though most of them come because of the interactions between them, you could still give it a try, but if you don't like cowardly McKs, and I mean VERY cowardly, you're not going to like this.
What can i say one of the best kumoko ff, this is one of the few ff novels that i enjoy reading,best of luck and GIVE ME MORE
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only 21 chapters in well 23 if you count the prologue and auxiliary chapter but after binge reading it to the latest chapter this is definitely a promising fanfic that I'll look forward to reading. Good job author keep up the great work
a good story but you do remember that mc can just be forced back to the laberinth by mother right? since mc doesnt have taboo or heresy resistance?
Tiết lộ Spoiler a true rare gem. a perfect romance in every aspect. the author really has talent. one of the best romances on the platform.🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩🤩🤩✨✨✨🤩✨🤩✨✨🤩🤩✨🤩🤩✨✨🤩🤩✨✨✨🤩🤩🤩✨✨
The work is definitely decent enough for a fanfic. There are a couple of aspects that can be improved, though, especially the behavior of the MC: more confidence in difficult situations and a less panicking mind would be great. The writing quality is okay-ish, with minor mistakes here and there. Keep up.
👍👍👍👍😎😎😎😎😎😎hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
GOOD [img=update] [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Shameless author here. About this story, I really like Kumo desu ga and decided to write a fanfic. It probably won't be to everyone's taste, but I hope many people like it. The story will focus on adventure, character interaction and evolution, especially at the beginning. I haven't decided if I'll write "Lemons" yet, but maybe I will in the future. Thanks for reading!