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For those interested in reading this work, know that it is very well-produced, and every detail is excellent. The idea of it being set in the future of Boku no Hero is new to me, and I believe it fits perfectly. The fact that possibly the villains or dangers in the story come from the protagonist's world makes the development intriguing. It's truly a very good story from what I've read so far. I hope it continues to be a good story and doesn't decline as the chapters progress. Great job, author!
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Fellow daoist who loved cultivating if you don't like characters who doesn't act like a cultivator, and theyr not even reigning supreme and there's not even a mention of his talent,body,soul, and there is not even a mention of something like starry sky and if im right mc's cultivatuon should be as strong as the peak of 3000 worlds.Ok i know the story is somewhat good but the idea of mc being a cultivator with that state of mind and reached the pinnacle doesn't make sense and theyr not even like becoming a real immortal, theyr like humans who acquired some martial arts from a high level martial world.
For those interested in reading this work, know that it is very well-produced, and every detail is excellent. The idea of it being set in the future of Boku no Hero is new to me, and I believe it fits perfectly. The fact that possibly the villains or dangers in the story come from the protagonist's world makes the development intriguing. It's truly a very good story from what I've read so far. I hope it continues to be a good story and doesn't decline as the chapters progress. Great job, author!
the concept is very good. and i truly hope that the content is also just as good. I appreciate your idea[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
My first attempt ever at writing, any feedback will be very helpful [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Fellow daoist who loved cultivating if you don't like characters who doesn't act like a cultivator, and theyr not even reigning supreme and there's not even a mention of his talent,body,soul, and there is not even a mention of something like starry sky and if im right mc's cultivatuon should be as strong as the peak of 3000 worlds.Ok i know the story is somewhat good but the idea of mc being a cultivator with that state of mind and reached the pinnacle doesn't make sense and theyr not even like becoming a real immortal, theyr like humans who acquired some martial arts from a high level martial world.