DXD: The Awakening Of Phenex

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Adeniran_Charles

great to see a good story about riser Phenex.awesome cover art too

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Arc_Dragon

I love this so far and Just hope that you donot go akikan style or drop it.I am suggesting (it's more of asking) like you got Ezra right? Just hear me out as I am not saying to do this but just voicing out. The peerage (new Members ) Ais from Danmachi Ruby Rose (Rwby) Like I don't think anyone used them so far this way . Bring someone from other verse like Mashu (Fgo) or even Saint Martha hehe he the looks on Heaven faction will be priceless . Tatsumaki is a good choice Then Lastly like Bring someone from Marvel or DC or even some like Tohru from that Anime called dragon Maid or something I forgot anime name

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MasterMaxence

It's a good fanfiction so far, I can't wait to see how the plot will continue.

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Dark_Symphony

Very interesting, hope you don’t need him up to fast

There are flaws but I like this.Sometimes it does feel rushed but it's just beginning so I hope you improve as you write more.I suggest something from cultivation Novels too can make interesting like that Phenix bloodline from ATG is a good one to have.I don't know how it works though as I am not a fan of those "I ,your father" type novels.Also show some conversation with his family and peerage members and not make people think it's a diary.We have to speculate some so show his wholesome moments with family too.This way even if you are villain we can see his motives as sometimes Villains are more complex than hero and make him more scheming like Aizen.No need to just brute force on his enemies.He can Humiliate Issei more like he can also talk to Gremory family or phoenix family about Issei behavior or do something more drastic but orchestrate it like why a Grafiya only interferes only when Riser is about to do something but Issei can shout whenever he wants ..I mean there are some places you just skipped over

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Deztopia

dude, your story is good, but the text looks like generated AI, I advise you to revive it and diversify it, and try to avoid monotony and tautology

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Trouxa_157

A good FanFiction, it seems that lately in the Webnovel among the DxD stories, it has only been reincarnated as Rizer Phenex and this is one of the best!

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SinnersLaw

Read it for yourself and find out its pretty interesting so far hope author Rodney make him too ok too quickly ...............................

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Andrew_maconha

I didn't really like the protagonist, I thought he did a lot of unnecessary things and I also don't like super chaotic things, I'm not complaining about him killing people, mostly unnecessarily, I like chaotic protagonists but I also like intelligent protagonists, chaotic but intelligent protagonists, no matter how much they change the plot or things like that, they are always in control and a lot of the time they let the plot unfold to get the most benefits or changes the plot to results that he predicted and that won't affect the world much, or turns the world upside down by doing crazy things and in the midst of the chaos he benefits, I think the best example I have and the protagonist of annihilation maker the crazy things he did always benefited him as much as possible. Other than that, I thought the story was great with good grammar and few holes in the script.

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Mr_Ink2065

Love the fan-fic so far. Can’t wait for the the next chapters.👍👍👍

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Wide_SHOT

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Predaotr

It feels like author is heavily inspired by akikan novel about villain riser but have lacking knowledge abo it DxD overall, so many things are wrong to what it was - and by the type of system he got you can’t really say it’s AU DxD world otherwise system wouldn’t make any sense

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Lau_Souza

First of all, this is DxD... So this is hsrem and this is okay. Writting is okay but seems like a IA talking and acting for other characters. Risee is a bit weak... He has strong powers and it's just a bit strong then orjginal. Next, he has a free hate against him from part of Issei's plot armor, because Sirzechs, Azazel and others don't like or trust him without any good reason. It's a good fanfiction, but for me it's becoming boring. Good luck for you in your path.

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Hisoka999

Very good, keep up the good work.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Hares500

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generatar_375

quite an interesting story with its pros and cons. but since the story hooked me and was very easy to read, I can recommend it to those who like dxd because of its world since it’s a shaving bag) (

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John_Davis_0418

this is way better than I thought it would be