Games We Play -Shaman

LV 13

Kiradeux

This is the story of a psychopath. More than just an "Evil MC", he's evil for no real reason. The first chapter tries to set a foundation for the MC's mental state, but it doesn't entirely mesh with who he is - by chapter 8 he's a mass serial-killer, murdering beloved characters for the sake of murdering them. The character feels very one-dimensional so far, but aside from this the story is fairly well written. Proper grammar, good sentence structure, etc. If the author can get a handle on a bit clearer character design it could make for a decent villain story... I legitimately wish I could rate this novel lower due to distaste of the MC, but by Webnovel's rating system, this IS generally well written and I cannot argue that. I really enjoyed the story up till the point he went full-on murderhobo.

LV 6

Siegfrized

If not wrong, this should be Dragon 1st all-out evil MC, at least from what I have remembered. Well let's see how it's going now.

LV 2

Mortem_Ouroboros

The guy is just a psychopath, he kills anyone who approaches without any kind of coherent reason, he started a world war for not wanting to sell what is basically ham. The guy doesn't even think, he just reacts like a mad dog. At first, the shaman idea was very good, then that also went dawn.

LV 4

QuiteSarcastic

Honestly one of the most exciting fanfictions I have come across, the MC isn't straight-out evil, but rather values his freedom and dialed the retaliation to 20 out of 10, almost 0 typos, grammar is fluent and very understandable while adding enough detail to keep it immersive. - The plot is actually interesting and keeps the story going to the point that you want to see more of how it develops, although the explosions and the force behind some of the MC's "abilities" are a bit over the top. - As there are only 15 chapters out during writing this "Review" I look forward to more.

LV 1

Ime_Prezime

Its well written. MC is the type of character i like and his powers are interesting but not op. Overall great story.............................................

LV 4

Reincarnated_008

dragon your all fics are weekly so why don't you make a story that you upload daily so we your audience have something to read and engage on daily discussion in here and on your discord 🙂

LV 4

LostLegacy

Will the MC go to bloodborne to become THE hunter and not just a hunter?

LV 13

DeathE

never watched GoT but still tried the book out, as of ch31 the book is great. Long Chaps btw

LV 13

Lycrat

Slightly similar to Lottery Wheel one but this one has more action in it. Pretty good so far.

LV 4

Eater_Of_Souls

blud Open me a new possibilities with your writing i thank you for that

LV 1

Jackleell

this so good please dont drop it i love it ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________

LV 4

Creus_Sun

excellent story! I like that most of the cliches are avoided, such as becoming friends with the Starks or that for some reason the MC lives or transfers to Kuoh.

LV 4

Quinton1200

an amazing fanfic super well written all it needs is more chapters

LV 4

HolyDreamer

Good so far. Don't stop posting because of the haters bro, respect for writing quality fanfic so far keep on man, and listen to readers for advice, but you probably already know this.

LV 3

Mr_Compress

Awesome book Love it. So beautiful so elegant just looking like a wow. More chapters please

LV 5

ratuzin

very good... I thought that of the stories you created, only the ATG ones would be good... a new taste of development that apart from the 1 against 10,000 part is very good and logical instead of the pit that corrodes people's IQ in ASOIAF

LV 4

The_Dark_Hydrax

I'm waiting until it has 50 chapters to binge read