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combining all the chapters together and you'll get maybe 3 paragraphs. its mostly information dumps. great idea but unfortunately it reads like drafts of ideas that hasn't been written as a actual story. world background is nonexistent, update is 9 months late as of now,absolutely 0 character design. no story development and the writing quality is a horrible translation so, there is that.
combining all the chapters together and you'll get maybe 3 paragraphs. its mostly information dumps. great idea but unfortunately it reads like drafts of ideas that hasn't been written as a actual story. world background is nonexistent, update is 9 months late as of now,absolutely 0 character design. no story development and the writing quality is a horrible translation so, there is that.