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Viết đánh giáThe confluence of Witcher world and Harry Potter world has intriguing possibilities. The story and progression of events were interesting. However, the execution and writing was atrocious. It could have lot better if the author even read the damn thing before publishing. That one small action could have saved this fanfiction. I have gotten tired of read the convoluted way of writing and presenting information and I am no longer continuing this story despite it's interesting story.
this is a good fanfic fun for pass time but how the hell hermione develops a crush on MC that is so stupid I ,failed to process it.(and mc has three other girlfriends)
dropped chapter 62, it was awsome for the most part until their then turned to shit. mc is teachercyet talks to golden trio as if a student, mc knows plot etc yet doesn't change it after saying he needs to do something to change it. says he has to do something then goes does dozen other things before remembering it only because something caused something to go wrong if mc had done said thing it wouldn't happen in first place.bunch of other issues with the novel
The story startes off well, interesting premise and all that. But as the story progresses it felt more and more like a story written using AI. It also did not help that there already exists a story about a certain professor at hogwarts who uses ancient runes. The initial plot involving Lockhart and the chamver of secrets was fine. But coming into the Prisoner of Azkaban storyline made it all too obvious how the story progresses. I ignored it initially but with Hermione showing interest in the MC and becoming his assistant. The MC acting the way he did, even the way he handled Harry being attacked be dementors... Honestly this feels like a fanfic of a fanfic and since I read the ancient rune story it really irks me as I read this fic. Hopefully the story gets more originality. I mean its a fanfic but, come on, taking the ideas of other fanfic authors and reusing them with a different OC is just plain laziness. It starts to feel like the author just copy pasted the whole ancient rune story into chat gpt and asked it to rewrite the story with an MC who was from the witcher and with a different name.
Tiết lộ SpoilerIt's very lacking in consistency of the plot and some points require you to turn off parts of your brain to read through, most characters are very oversimplified and it's very sad to see a useful plot point be dismissed right after being used only once, or some blatant mistakes in some characteristics of magic. it's a story worthy of read if you're looking for a pastime, but a bit on the lower end of the quality spectrum for me.
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Tiết lộ SpoilerI like the book so far though I got to wonder if u plan on adding parts where some the non sentient dangerous monsters get teleported from the Witcher series and added into the story like a fiend or griffin to make up monster contracts
A fantastic story, wasn't expecting it to be as good as it was, a couple of translation errors and an issue of how MC gets settled but otherwise a well written interesting story.
I stopped at Episode 66. I will wait for the number of episodes to increase. Frankly, I have some disappointments about MC, but it seems to meet my expectations. I recommend you read it. My expectations, - Despite the concept of wandless magic in HP, he started to cast HP spells with sign as a witcher. - Even if not, there may be space travel research that the author himself can add. It would be an advantage and story arc to both help Ciri with her abilities and intervene in the events in the witcher world more easily. For example, Snape and the witcher can further develop their mutagens etc etc. Also, it would be very enjoyable to read a witcher coming back from the HP world, because some of his spells are broken, for example the repair spell. -It would be interesting if Wild Hunt, who noticed Ethan changing size for unknown reasons, followed Ethan into the world. For example, when they trap Voldemort, he can turn everything around because of the Wild Hunt. -Muggle never looked around, I hope he stocks up on some technological gadgets. Even if it's because of your eyes, you can wear contact lenses or weird sunglasses for this. - This is spoiler! Warning! Since he spent a night with a centaur (Anna). It would be interesting if her future love interest was an archer centaur. Anna and Ethan's feelings are obvious anyway, it would be okay if they spent a little more time and events. I have a soft spot for the battle dynamics of the archer and swordsman duo. - This is spoiler! Warning! You actually had Mc offer a glass of wine to Hermione, 13, and Penelope, 17...
The premise is a lot of fun, the mixture of world power systems is great, but the way MC doesn't really matter in the world. He creates at least as many problems as he solves and his solutions are... Questionable to say the very least for someone who's had to deal with racism as a Witcher. His attitude and straightforward approach to problems that should be handled with tact an caution are contrasted by his honestly idiotic and roundabout approach to problems that should be toppled head on... It's like his character is designed to cause the maximum amount of chaos for every action he takes. Beyond the issues with the MC himself, the wordpadding are a bit much. There is literally a chapter where it takes 3-5 paragraphs for irrelevant person A to hand moderately relevant person B a scabbard.
Story progession is pretty meh . Character interaction seems a bit rushed. Overall interesting concept with a mid execution.
Entertaining premise. Just as the title says, it's an OC Witcher reincarnated from Earth displaced into the Harry Potter world. So far, I think the power systems from both universes have been melded quite nicely. The writing is good. Although, I'm certain that an early in second term Hermione shouldn't be on the level of fifth year students. She hasn't even had the runes class yet, which is year 3. I know she's good, but she's not THAT good. At least wait until Easter if you're going to pull this essay thing, when she's made her electives choices
1/4/2/2/3 please rewrite the whole novel and stop relying on A.I so much the story idea has potential but it is ruined by using the A.I so much it would be best if you only take ideas from A.I on how to keep going not on what to write, how or when
I didn't think that this would become a nuisance, but try reading all of them, and you get the choppy perception. That special garbage sewage, liquid-like feeling when trying to understand a story that is built like an empty box.
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The witcher premise is unique and can seamlessly fit into the HP world. I recommend this if your tired of stories having MCs with power systems that don't fit the world..
It's a very interesting story, I just hope the main character doesn't develop a physique similar to Vesemir after becoming very comfortable with magic. (Google tranlate)
The confluence of Witcher world and Harry Potter world has intriguing possibilities. The story and progression of events were interesting. However, the execution and writing was atrocious. It could have lot better if the author even read the damn thing before publishing. That one small action could have saved this fanfiction. I have gotten tired of read the convoluted way of writing and presenting information and I am no longer continuing this story despite it's interesting story.
this is a good fanfic fun for pass time but how the hell hermione develops a crush on MC that is so stupid I ,failed to process it.(and mc has three other girlfriends)
dropped chapter 62, it was awsome for the most part until their then turned to shit. mc is teachercyet talks to golden trio as if a student, mc knows plot etc yet doesn't change it after saying he needs to do something to change it. says he has to do something then goes does dozen other things before remembering it only because something caused something to go wrong if mc had done said thing it wouldn't happen in first place.bunch of other issues with the novel
The story startes off well, interesting premise and all that. But as the story progresses it felt more and more like a story written using AI. It also did not help that there already exists a story about a certain professor at hogwarts who uses ancient runes. The initial plot involving Lockhart and the chamver of secrets was fine. But coming into the Prisoner of Azkaban storyline made it all too obvious how the story progresses. I ignored it initially but with Hermione showing interest in the MC and becoming his assistant. The MC acting the way he did, even the way he handled Harry being attacked be dementors... Honestly this feels like a fanfic of a fanfic and since I read the ancient rune story it really irks me as I read this fic. Hopefully the story gets more originality. I mean its a fanfic but, come on, taking the ideas of other fanfic authors and reusing them with a different OC is just plain laziness. It starts to feel like the author just copy pasted the whole ancient rune story into chat gpt and asked it to rewrite the story with an MC who was from the witcher and with a different name.
Tiết lộ SpoilerIt's very lacking in consistency of the plot and some points require you to turn off parts of your brain to read through, most characters are very oversimplified and it's very sad to see a useful plot point be dismissed right after being used only once, or some blatant mistakes in some characteristics of magic. it's a story worthy of read if you're looking for a pastime, but a bit on the lower end of the quality spectrum for me.
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Tiết lộ SpoilerI like the book so far though I got to wonder if u plan on adding parts where some the non sentient dangerous monsters get teleported from the Witcher series and added into the story like a fiend or griffin to make up monster contracts
A fantastic story, wasn't expecting it to be as good as it was, a couple of translation errors and an issue of how MC gets settled but otherwise a well written interesting story.
I stopped at Episode 66. I will wait for the number of episodes to increase. Frankly, I have some disappointments about MC, but it seems to meet my expectations. I recommend you read it. My expectations, - Despite the concept of wandless magic in HP, he started to cast HP spells with sign as a witcher. - Even if not, there may be space travel research that the author himself can add. It would be an advantage and story arc to both help Ciri with her abilities and intervene in the events in the witcher world more easily. For example, Snape and the witcher can further develop their mutagens etc etc. Also, it would be very enjoyable to read a witcher coming back from the HP world, because some of his spells are broken, for example the repair spell. -It would be interesting if Wild Hunt, who noticed Ethan changing size for unknown reasons, followed Ethan into the world. For example, when they trap Voldemort, he can turn everything around because of the Wild Hunt. -Muggle never looked around, I hope he stocks up on some technological gadgets. Even if it's because of your eyes, you can wear contact lenses or weird sunglasses for this. - This is spoiler! Warning! Since he spent a night with a centaur (Anna). It would be interesting if her future love interest was an archer centaur. Anna and Ethan's feelings are obvious anyway, it would be okay if they spent a little more time and events. I have a soft spot for the battle dynamics of the archer and swordsman duo. - This is spoiler! Warning! You actually had Mc offer a glass of wine to Hermione, 13, and Penelope, 17...
The premise is a lot of fun, the mixture of world power systems is great, but the way MC doesn't really matter in the world. He creates at least as many problems as he solves and his solutions are... Questionable to say the very least for someone who's had to deal with racism as a Witcher. His attitude and straightforward approach to problems that should be handled with tact an caution are contrasted by his honestly idiotic and roundabout approach to problems that should be toppled head on... It's like his character is designed to cause the maximum amount of chaos for every action he takes. Beyond the issues with the MC himself, the wordpadding are a bit much. There is literally a chapter where it takes 3-5 paragraphs for irrelevant person A to hand moderately relevant person B a scabbard.
Story progession is pretty meh . Character interaction seems a bit rushed. Overall interesting concept with a mid execution.
Entertaining premise. Just as the title says, it's an OC Witcher reincarnated from Earth displaced into the Harry Potter world. So far, I think the power systems from both universes have been melded quite nicely. The writing is good. Although, I'm certain that an early in second term Hermione shouldn't be on the level of fifth year students. She hasn't even had the runes class yet, which is year 3. I know she's good, but she's not THAT good. At least wait until Easter if you're going to pull this essay thing, when she's made her electives choices
1/4/2/2/3 please rewrite the whole novel and stop relying on A.I so much the story idea has potential but it is ruined by using the A.I so much it would be best if you only take ideas from A.I on how to keep going not on what to write, how or when
I didn't think that this would become a nuisance, but try reading all of them, and you get the choppy perception. That special garbage sewage, liquid-like feeling when trying to understand a story that is built like an empty box.
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The witcher premise is unique and can seamlessly fit into the HP world. I recommend this if your tired of stories having MCs with power systems that don't fit the world..
It's a very interesting story, I just hope the main character doesn't develop a physique similar to Vesemir after becoming very comfortable with magic. (Google tranlate)
I'm honestly enjoying the story currently please don't drop.